Reviews For My Deliverance
Reviewer: xoxoZMHxo
Date: 07/24/08 15:33
Chapter: Chapter Eight: Sacrifice, Part I

oh migosh i really enjoyed and hope u update soon

Reviewer: Lilia Natalia
Date: 07/23/08 11:07
Chapter: Chapter Eight: Sacrifice, Part I

love everything!!! please continue!!!! wonderful!!
yay Lily!!
cupcakes forever and always,
Lilia

Reviewer: NeLLyRaE
Date: 07/23/08 1:22
Chapter: Chapter Eight: Sacrifice, Part I

awww, i loved the ending! great story! really wonderful!

Reviewer: iranian__rose
Date: 07/23/08 0:28
Chapter: Chapter Eight: Sacrifice, Part I

that is so sweeeeeeeet!!

Reviewer: afterglow745
Date: 07/22/08 22:54
Chapter: Chapter Eight: Sacrifice, Part I

this story has come along wonderfully! please update again soon.

Reviewer: Stephallovertheworld
Date: 07/22/08 12:49
Chapter: Chapter Eight: Sacrifice, Part I

So I'm the first to review this chapter... probably because your story was one that I was checking daily for an update.

As always, it was an absolutely beautiful chapter. I loved loved loved the end of it! The characters are going through such crazy and unrealistic times but you came them come across as very realistic and I think that makes them easier to relate to.

So thank you for update... I loved it and can't wait for the next!

Reviewer: Lilia Natalia
Date: 07/11/08 14:05
Chapter: Interlude VII

O M F G ! ! ! ! please continue!!! o m g!
I'm so shocked I can't type anything else,
please please please PLEASE continue,
Lilia

Reviewer: Lilia Natalia
Date: 07/10/08 21:33
Chapter: Interlude IV

absolutely saddening

Reviewer: Lilia Natalia
Date: 07/10/08 21:29
Chapter: Chapter Four: Face Off

how sweet!! loving this story!!
Lilia

Reviewer: inspireme101
Date: 07/10/08 17:02
Chapter: Interlude VII

Oh PLEASE, hurry and write some more! It is such a great story and you are a fantastic writer!

Reviewer: inspireme101
Date: 07/02/08 9:36
Chapter: Chapter Seven: Polarize, Part Two

Oh my gosh, I am dying to read the next chapters. Your writing is wonderful, I love it! I can see why they awarded you for your story. Please, please, PLEASE keep writng the story!

Reviewer: Lilia Natalia
Date: 06/29/08 11:19
Chapter: Chapter Two: A Missing Piece

loving it! what's with the interludes?

Reviewer: Lilia Natalia
Date: 06/28/08 18:11
Chapter: Interlude I

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Reviewer: Lilia Natalia
Date: 06/28/08 17:42
Chapter: Chapter One: Lost in Thought

amazing!!

Reviewer: Lilia Natalia
Date: 06/26/08 21:43
Chapter: Prologue

loved the first chapter!!

Reviewer: The Salt Lake Queen
Date: 06/05/08 1:33
Chapter: Interlude VII

You know what? You're amazing.

Seriously, I love this story so much. Beautifully written. The alternating point of view really adds tension. Your characterization is great, particularly with James and Frank - they jump off the page in a way most authors struggle to achieve, but seems to come quite naturally here.

I'm really enjoying what I've read so far. I hope to see more soon! xx 

Reviewer: prongs_n_me22
Date: 06/04/08 23:44
Chapter: Interlude VII

you are an amazing writer, you really are. I love all the description, and you have the right amount of suspense. Im in love with this story, and I cant wait for more updates!
please,keep going! ;]
love,morgan

Reviewer: lola_lovegood
Date: 05/30/08 17:53
Chapter: Interlude VII

eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeekkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk you have to update

Reviewer: lola_lovegood
Date: 05/30/08 14:53
Chapter: Chapter Seven: Polarize, Part Two

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH NO NO JJJJAAAAAAAMMMMMMMEEEEEEESSSSSSSSSS

Reviewer: lola_lovegood
Date: 05/29/08 21:39
Chapter: Interlude VI

i LOVE THIS

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