Reviewer: hedwig_pigwidgeon
Date: 04/11/09 13:37
Chapter: Dean's Idea

Wouldn't it be funny if Neville was the drunk one instead of Ron?It would add a lot of...craziness!

Reviewer: hedwig_pigwidgeon
Date: 04/10/09 21:36
Chapter: The Great And Ferocious Snowball Fight

Ehmagod,so funny!!!
Ron is such an idiot it's hilarious!

Reviewer: clabbert2101
Date: 05/21/08 11:38
Chapter: Dean's Idea

more please. please. please. please. please.

Reviewer: harryfan4ever
Date: 10/24/07 12:09
Chapter: In Which Ron's Shoulders Are Commandeered

GIMMEEEEE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
It is so freakingly funny!!
*I'm sorry I'm on a sugar high*
I need the funnyness!!!!!

Author's Response: Thanks, but iI'm still working on the next chapter.:( *curses writer's block* If you want, you could go murder my writer's block with you sugar high!

Reviewer: JustLikeHermione77
Date: 09/18/07 16:04
Chapter: Dean's Idea


Author's Response: I'm terribly sorry for the wait! I'm working on it!

Reviewer: Weezleyruleme
Date: 07/18/07 19:22
Chapter: In Which Ron's Shoulders Are Commandeered

ron left his wand in the dormitry room, remember,?

Author's Response: Haha, yea, I didn't realize that when writing it, but I've figured out a way to make it seem like I did that on purpose! :P

Reviewer: eva_writes
Date: 07/18/07 10:40
Chapter: In Which Ron's Shoulders Are Commandeered

Can the snowmen kill Seamus?? (I never liked him.)

Author's Response: Hahaha! Oh, I don't know, that might happen! But I'm with you, he's probably my least favorite Gryffindor.

Reviewer: JustLikeHermione77
Date: 07/12/07 18:51
Chapter: In Which Ron's Shoulders Are Commandeered


Author's Response: LOL, I'm working on it!!

Reviewer: Lemonhead
Date: 07/05/07 10:37
Chapter: The Great And Ferocious Snowball Fight

You spelt 'desire' with an 's' at the beginning but who really cares about that? I can't wait to read the next chapter!

Author's Response: OK, thanks, I just changed it. Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Last HP Relative
Date: 07/04/07 16:08
Chapter: Dean's Idea

That was a pretty funny start! *wipes tear from ear* lol, i think you should of put something funnier in for the girls. otherwise it was a fabulous start

Author's Response: I plan on throwing in some one-liners for the girls, but do you have any suggestions? GLand you like it!

Reviewer: MissBean
Date: 07/01/07 15:01
Chapter: In Which Ron's Shoulders Are Commandeered

Ha, this story is so ODD-- in a good way. I love the way you write- it seems fast-paced, though I can still understand what's going on. You wrote Ron so hysterically too. I love; "Miniature mes come to take over my gorgeous and masculine shoulders?" I know you stated that you're not a grammar-bug, (I'm definetly not either) but there were quite a few errors I saw. Maybe a double AND a triple check before you post? Hehe, but I don't want to sound mean. I'll be waiting diligently for chapter four! ^__^

Author's Response: Oh no, you don't sound mean at all! I'll definetly work on the grammer for the next chapter. When I wrote most of this chapter, I was hyped up on A LOT of caffine! lol. Caffine deffinetly does wierd things to me. Thanks!

Reviewer: SandiGranger92
Date: 06/30/07 23:14
Chapter: Dean's Idea

one thing
their are 5 boys & 5 girls in each year
though the other two girls names ar not mentiooned
they are still there

Author's Response: Yea, I know, but I didn't want to mess around with characters that we've never met. SO I'm just sticking with the ones we know. Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: HarryPottergal602751
Date: 06/22/07 13:22
Chapter: The Great And Ferocious Snowball Fight


Author's Response: Awww, thanks! Your review just made my day!

Reviewer: CowGirlHPFan
Date: 06/22/07 12:32
Chapter: The Great And Ferocious Snowball Fight

Great!! WOW, a drunk Ron,that was sooo FUNNY!!! Great story,have to go read the next chapter,*~*CowGirlHPFan*~*

Author's Response: Thanks! I think Drunk Ron is now my favorite character to write about!

Reviewer: lily_potter13
Date: 06/21/07 10:02
Chapter: Dean's Idea


Author's Response: Thanks, but I must say, normally writters like a bit more depth to reviews!

Reviewer: GetOutOfMyHead
Date: 06/20/07 2:04
Chapter: In Which Ron's Shoulders Are Commandeered

Mwhaha, awesome story. I laughed so much. =D
Hurry up with chapter 4 or I'll explode.

Author's Response: Thanks! I've kinda hit a writters block, but I'll try to get the next chapet up as soon as I possibly can!

Reviewer: nicholelizabeth1
Date: 06/17/07 21:36
Chapter: In Which Ron's Shoulders Are Commandeered

ok you had said that the wands were in the common room.
that just doesnt make sense. thats all
just wanted to point that out.

Author's Response: Yea, I know, I might be able to work in an answer in later chapters.

Reviewer: MissWatson2you
Date: 06/17/07 17:23
Chapter: In Which Ron's Shoulders Are Commandeered

A very unique idea, and genuinely funny! I only wonder where Ron got his wand, since everyone was supposed to have left them in the common room. Not a big deal, I suppose. Anyway, very nice! I hope to read an update soon--and don't apoligize about the lengths of your submissions--quality is far more important than quantity. :-)

Author's Response: Oh wow, I didn't realize that! Now I'm goign to have to think of a way to make it seem like I did that on purpose! I'm not finished writting the 4th chapter, and then there's the whole entry process thing, so you can probably count on seeing the next chapter within 3 weeks.

Reviewer: Karma_k2
Date: 06/16/07 21:38
Chapter: In Which Ron's Shoulders Are Commandeered

Oh dear. Poor Seamus.

Author's Response: LOL Thanks!

Reviewer: Biscuits
Date: 04/01/07 6:01
Chapter: The Great And Ferocious Snowball Fight

Lol! This fic is slightly odd, but I think that makes it even more funny! I really liked the book from the first chapter, and the whole revenge thing was very funny, if slightly OOC. But hey, snowball fights cause everyone to act weirdly!

Ron's drunkeness was handled very well too, although I can spot a few grammatical or typing errors (desired instead of sesired for example). I really liked the story though, it was an interesting take on a snowball fight and very funny.

Author's Response: Thanks! : ) I love hearing that people love my stories! It makes my day! *huggles* I'm really trying to keep the Ron OOC to a minimum, so please forgive me!

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