Reviews For My Deliverance
Reviewer: amzing
Date: 02/24/09 14:22
Chapter: Chapter Eight: Sacrifice, Part II

AWWW i love this this story so very much and im so happy you finally updated and didnt abandon this story.... thank you for making this new chapter and i loook forward to a new one :)

Reviewer: crzyabtpttr
Date: 01/11/09 4:48
Chapter: Chapter Eight: Sacrifice, Part II

WOW!!!!!!!!!!!! PLZZ UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Afifa
Date: 12/27/08 16:22
Chapter: Chapter Eight: Sacrifice, Part II

Awesome. =D

Reviewer: Essence of Potter
Date: 12/15/08 15:40
Chapter: Prologue

WOW! Your story is amazing! It makes my heart race with antisipation, laugh out loud, makes my muscles tighten with fear, its amazing!

Reviewer: jkrofan
Date: 11/26/08 20:41
Chapter: Chapter Eight: Sacrifice, Part II

Wow. Really good story. I started reading this quite a while ago but lost it. I just found it again a couple of days ago. I keep trying to add it to my favorites but it doesn't take for whatever reason. Really good story.

Reviewer: Stephallovertheworld
Date: 11/16/08 17:13
Chapter: Chapter Eight: Sacrifice, Part II

Thank you soo much for updating. This is my absolute favorite lily/james fanfic and I'm really glad that you are continuing it. This story just keeps getting better and I loved the chapter and the new issues you are starting to explore. Fantastic!!! I loved it!! Thank you and I CAN'T wait for the next chapter.

Reviewer: olipop10
Date: 11/15/08 16:17
Chapter: Chapter Eight: Sacrifice, Part II

i've been waiting for sooooo long for the update! yours is the best lily-james FFic i've ever read!!! i love all about it:the storyline and your style are amazing...i just can't get enough of it and now...i have to wait again...
please update really really soon..!!!
cheers!

Reviewer: SiriusPotty
Date: 11/09/08 9:41
Chapter: Chapter Eight: Sacrifice, Part II

WOW!!! This has to be the BEST Lily/James fanfic that I have ever read ... I love the way you've set it out and your use of words =) I havent stopped reading this story for the past couple of days, totally addicted to it and completely at a loss of what to do with myself now that I've read all the chapters so far! Please write more A.S.A.P =D x

Reviewer: expectopatronass
Date: 11/06/08 20:25
Chapter: Chapter Eight: Sacrifice, Part II

This chapter is absolutely amazing! I loved how you described the Inferi, them being new at the time. Lily's fear of them was perfectly described. I'm pretty sure I would have had a similar reaction.
I adored the way you make Lily and James so perfect! They know each other so well; the shower scene was overwhelming (in a good way). You are the most fantastic writer; the way you incorporate this love into a time of fear and war blows my mind!
"My heart is going to explode" was my favorite line (hard to pick!) out of this chapter seeing as it so perfectly collects Lily's feelings for James.
Congratulations for another magnificent chapter. I don't know how you keep doing it, but each chapter is better than the last. Thanks for writing this truly magnificent story.

Reviewer: Treacle_Heart
Date: 11/04/08 16:19
Chapter: Chapter Eight: Sacrifice, Part II

Hi, so, your writing is kind of amazing. :)
I have two little nitpicks, though.
“We’ve been blocked from Disaparating. Try it,”
There should be another p in disapparating.
Also here: I breathed deeply against his color bone.
This should be collar bone.
Other than that, it was brilliant!
-- Julia

Reviewer: expectopatronass
Date: 10/16/08 17:04
Chapter: Chapter Eight: Sacrifice, Part I

This is the best fanfic ever! Do you have any idea when you will update next?

Reviewer: Miss Radcliffe
Date: 09/13/08 18:24
Chapter: Chapter Eight: Sacrifice, Part I

Well, I had to reread most of the story to remember what happened before I read this chapter. That's why this review is so long after when this chapter was posted. I really enjoyed this new installment as well as the last two that were put up while I was rereading. Things between James and Lily are moving really fast, a bit too fast for my taste, but I understand that this is typical in a time of war and that they have known each other for years. I've really enjoyed watching (or reading rather :)) Lily slowly open up to James. I think it might be even harder for her than for him to open up to her. One of my favorite scenes is when he goes to check in on her while she's sick and she tells him all about the history with her sister. I also loved their first real kiss in the common room, with Lily finally given him. I've read and written this scene in Lily/James fics many different ways over the years, and I really like how the scene was simple and casual instead of elaborate and overdone (like I've done myself). Great job and I hope you put up more soon!

Miss Radcliffe~

Reviewer: ginnyrulz13
Date: 09/08/08 23:52
Chapter: Chapter Eight: Sacrifice, Part I

aaaawww!!! sorry i didnt review before! i was really caught up in the story, though! i cant wait for the next chapter!!!

Reviewer: expectopatronass
Date: 09/07/08 17:45
Chapter: Chapter Eight: Sacrifice, Part I

This is one of the best stories I've ever read. I really love it, and I scream with happiness every time you update! I can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: Ginny1223
Date: 08/29/08 12:51
Chapter: Chapter Eight: Sacrifice, Part I

i love this story!! it is entertaining and realllyyyyy well written! i love the little interludes that show the outside world from Frank's view...very creative! keep up the good work! i cant wait to read the next chapter!

Reviewer: Afifa
Date: 08/21/08 6:35
Chapter: Chapter Eight: Sacrifice, Part I

wow. this chapter was awesome. the ending was just too sweet. =]

Reviewer: bellatrix-black-lestrange
Date: 08/12/08 14:11
Chapter: Chapter Eight: Sacrifice, Part I

i hope another chapter is coming soon as i am eager to find out what happens next !!!!!

Reviewer: lebasilisk
Date: 08/04/08 12:52
Chapter: Chapter Eight: Sacrifice, Part I

I absolutely love this story, the award is well deserved :)

Reviewer: xandrapotter
Date: 07/31/08 22:14
Chapter: Chapter Eight: Sacrifice, Part I

I can only reiterate what everyone has already said.... please, please, please write more!! This story is definitely the best fanfiction I have ever read.... I love how you depict James and Lily... I love how Lily thinks... and Alice/ Frank is superbly done as well.... I feel like JK Rowling wrote this.... *siiiiiigh* Thanks for your amazing imagination! :)

Reviewer: lola_lovegood
Date: 07/24/08 19:00
Chapter: Chapter Eight: Sacrifice, Part I

awww she loves him how sweeeet
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