Reviews For My Deliverance
Reviewer: neroine
Date: 09/12/06 14:09
Chapter: Interlude IV

Love, love, love, love this story!!! Seriously, it's definitely one of the best I've read, if not the best!

Author's Response: WOW. *blushes* *stammers* Thank you. That really just made my day. XD

Reviewer: KAM
Date: 09/12/06 13:03
Chapter: Interlude IV

Love it so far. Keep going. Don't keep us waiting!

Author's Response: Bah, I can't promise not to make you wait, but I'll write as fast as possible! <3 I'm thrilled you love the story, and thanks for the review!

Reviewer: MagEd
Date: 09/12/06 6:30
Chapter: Interlude IV

An interesting interlude. I like these chapters told from Franks point of view. I can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: Well, I'm glad you like the, because I do too! XD It's sad how often he is forgotten in this era of fanfiction. Thank you for the review! <3

Reviewer: 2SiriusB
Date: 09/08/06 17:02
Chapter: Chapter Four: Face Off

Oh, gosh! They just kept getting better! That must be really scarey having conspiracies going on right under Dumbledore's nose.

I really liked how James "forgave" Lily. It gives the story a lot of "height". Another aspect about your writing is that you don't use so much dialogue. Your "action speaks louder than words" style is very enjoyable. Please update fast!!!

The one and only,
Sirius B.

Author's Response: Hmm, that's the first time my writing has been described with "height". I rather like it. :P Heh, yeah, I don't have too much dialog, but I do seem to be rahter wordy anyway... thanks for your review!

Reviewer: Quiditch fan
Date: 09/06/06 19:36
Chapter: Chapter Four: Face Off

oh my, what a great chapter! i loved it. james and lily action! yeah! they are so cute! the question is, is when will they hook up again? hmmmm? well, i can't wait for more. also, you have done it again, you have captured all the right feelings in this story! everything was just amazing. and thank you for updateing so quickly as well. update soon!

Author's Response: Hah, you're welcome, you're welcome! I'm writing Chapter Five just as fast as I can... <3

Reviewer: padfootnflawks
Date: 09/06/06 17:25
Chapter: Chapter Four: Face Off

oh duh..i just read my first review and you have written storys befoe..your on my fav. authers list!! *embersses grin* opps i forgot any ur story!!

Author's Response: XD Don't worry about it. I'm just happy I'm on your favs list!

Reviewer: padfootnflawks
Date: 09/06/06 17:21
Chapter: Chapter Four: Face Off

I'm so sorry I have not been reveiwing!! School just started and I just went on a mini vaction...a lot of stuff has been happening....any way I posted reviews on the last two chapters that missed, if you want to read theme. The thing I like about your story is that Voltamore, Like the Harry Potter is the main focos in the book. Alot of Lily and James story's don't really write that much about Voldamort, but in the Maurder area he is a even bigger threat than in the Harry Potter area (or I think he is). Also Lily is getting a litte B*chy. Why is she takeing so maney points from her house, and fighing with people...I'm really looking foward to Emmeline's trial...and I really can't wait untell Lily kisses Jamse poo....

Author's Response: Hahaha, Lily's moodiness? Well, I guess... she's just trying to do what she thinks is right... she really fears this war, and tries to keep it at bay for as long as possible. Unfortunately, a few people *cough James cough* have a different viewpoint. She's just got some issues to work out... but I promise she will! (Ah, and Lily kissing James... mwahahah. Wait and see.)

Reviewer: MagEd
Date: 09/06/06 17:14
Chapter: Chapter Four: Face Off

This is one of my favorite chapters so far--excellent job! I can't wait to read what happens next.

Author's Response: Thanks! Anything that I could have done better, anything I should tweak within the chapter? Well, hope you enjoy the rest!

Reviewer: padfootnflawks
Date: 09/06/06 16:31
Chapter: Interlude III

Wow. Very good chapter. I'm diffently nominating you for the best story...or romance...or both. Any way this was simply genis: "He was wearing a favorite pair of maroon robes, the ones that his brother Gideon always made fun of him for because the maroon clashed horribly with Fabianís red hair." This would explain why Molly likes to dress Ron in red...she's holding on to her brother, Fabian's memory...very smart. When I read your story I can here the expression in evrey one's voices, I have a very clear mentle pichter of what is happening in my mind. And poor Remus..I hope that know one blame's him...and Frank..he will live with surviovers guilt...Any way very nice chapter.

Author's Response: Hah, yeah I did have Ron in mind when I wrote that little snippet about the maroon and red. :p There is just so much depth to the world that JK Rowling has created, and I love exploring all the little nuances within. I'm thrilled that you can really see my characters, and see what's going on--I strive for realism. Thank for this review! XD

Reviewer: padfootnflawks
Date: 09/06/06 16:18
Chapter: Chapter Three: Through Unveiled Eyes

NOOO a cliffe!! You are amazing...Is this your first story?? I want to read ALL of your storys!! And if this is you first to good.

Author's Response: Nope, this isn't my first story. My earliest ones are the other stories on this account, but they honestly aren't any good. If you're really interested in reading the rest of my [good] stuff, check out "twinsuns" at! <3

Reviewer: lovingu4ever
Date: 09/06/06 15:53
Chapter: Chapter Four: Face Off

aww, goodness this story is can be so cute and sweet and then again so dark and deep and once agian i'm captivated. geez what the deal with james and i still don't really understand what was happening when sirius beat up his little brother and are the married aurors james's parents and for goodness sake are james and lily ever gonna get this together. so many questions!!! however i am enjoying the chase keep it up!!! :D

Author's Response: Hahaha, don't worry, in time all your questions shall be answered. I'm glad you're liking the story!

Reviewer: lovingu4ever
Date: 09/02/06 12:15
Chapter: Chapter Three: Through Unveiled Eyes

was that suppose to almost make me cry? really REALLY good chapter i'm really looking forward to the nest one, keep updating. :)

Author's Response: I promise I shall. Thanks for the review! <3

Reviewer: WunderWitch
Date: 08/31/06 20:59
Chapter: Interlude III

oooh, Crouch got them good! by the way, what Avery said is too sadly true!

Author's Response: Hahaha, yeah, he did get them... but then, they get him back, later. It'd suck to get Transfigured into a bone, man... :p

Reviewer: WunderWitch
Date: 08/31/06 20:20
Chapter: Interlude II

haha! well, i shouldn't be laughing, actually...Poor Frank! it's just a little funny, though...right?

Author's Response: What, about his broken ribs? Yeah, my upper lip was trying to twitch into a smile as I was writing it, but... yeah, the rest is pretty sad, to me. Especially thinking about what happens to him and Alice, and nearly all of their friends. Makes me want to cry, almost. Heh.

Reviewer: Quiditch fan
Date: 08/31/06 20:16
Chapter: Interlude III

wow, intense! and way good. wow, poor frank. i hope he isn't traumatized by this forever...cause that would be just horrible. he watched his fellow comrade die becasue he was warning him about the ambush. how sad. please update, i can't wait for more. onemore thing, i really liek how you capture the true theme of this time. the world is not happy. peaople are suffering, and dying. keep up the good work! and update soon.

Author's Response: Heh, yeah, poor Frank. I'm showing all the crap that's happening in the world at the time through his eyes, so he gets a little beat up. Ah, well, he's gonna be an Auror one day, he can take it :p.

Reviewer: WunderWitch
Date: 08/31/06 20:15
Chapter: Chapter Two: A Missing Piece

ooh, Lilsypoo's P.O.ed!

Author's Response: Heh, yeah, it happens... <3

Reviewer: Quiditch fan
Date: 08/31/06 20:11
Chapter: Chapter Three: Through Unveiled Eyes

since the next chapter is sort of a different story, i figured i would review both chapters. this was amazing! i loved it. and man, lily and james are friends again (good) james has basically siad that she should do something before she looses him, and yeah. i love this, and i can't wait for more. please update how you updated with these two chapter. once again, great story, i love it, and yeah.

Author's Response: Yeah, I love hteir relationship I this point--I love writing it. And I'm glad you're loving it as well! :p Thanks for the reivew!

Reviewer: WunderWitch
Date: 08/31/06 20:00
Chapter: Interlude I

ooh, scary. and...*in a sing-song voice* dra-ma!

Author's Response: XD

Reviewer: MagEd
Date: 08/31/06 17:28
Chapter: Interlude III

A depressing chapter, but I was glad to see you'd updated! I really love this story, and I can't wait to see where it goes. . . .

Author's Response: :p I'm sorry it was depressing, but I hope it was also... enlightening? I'm glad you like the story, though! <3

Reviewer: WunderWitch
Date: 08/30/06 21:47
Chapter: Prologue

ooh, dra-ma!

Author's Response: Heh, yeah, drama. Lily and James are slowly getting past this stage, though. :p

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