Reviews For My Deliverance
Reviewer: hermybabay82
Date: 10/14/07 5:13
Chapter: Chapter Six: Intrigue

I love this story! You are very eloquent in your choice of words and phrasing as well as the plot. I hope you update very soon, as I can't wait to read more. I feel like I'm waiting on DH all over again!

Reviewer: smile_sweetly_dear
Date: 10/06/07 20:16
Chapter: Chapter One: Lost in Thought

Love the last line :D

Reviewer: smile_sweetly_dear
Date: 10/06/07 19:40
Chapter: Prologue

Wow. You've got skill.

Don't stop writing.

Reviewer: lily_death_flower
Date: 10/02/07 17:27
Chapter: Chapter Six: Intrigue

i really love this story. its amazing. you describe people's emotion so well. the story's so deep. this is probably the best Lily/James Fic I've read (and I've read a lot). keep writing. Please Continue. update soon.

Reviewer: beatifically
Date: 09/30/07 15:51
Chapter: Chapter Six: Intrigue

I just recently read this. I have to say, this is a really good fanfic. Most L/J ones I read don't mention Voldemort at ALL, which is weird since in PS/SS Dumbledore implied that Voldemort has been wreaking havoc for eleven years. It's nice to read one that finally puts emphasis on the war!
Plus, your writing is amazing. You describe things so beautifully. . . . Great job and post more soon!

Reviewer: Lana Moonland
Date: 09/13/07 13:46
Chapter: Chapter Six: Intrigue

i love it! it's well written and the plot is entrancing. good job.

Reviewer: Gin_Drinka
Date: 09/11/07 20:31
Chapter: Chapter Six: Intrigue

Please update soon!!!! This is my favorite J/L fic ever! Your writing is beautiful, and realistic. It creates such an atmosphere, and you use such wonderful discription. It really is lovely, and you should be proud.

Reviewer: pokethedevil
Date: 09/06/07 7:13
Chapter: Chapter Three: Through Unveiled Eyes

Awwww.....

Reviewer: pokethedevil
Date: 09/06/07 7:12
Chapter: Chapter One: Lost in Thought

Can Lily really recount all these events in the time span of one night?

Reviewer: pokethedevil
Date: 09/06/07 7:11
Chapter: Prologue

Very nice beginning..

Reviewer: pokethedevil
Date: 09/06/07 7:11
Chapter: Chapter Two: A Missing Piece

I really like how you make them interact with each other, it's really convincing.

Reviewer: pokethedevil
Date: 09/06/07 7:10
Chapter: Chapter Three: Through Unveiled Eyes

I just loooveee this chappie!!

Reviewer: pokethedevil
Date: 09/06/07 7:09
Chapter: Chapter Two: A Missing Piece

Really really good.
Beautiful and unique, loved it!

Reviewer: i_hart_wheezys
Date: 09/02/07 0:36
Chapter: Chapter Six: Intrigue

oh my god i love this story!!! this is probably my favorite fic. the writing is incredible and i love the story line! please update soon i'm dying to know what happens!!!!!!! :)

Reviewer: Tweak
Date: 08/26/07 6:21
Chapter: Chapter Six: Intrigue

This is by far one of my favorites. Please update soon.

Reviewer: Charisma_tn
Date: 08/23/07 22:20
Chapter: Chapter Six: Intrigue

I'm really loving this story. I love how everyone is subtlety coming together. That's more how it happens in real life. I'm loving it! I also really love how you're keeping everything in perspective with the war outside. Are we going to get to see Lily and James possibly defy Voldermort a few times while we're at it? (Final note: Bravo for not having Lily go out with that one guy!)

Reviewer: hallowshuh
Date: 08/18/07 0:28
Chapter: Chapter Six: Intrigue

amazing!!!!this is one of my favorite fanfics for sure! udate soon!!

Reviewer: liblob
Date: 08/17/07 19:05
Chapter: Chapter Six: Intrigue

This is brilliant writing, and certainly one of my favourite fanfictions. You really bring the characters to life; they seem so real and somewhat more substantial than most characters in fanfiction, particularly their emotions, as you manage to convey anger, frustration and fear as well as love and tenderness, and this doesn't just apply to Lily and James - secondary characters such as Alice are also well developed. And I love how Lily and James' relationship is developing; it's realistic and yet captivating, and I love the dialogue between the two. Keep up the good work, it's a refreshing break from the norm.

Reviewer: __telescopes
Date: 08/13/07 20:37
Chapter: Prologue

I can't even...I'm speechless. You are a phenomenal writer, I aspire to be you...simply amazing. Would you be interested in letting me Beta a few of your chapters? I've Beta'd before and I know what I'm doing (I'd love to help in any way I can). Please keep posting! Don't be like those horrible authors who write wonderful stories and leave us hanging for two years (literally) before they post again.

You're amazing. Honestly...let me know if I can help.

Reviewer: iAMmissdelaney
Date: 08/09/07 0:32
Chapter: Chapter Six: Intrigue

You're a genius. I would hug you if I could.
I'm getting so psyched for the next chapter.

Good job!

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