Reviewer: guiding ray of sunlight
Date: 08/03/06 6:56
Chapter: Show Me the Meaning of Being Lonely

OMG! That was so sad! *wipes away tears* That was great characterisation, you really captured the mind of a lost and lonely first year. I like how inside the letter he debates whether or not he really does love her. Natus is a great characer, and I can't wait to read more about him.

Author's Response: Thanks! Son of Dad's Worst Enemy is currently in queue, so the wait shouldn't be too long.

Reviewer: LiaWitch20
Date: 07/09/06 22:04
Chapter: Show Me the Meaning of Being Lonely

Oh! I love that long fics! Anyway how is name your main fic? I wanna read it!
Up!


Author's Response: When it goes up it will be 'Son of Dad's Worst Enemy', but it isn't up yet.

Reviewer: Emily_the_Poet
Date: 07/07/06 21:09
Chapter: Show Me the Meaning of Being Lonely

I think you're fic would've been fine without the song thrown in, could be for length could be you wanted to, I don't know. I really felt for Natus, the poor thing growing up alone and without his mother. It made me sympathetic towards those in similar positions. The letter format is not unheard of, but it is rather rare as it's the first I've read. I enjoyed this fic and hope you write more in the future.

Author's Response: Yeah, but the songs one of my faves, so... Yup, he's a poor kid, who just wants his mum back, even if she has become a mass murderer, just because she's his mum. Don't you worry, I'll be writing more... about Natus, too. thanks for the review! loral

Reviewer: LiaWitch20
Date: 07/07/06 19:39
Chapter: Show Me the Meaning of Being Lonely

Almost perfect!
I really do like it!
Update soon, it's a pretty begining

Author's Response: Actually, this is a one shot, but in my main fic (which has yet to be posted) a lot will talk about Natus...

Reviewer: comewhatmay
Date: 07/07/06 19:13
Chapter: Show Me the Meaning of Being Lonely

*crying*
WoW ThAt WAs Sad!!
Poor kid. Anyways I loved it!!!

first reviewer!!!!!!!

Author's Response: thanks! :(: (bitter-sweet)

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