this topic is something almost everyone can relate to. most people have lost someone close to them before. i thought it was great that james' hero was his grandfather, and it was sweet that sirius looked up to james. all in all, i thought it described realistic events and emotions, and was totally believeable and well-written. so well done! i hope we'll all see more of your work soon.

aww! that was good but sad, bittersweet i would say seeing as his hero does die and everything just seems to get worse but it's also nice what he says. great job really liked it!