I luved this story. I laughed about Sirius. I can picture him clearly in my mind in the Leaky Cauldron Drunk from Fire Whiskey. Every time I read a James/Lily Story, I get close to tears. They are my Favorite characters in Harry Potter. And Apparently my parents knew so.(My name Is Lily James.) Lol.
Awe, that was so sweet. It was so sweet I was about to cry. No, I'm not kidding; I was starting to tear up. That was really good. :D
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww! love it! so sweet! you should write a sequel and have harry call McGonagal 'Minnie McGee', it's just too funny!
its very touching
i liked it a lot
AWWWW! I really liked that story!
Like always, you have written a wonderful story. I think you portrayed Sirius and James very well. This has a great plot; it's something I definitely wouldn't have thought of. Great job!
just right for both of them, perfect!
OMG I LOVED IT!ha ha i love how sirius was drunk and i loved the letters! great job!
great story...i loved it. it was well written, had just enough details, humor, and everything a satory should. i won't lie, you have talent...please wrote more...and you know that you are my favorite author, right? right. also, i wanted to say, i liked the part "savvy?" this is a pirates line, and sirius is definitley a pirate..in a way, and i like minnie mcgee. hilarious. okay, well, write more!
oh wow- that was good! i love your writing especially your james/lily story! im still waiting for more- it's absolutely wonderful! congrats on such an amazing job!
i am literally crying right now you made me cry with your writing its beautiful
it was beautiful
Absolutely brillant! I love the words of advice. You did a great job of interweaving touching words withhumor. Well done.
"(that’s what I call your mum; long story, don’t ask)" I'm interested in that....Hehe. And Harry just happened to pick his dad's locker, of course. Hehe. I loved James's "Numbers" Those were great. "Minnie McGee" Smart Sirius. *shakes head* Idiot. haha. Great story. Loved it much. I hope after this Harry gets Ginny. Muahha. :o) Loved it!
aww! i really liked that, i think you captured the characters really well especially James i like how much more mature he is in this story i know he's in a more serious situation and all but i like it. and what he wrote in the letter was really sweet sirius too but it was obviously and ritfully so more rough around the edges. well done! (::)