I love this story! You are very eloquent in your choice of words and phrasing as well as the plot. I hope you update very soon, as I can't wait to read more. I feel like I'm waiting on DH all over again!
Love the last line :D
Wow. You've got skill.
Don't stop writing.
i really love this story. its amazing. you describe people's emotion so well. the story's so deep. this is probably the best Lily/James Fic I've read (and I've read a lot). keep writing. Please Continue. update soon.
I just recently read this. I have to say, this is a really good fanfic. Most L/J ones I read don't mention Voldemort at ALL, which is weird since in PS/SS Dumbledore implied that Voldemort has been wreaking havoc for eleven years. It's nice to read one that finally puts emphasis on the war!
Plus, your writing is amazing. You describe things so beautifully. . . . Great job and post more soon!
i love it! it's well written and the plot is entrancing. good job.
Please update soon!!!! This is my favorite J/L fic ever! Your writing is beautiful, and realistic. It creates such an atmosphere, and you use such wonderful discription. It really is lovely, and you should be proud.
Can Lily really recount all these events in the time span of one night?
Very nice beginning..
I really like how you make them interact with each other, it's really convincing.
I just loooveee this chappie!!
Really really good.
Beautiful and unique, loved it!
oh my god i love this story!!! this is probably my favorite fic. the writing is incredible and i love the story line! please update soon i'm dying to know what happens!!!!!!! :)
This is by far one of my favorites. Please update soon.
I'm really loving this story. I love how everyone is subtlety coming together. That's more how it happens in real life. I'm loving it! I also really love how you're keeping everything in perspective with the war outside. Are we going to get to see Lily and James possibly defy Voldermort a few times while we're at it? (Final note: Bravo for not having Lily go out with that one guy!)
amazing!!!!this is one of my favorite fanfics for sure! udate soon!!
This is brilliant writing, and certainly one of my favourite fanfictions. You really bring the characters to life; they seem so real and somewhat more substantial than most characters in fanfiction, particularly their emotions, as you manage to convey anger, frustration and fear as well as love and tenderness, and this doesn't just apply to Lily and James - secondary characters such as Alice are also well developed. And I love how Lily and James' relationship is developing; it's realistic and yet captivating, and I love the dialogue between the two. Keep up the good work, it's a refreshing break from the norm.
I can't even...I'm speechless. You are a phenomenal writer, I aspire to be you...simply amazing. Would you be interested in letting me Beta a few of your chapters? I've Beta'd before and I know what I'm doing (I'd love to help in any way I can). Please keep posting! Don't be like those horrible authors who write wonderful stories and leave us hanging for two years (literally) before they post again.
You're amazing. Honestly...let me know if I can help.
You're a genius. I would hug you if I could.
I'm getting so psyched for the next chapter.