Reviews For His Hero
Reviewer: Harry4GinnyRon4Hermy
Date: 08/29/06 11:06
Chapter: His Hero

short"!!!

Reviewer: some_kinda_superstar
Date: 07/16/06 0:56
Chapter: His Hero

this topic is something almost everyone can relate to. most people have lost someone close to them before. i thought it was great that james' hero was his grandfather, and it was sweet that sirius looked up to james. all in all, i thought it described realistic events and emotions, and was totally believeable and well-written. so well done! i hope we'll all see more of your work soon.

Reviewer: KASK
Date: 07/15/06 20:56
Chapter: His Hero

That was cute but sad. It was really well written. "I'd play some Quidditch." That part made me smile. Good job.

Reviewer: lovingu4ever
Date: 07/13/06 17:07
Chapter: His Hero

aww! that was good but sad, bittersweet i would say seeing as his hero does die and everything just seems to get worse but it's also nice what he says. great job really liked it!

Reviewer: Aldebaran
Date: 07/11/06 10:03
Chapter: His Hero

Aww, that was such a sweet story! I thoroughly enjoyed it: the soft descriptions, the visual effects, the sounds and the voices, the teenage feel of the whole thing. Even what they said was appropriate for their age and for their state of mind. I loved it!

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