Reviews For My Deliverance
Reviewer: thesmart1
Date: 07/03/07 3:42
Chapter: Chapter Two: A Missing Piece

I loved that! Keep up the good work!

Reviewer: thesmart1
Date: 07/03/07 3:27
Chapter: Interlude I

omigosh that was such a sharp ending! Now I desperately want to read the next bit! good job, this is good.

Reviewer: Marauder_Luver2
Date: 07/03/07 2:27
Chapter: Chapter Six: Intrigue

that was a brilliant chapter it took you long enough to update though but i'm glad you finally did because this is one of my favorite stories update soon and fast it was an amazing chapter

Reviewer: Wicked Wench
Date: 07/02/07 23:24
Chapter: Chapter Six: Intrigue

Excellent story -- just stumbled upon it tonight. I loved the kiss scene -- it reminded me a bit of Harry and Ginny in HBP. Can't wait for more.

Reviewer: lovingu4ever
Date: 07/02/07 18:32
Chapter: Chapter Six: Intrigue

That was one freaking awesome chapter! I swear you have every character down to a T, I had to go back and look over the last act to fully understand what was going on. By the way, I love this part as well as the ending words.
Whats gotten into him, James repeated. Its obvious: hes jealous.

I quirked an eyebrow at James, hearing the un-uttered of me at the end of his sentence.

I'm not sure what it is but I'm pretty sure utter brilliance. I'll stop flattering you now though and thank you for not abadoning this story it's much to brilliant to for such acts. Well till the next chapter is vewiable! :D

Reviewer: liliy16
Date: 07/02/07 15:23
Chapter: Chapter Six: Intrigue

wow. this was my favorite chapter so far. it must have took a ;ong time to write though. can't wait t o read more :)

Reviewer: Lilygirl107
Date: 05/21/07 19:36
Chapter: Prologue

OMGOMGOMG!Can you please write more?I'm a My DEliverence addict!Please write more or i will go insane!

Reviewer: Lilygirl107
Date: 05/21/07 19:35
Chapter: Prologue

omgomgomgomg!Can You PLEASE wirte another chapter?I'm seriuosly a "My Deliverence" addict so please write more or i wil go INSANE!

Reviewer: dumbly_dorr
Date: 05/03/07 10:40
Chapter: Interlude V

this is amazing! it is really good writing and an amazing plot. but why havent you updated in so long? dont tell me that you stopped writing it because you'd probably break my heart. i need to know what happens next...

Reviewer: I_lOvE_pAdFoOt91
Date: 05/02/07 20:26
Chapter: Interlude V

fantastic. im re-reading it now. update soon? please? we're begging you...(i'm sure i speak for a lot of people)

Reviewer: MoRoCcAnAnDpRoUd
Date: 04/27/07 18:52
Chapter: Interlude V

*taps foot impatiently in wait of next chapter*
come on, i've already reread this three times!
I really need the next chapter before I explode!!!

And no, I don't generally use excess exclamation points.

Reviewer: Marauder_Luver2
Date: 03/12/07 18:02
Chapter: Interlude V

i love this story one of the best i have read update soon please

Reviewer: Siriuslyinluvwithharry
Date: 02/28/07 15:01
Chapter: Interlude V

You are, obviously, a very good writer. One of the best that I've come across on this site. Your story is the only that I've read so far that concentrates this much on the war with Voldemort and how it affects all of the students at Hogwarts, especially James and Lily. I really like that you do this. I always thought that the war would be a big deal to them even if they were in school like it does in the Harry Potter books. I also like your idea on injecting Interludes every other chapter or so. It splits it up nicely and keeps us alert on what's going on it the outside world. This is definitely one of the favorite stories. Update soon? Sweet.

Reviewer: lilyandjames_x3
Date: 02/27/07 15:17
Chapter: Interlude V

love it.

Reviewer: akb
Date: 02/25/07 20:10
Chapter: Interlude V

UPDATE........please!.......its really good

Reviewer: MoRoCcAnAnDpRoUd
Date: 02/25/07 15:24
Chapter: Interlude V

This is an amazing story. If you don't update soon, I will explode.

Reviewer: iconxsurfer
Date: 02/12/07 22:44
Chapter: Interlude V

ah, gods.
you're an amazing writer.
you write enough to keep us on the edge of our seats, but not so much that we're tired of reading it.
i really don't know how you do it.
you have to write more.
i have never read a fanfiction that could keep me on the edge of my seat like this, and let me tell you, i have read a lot of fanfiction.
you're good at this. it's a talent.

Reviewer: swmbkrn01
Date: 02/05/07 15:39
Chapter: Interlude V

we want chapter six!!!

Reviewer: molified
Date: 02/04/07 18:30
Chapter: Interlude V

Please, oh please update soon!

Reviewer: lilyandjames_x3
Date: 02/04/07 13:13
Chapter: Interlude III

Amazing. The descriptions are so real. The scenes are so clear. Amazing, unbelievable story.

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