Reviews For My Deliverance
Reviewer: lola_lovegood
Date: 05/29/08 21:28
Chapter: Chapter Six: Intrigue

oooooh i love this story

Reviewer: lola_lovegood
Date: 05/28/08 21:44
Chapter: Interlude V

aw j'ador dumbledor

Reviewer: lola_lovegood
Date: 05/28/08 21:29
Chapter: Chapter Five: Progeny

eeeeeeeeek what does she know

Reviewer: lola_lovegood
Date: 05/27/08 22:33
Chapter: Interlude IV

ohh gettin good

Reviewer: lola_lovegood
Date: 05/27/08 22:20
Chapter: Chapter Four: Face Off

omy gosh i love this story

Reviewer: HeadWig
Date: 05/27/08 21:59
Chapter: Interlude VII

I really like this story!
I think you have captured the characters of Lily and James very well. I like that Lily isn't the stereotypical Lily of many other stories-- she's kind of her own person in this one, and her vulnerability really makes her unique in that aspect. James too is more mature and much more characteristic of a seventh year. (I was reading a Lily/James today and the dialouge was written as if they were fourteen) I really like what you've done with the story, and I'm waiting for a resolution to the cliffhanger! Great work! Keep it coming!

Reviewer: lola_lovegood
Date: 05/27/08 20:19
Chapter: Interlude III

ooh i really liked it how you put the prewitts in there

Reviewer: lola_lovegood
Date: 05/27/08 19:20
Chapter: Chapter Three: Through Unveiled Eyes

aaaaaawwwwwwww she luurrrvvvess himmmm
yay

ttfn
XOXO
~lola~

Reviewer: lola_lovegood
Date: 05/26/08 21:29
Chapter: Interlude II

i really like it how we get to see what is happening with frank i allways liked him
oh my goodness are some of those dead bodies lilys mum and dad? oh no

ttfn
XOXO
~lola~

Reviewer: lola_lovegood
Date: 05/26/08 20:55
Chapter: Chapter Two: A Missing Piece

ha that is adoreable i love this story its great


ttfn
XOXO
~lola~

Reviewer: lola_lovegood
Date: 05/26/08 20:03
Chapter: Interlude I

ooh i hope they're okay


ttfn
XOXO
~lola~

Reviewer: lola_lovegood
Date: 05/26/08 20:03
Chapter: Interlude I

ooh i hope they're okay


ttfn
XOXO
~lola~

Reviewer: lola_lovegood
Date: 05/26/08 20:03
Chapter: Interlude I

ooh i hope they're okay


ttfn
XOXO
~lola~

Reviewer: lola_lovegood
Date: 05/26/08 19:34
Chapter: Chapter One: Lost in Thought

aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaawwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww so cute let us hope the two become a couple soon


ttfn
XOXO
~lola~

Reviewer: lola_lovegood
Date: 05/26/08 16:19
Chapter: Prologue

really very nice perfect wording it definetly sounded like a seventeen yearold girl


ttfn
XOXO
~lola~

Reviewer: Afifa
Date: 05/20/08 4:33
Chapter: Interlude VII

woah. that chapter was friggin' awesome. can we please have the next one soon? the last line is a major cliffie... it's killing me!

Reviewer: prongs_n_me22
Date: 05/18/08 19:30
Chapter: Chapter One: Lost in Thought

love it already.

the last line is killer. :]

Reviewer: majahei
Date: 05/17/08 11:30
Chapter: Interlude VII

That was amazing! I do hope you update soon! I also really like the interludes because it gives depth to the story and for the readers it gives them another point of view to contemplate! Thank You For such a wonderful story!

Reviewer: Stephallovertheworld
Date: 05/14/08 19:31
Chapter: Interlude VII

Wow... this was an excellent chapter, or interlude per say. I absolutely love love love your writing and your ability to get your readers so entranced in the story. The ending was awesome too. You'll definitely have me checking daily to see if you've posted!!

Reviewer: lily_death_flower
Date: 05/14/08 17:26
Chapter: Interlude VII

good chapte.r omg the poor choldren. please update soon this was a great chapter!

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