oh migosh i really enjoyed and hope u update soon
love everything!!! please continue!!!! wonderful!!
yay Lily!!
cupcakes forever and always,
Lilia
awww, i loved the ending! great story! really wonderful!
that is so sweeeeeeeet!!
this story has come along wonderfully! please update again soon.
So I'm the first to review this chapter... probably because your story was one that I was checking daily for an update.
As always, it was an absolutely beautiful chapter. I loved loved loved the end of it! The characters are going through such crazy and unrealistic times but you came them come across as very realistic and I think that makes them easier to relate to.
So thank you for update... I loved it and can't wait for the next!
O M F G ! ! ! ! please continue!!! o m g!
I'm so shocked I can't type anything else,
please please please PLEASE continue,
Lilia
how sweet!! loving this story!!
Lilia
Oh PLEASE, hurry and write some more! It is such a great story and you are a fantastic writer!
Oh my gosh, I am dying to read the next chapters. Your writing is wonderful, I love it! I can see why they awarded you for your story. Please, please, PLEASE keep writng the story!
loving it! what's with the interludes?
You know what? You're amazing.
Seriously, I love this story so much. Beautifully written. The alternating point of view really adds tension. Your characterization is great, particularly with James and Frank - they jump off the page in a way most authors struggle to achieve, but seems to come quite naturally here.
I'm really enjoying what I've read so far. I hope to see more soon! xx
you are an amazing writer, you really are. I love all the description, and you have the right amount of suspense. Im in love with this story, and I cant wait for more updates!
please,keep going! ;]
love,morgan
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