Reviews For My Deliverance
Reviewer: The Kneazle
Date: 08/06/07 0:29
Chapter: Chapter Six: Intrigue

Wow.Tthis is a really good and very believable james/lily fanfic. You're an amazing writer. The charcters seem exactly like how they are portrayed in the books, from the little bit we know about them. This is one of the best of this kind i've seen, because it doesn't follow what everyone seems to think of as a lily/james fic: lily exploding on the train when she finds out james is head boy, crazy sirius, her still thinking he's a prat, but deciding that maybe he's changed when she sees him resist the urge to hex snape....
It's very refreshing.
Can't wait for the update!

P.S. I just happened to notice that you use the phrase "long-suffering" a lot. Just a thought.

Reviewer: jcksavvy
Date: 07/15/07 21:07
Chapter: Chapter Six: Intrigue

I had the sudden urge to read a James/Lily fanfiction because I hadn't done so in quite some time, so I set out on finding one that I would enjoy immensely. After a couple of hours of starting stories that made me cringe inwardly, I stumbled upon this story. I couldn't stop reading it and now that I've read everything posted, I can't wait for an update. I love your characterizations and plot. It's all very well-written and believeable. Some of your facts seem to be off, but other than that, it's amazing. I personally can't wait till James and Lily officially get together. Update soon please. ;D

Reviewer: saqua609
Date: 07/12/07 16:18
Chapter: Interlude II

this is a really great story and you are a really great writer,
seriously
keep it up

Reviewer: Miss Radcliffe
Date: 07/11/07 15:40
Chapter: Chapter Six: Intrigue

Awesome chapter. I actually had to read the last few over again to remember what happened, but it was worth it. Watching your development of James and Lily's relationship is exciting and intriguing. Please update soon!

Miss Radcliffe~

Reviewer: Miss Radcliffe
Date: 07/11/07 15:40
Chapter: Chapter Six: Intrigue

Awesome chapter. I actually had to read the last few over again to remember what happened, but it was worth it. Watching your development of James and Lily's relationship is exciting and intriguing. Please update soon!

Miss Radcliffe~

Reviewer: Miss Radcliffe
Date: 07/11/07 15:40
Chapter: Chapter Six: Intrigue

Awesome chapter. I actually had to read the last few over again to remember what happened, but it was worth it. Watching your development of James and Lily's relationship is exciting and intriguing. Please update soon!

Miss Radcliffe~

Reviewer: Miss Radcliffe
Date: 07/11/07 15:40
Chapter: Chapter Six: Intrigue

Awesome chapter. I actually had to read the last few over again to remember what happened, but it was worth it. Watching your development of James and Lily's relationship is exciting and intriguing. Please update soon!

Miss Radcliffe~

Reviewer: Miss Radcliffe
Date: 07/11/07 15:40
Chapter: Chapter Six: Intrigue

Awesome chapter. I actually had to read the last few over again to remember what happened, but it was worth it. Watching your development of James and Lily's relationship is exciting and intriguing. Please update soon!

Miss Radcliffe~

Reviewer: Miss Radcliffe
Date: 07/11/07 15:39
Chapter: Chapter Six: Intrigue

Awesome chapter. I actually had to read the last few over again to remember what happened, but it was worth it. Watching your development of James and Lily's relationship is exciting and intriguing. Please update soon!

Miss Radcliffe~

Reviewer: Miss Radcliffe
Date: 07/11/07 15:39
Chapter: Chapter Six: Intrigue

Awesome chapter. I actually had to read the last few over again to remember what happened, but it was worth it. Watching your development of James and Lily's relationship is exciting and intriguing. Please update soon!

Miss Radcliffe~

Reviewer: Miss Radcliffe
Date: 07/11/07 15:39
Chapter: Chapter Six: Intrigue

Awesome chapter. I actually had to read the last few over again to remember what happened, but it was worth it. Watching your development of James and Lily's relationship is exciting and intriguing. Please update soon!

Miss Radcliffe~

Reviewer: Miss Radcliffe
Date: 07/11/07 15:39
Chapter: Chapter Six: Intrigue

Awesome chapter. I actually had to read the last few over again to remember what happened, but it was worth it. Watching your development of James and Lily's relationship is exciting and intriguing. Please update soon!

Miss Radcliffe~

Reviewer: Miss Radcliffe
Date: 07/11/07 15:39
Chapter: Chapter Six: Intrigue

Awesome chapter. I actually had to read the last few over again to remember what happened, but it was worth it. Watching your development of James and Lily's relationship is exciting and intriguing. Please update soon!

Miss Radcliffe~

Reviewer: Miss Radcliffe
Date: 07/11/07 15:38
Chapter: Chapter Six: Intrigue

Awesome chapter. I actually had to read the last few over again to remember what happened, but it was worth it. Watching your development of James and Lily's relationship is exciting and intriguing. Please update soon!

Miss Radcliffe~

Reviewer: Miss Radcliffe
Date: 07/11/07 15:38
Chapter: Chapter Six: Intrigue

Awesome chapter. I actually had to read the last few over again to remember what happened, but it was worth it. Watching your development of James and Lily's relationship is exciting and intriguing. Please update soon!

Miss Radcliffe~

Reviewer: Leviosahh_
Date: 07/09/07 23:44
Chapter: Chapter Six: Intrigue

love itt
this is such a good story; i love the writing style and how you divide it into sections.

Reviewer: ariya
Date: 07/09/07 17:22
Chapter: Chapter Six: Intrigue

Wow, so I started reading this today, and I could'nt stop. Your writing is so beautiful, I love the interludes, and the way the stroy flows. The characters are believable, and remind me of real life situations. Definately in my top 5.

:]

Reviewer: DragonsMist
Date: 07/08/07 23:01
Chapter: Chapter Six: Intrigue

Wow...this story is written brilliantly, I love it! It has so much detail, and the characters act just like they should. Sirius isn't to stupid, Remus is quiet and kind, Peter sits there quietly and pays attention, and James is just like he should be. :D And Lily doesn't just randomly find out that she likes James either, she acts like I think she should. I love the story, I can't wait to find out what happens next.
Lily

Reviewer: shadowz_13
Date: 07/07/07 15:34
Chapter: Chapter Six: Intrigue

I am truly amazed. I spent last night reading your story. To say I was deeply satisfied would be an understatement! I love My Deliverance! I can't wait to read the rest of it =]

Reviewer: godricz_girl
Date: 07/07/07 3:11
Chapter: Chapter Six: Intrigue

woooowww.......i just read all the way to here.....just...wow
this is fantastic! my suspicions have been confirmed...hello ms rowling =]
hehe newhoooo this is a beautifully put together piece of writing..the way you add the interlude to give it depth is amazing...please update..im dying to see what happens next =] =] =]
--m

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