Reviews For Family Ties
Reviewer: Divess
Date: 10/29/11 17:41
Chapter: Chapter 21 - Facing up to Summer

OK

Reviewer: Divess
Date: 10/29/11 17:31
Chapter: Chapter 20 - The Tale of the Ministry Marauders

One Harry is enough. Dean being rude to Dumbeldore rings very false. How dare he. Enough with the freaking students treating the headmaster incorrectly.

Reviewer: Divess
Date: 10/29/11 17:25
Chapter: Chapter 19 - Family Ties

death penalty in the magical world...doesn't sit right. Isn't a dementors kiss what punishment is all about? Probably feasible that Dumbeldore remained in his office but that would mean he sat there and let Minerva almost be killed without doing a thing. Not likely.

Reviewer: Divess
Date: 10/29/11 17:14
Chapter: Chapter 18 - Ordinary Wizarding Levels

does this have something to do with the red headed girl who was there then she was gone? don't know so I'll read on. Glad that Neville has a good friend.

Reviewer: Divess
Date: 10/29/11 17:05
Chapter: Chapter 17 - Ginny Nightingale

So it begins....

Reviewer: Divess
Date: 10/29/11 16:56
Chapter: Chapter 16 - Magical Mischief Making

Mostly JKR stuff....more from you please.

Reviewer: Divess
Date: 10/29/11 16:04
Chapter: Chapter 15 - The Raiding of the DA

Good chapter

Reviewer: Divess
Date: 10/29/11 15:54
Chapter: Chapter 14 - Interviews and Insensitivity

The meshing is great but should have more fleshing out. That was one of the few things wrong with the Harry potter Saga. There were so many characters who could have been fleshed out more.

Reviewer: Divess
Date: 10/29/11 15:46
Chapter: Chapter 13 - Feeling too much

The chapters are just too short.

Reviewer: Divess
Date: 10/29/11 15:43
Chapter: Chapter 12 - Valentine's Slip-Ups

:)

Reviewer: Divess
Date: 10/29/11 15:37
Chapter: Chapter 11 - An Answer to the Problem

Wonderful. I can't stop reading.

Reviewer: Divess
Date: 10/29/11 15:30
Chapter: Chapter 10 - Escape from Azkaban

I think this chapter is the chapter that I waiting for when i stopped reading your story. I am greatly looking forward to reading the rest of the story.

Reviewer: Divess
Date: 10/29/11 15:07
Chapter: Chapter 9 - The Memory Glass

Looking forward to the rest of the school year myself.

Reviewer: Divess
Date: 10/29/11 15:03
Chapter: Chapter 8 - Everything he knew...

Nice.

Reviewer: Divess
Date: 10/29/11 14:56
Chapter: Chapter 7 – Dream Shock

Still interesting.

Reviewer: Divess
Date: 10/29/11 14:44
Chapter: Chapter 6 – Healer School Drop-out

Seamlessly meshed although I find the chapters way too short.

Reviewer: Divess
Date: 10/29/11 14:33
Chapter: Chapter 5 - The Young Auror

Good build up.

Reviewer: Divess
Date: 10/29/11 14:27
Chapter: Chapter 4 - The Mysterious Ravenclaw

We never knew that much about Dean but I am really glad to be finding out.

Reviewer: Divess
Date: 10/29/11 14:22
Chapter: Chapter 3 - The Matter of Ginny Weasley

I do think I may have read this before. Still appealing. Still interesting.

Reviewer: Divess
Date: 10/29/11 14:14
Chapter: Chapter 2 - Jack and Gary

Sorry. I meant the son of Gary Heaton not Jack Webster.

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