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Name: lola_lovegood (Signed) · Date: 05/29/08 21:28 · For: Chapter Six: Intrigue
oooooh i love this story


Name: lola_lovegood (Signed) · Date: 05/28/08 21:44 · For: Interlude V
aw j'ador dumbledor


Name: lola_lovegood (Signed) · Date: 05/28/08 21:29 · For: Chapter Five: Progeny
eeeeeeeeek what does she know


Name: lola_lovegood (Signed) · Date: 05/27/08 22:33 · For: Interlude IV
ohh gettin good


Name: lola_lovegood (Signed) · Date: 05/27/08 22:20 · For: Chapter Four: Face Off
omy gosh i love this story


Name: HeadWig (Signed) · Date: 05/27/08 21:59 · For: Interlude VII
I really like this story!
I think you have captured the characters of Lily and James very well. I like that Lily isn't the stereotypical Lily of many other stories-- she's kind of her own person in this one, and her vulnerability really makes her unique in that aspect. James too is more mature and much more characteristic of a seventh year. (I was reading a Lily/James today and the dialouge was written as if they were fourteen) I really like what you've done with the story, and I'm waiting for a resolution to the cliffhanger! Great work! Keep it coming!


Name: lola_lovegood (Signed) · Date: 05/27/08 20:19 · For: Interlude III
ooh i really liked it how you put the prewitts in there


Name: lola_lovegood (Signed) · Date: 05/27/08 19:20 · For: Chapter Three: Through Unveiled Eyes
aaaaaawwwwwwww she luurrrvvvess himmmm
yay

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XOXO
~lola~


Name: lola_lovegood (Signed) · Date: 05/26/08 21:29 · For: Interlude II
i really like it how we get to see what is happening with frank i allways liked him
oh my goodness are some of those dead bodies lilys mum and dad? oh no

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XOXO
~lola~


Name: lola_lovegood (Signed) · Date: 05/26/08 20:55 · For: Chapter Two: A Missing Piece
ha that is adoreable i love this story its great


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XOXO
~lola~


Name: lola_lovegood (Signed) · Date: 05/26/08 20:03 · For: Interlude I
ooh i hope they're okay


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XOXO
~lola~


Name: lola_lovegood (Signed) · Date: 05/26/08 20:03 · For: Interlude I
ooh i hope they're okay


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XOXO
~lola~


Name: lola_lovegood (Signed) · Date: 05/26/08 20:03 · For: Interlude I
ooh i hope they're okay


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XOXO
~lola~


Name: lola_lovegood (Signed) · Date: 05/26/08 19:34 · For: Chapter One: Lost in Thought
aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaawwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww so cute let us hope the two become a couple soon


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XOXO
~lola~


Name: lola_lovegood (Signed) · Date: 05/26/08 16:19 · For: Prologue
really very nice perfect wording it definetly sounded like a seventeen yearold girl


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XOXO
~lola~


Name: Afifa (Signed) · Date: 05/20/08 4:33 · For: Interlude VII
woah. that chapter was friggin' awesome. can we please have the next one soon? the last line is a major cliffie... it's killing me!


Name: prongs_n_me22 (Signed) · Date: 05/18/08 19:30 · For: Chapter One: Lost in Thought
love it already.

the last line is killer. :]


Name: majahei (Signed) · Date: 05/17/08 11:30 · For: Interlude VII
That was amazing! I do hope you update soon! I also really like the interludes because it gives depth to the story and for the readers it gives them another point of view to contemplate! Thank You For such a wonderful story!


Name: Stephallovertheworld (Signed) · Date: 05/14/08 19:31 · For: Interlude VII
Wow... this was an excellent chapter, or interlude per say. I absolutely love love love your writing and your ability to get your readers so entranced in the story. The ending was awesome too. You'll definitely have me checking daily to see if you've posted!!


Name: lily_death_flower (Signed) · Date: 05/14/08 17:26 · For: Interlude VII
good chapte.r omg the poor choldren. please update soon this was a great chapter!


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