Reviews For All's Fair
Reviewer: Ice Nine IV
Date: 07/21/06 0:25
Chapter: All's Fair

Ahhhhhhh Finally.

It's a pity you had to add that bit at the beginning, but whatever, it came out lovely anyhow. Ok, so I always tease you about the pron, but really it's not. But what does come out here is alot of sexual connection and tension. Really there is an almost palpable amount of chemistry between the two of them. They still bicker, but you are careful not to turn Hermione into a 100% bitch, and Ron into a 100% joker. It's a good balance. This is so hilarious, to many great lines to mention them all, but I'll do a few.

"Hermione smiled reluctantly as Ron rolled his eyes. “Stop trying to be clever, you’re crap at it,” he told his friend gruffly, and Harry chuckled."

I love that, cause Harry rarely is witty, and I just like Ron calling him out on it.

“What would Ron do with car keys?” Harry asked, utterly confused. “They’re just for show anyway, aren’t they?”

Hermione looked wrong-footed for a moment, as Ron smiled at Harry. “Good point, Harry, very good point.” He leered a little at Hermione, who pulled a face in return. "

I just thought that was clever, though I'm not clever enough to tell you Why it was clever, it just is.

Anyway this is one the most truly humorous, humor fics I've read. And you still manage to tie it up at the end with a great Awwwww moment, and then the implied sex is just the cherry on top. Great story hun, my second fav of yours.




Author's Response: YEY! Big review from Rob (who now has a face - what cheer!) Thanks a lot hunny! Ach, I can't respond to reviews, I'm crap at it! BUT yey, boob-fic is finally up. So this is good! Thanks for reviewing Hun!!!! And don't stop teasing about the pron, you might just persuade me LMAO. Love ya hun, xxx

Reviewer: nikmoon
Date: 07/20/06 23:41
Chapter: All's Fair

Wonderful. I found it absolutely delightful. Keep up the good work!

Author's Response: Thanks a lot! xxx :D

Reviewer: Yun Harla
Date: 07/20/06 20:46
Chapter: All's Fair

hehehehe that was a VERY FUNNY story or chapter (I didnt see anything saying one-shot so im hoping!) anyway it was great! cant wait for more!! keep it up!

Author's Response: Fraid it is a one shot. But I won't rule out writing more of these little ficlets, I love grown up Trio and this little universe I created with LOST. Thanks for reviewing xxxxxx

Reviewer: miss patil
Date: 07/20/06 20:25
Chapter: All's Fair

Splendid. Simply splendid. (oo, good title for a story.) Lol, that was an awesome story. I like how you play with Ron and Hermione's annoyances. They always fought as teens, and they still fight as adults...only now about Hermione's lost clothing. XD. Holly seems like quite the bitch...will we ever learn what it was she and Ron talked about? Broaden on her. 10/10!! ~SM

Author's Response: Holly was just trying to piss Hermione off. But I'm not rule out going further into that sometime in the future. Thanks for reviewing, I'm so glad you enjoyed it :D xx

Reviewer: connieewing
Date: 07/20/06 18:47
Chapter: All's Fair

ha ha ha ha ha I love this story.

Author's Response: Glad to hear it! :D

Reviewer: Harriet
Date: 07/20/06 17:53
Chapter: All's Fair

Hehe! That was funny! Awesome!

Author's Response: Thank You :D xxx

Reviewer: Ginzig
Date: 07/20/06 17:52
Chapter: All's Fair

Very funny! I loved it! Will you do a H/G follow up as well?

Author's Response: It's definatly a possibility.... Thanks for reviewing xxxx

Reviewer: superstar
Date: 07/20/06 17:40
Chapter: All's Fair

do i hear a sequel? 10/10 by the way ;)

Author's Response: No sequeal as planned, but never say never. Thanks a lot :D xxx

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