Reviews For Salazar's Ring
Reviewer: Sadey_Asawood
Date: 08/30/06 10:54
Chapter: Salazar's Ring

Excellent plot, although Dumbledore was a bit off character. The riddle for the nine doors was great, though.

Reviewer: into_the_chamber94
Date: 07/16/06 12:23
Chapter: Salazar's Ring

this wasn't the best i've read but it was overall good

Author's Response: Well thanks for the complement with a sting.

Reviewer: jpkitty
Date: 07/09/06 21:50
Chapter: Salazar's Ring

that was WONDERFUL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! OMG the way you portrayed dumbledore was awesome.

“Leave it to the press.” She laughed. “And thank you. You don’t realize how much you helped me. Good day.” He bent down and kissed her hand.

That paragraph was a bit hard to read. Was it Dumbledore who said it and "she" is a typo. If not, The next sentence, where Dumbledore speaks, needs to be a new paragraph, sorry, just bugged me a bit.

Author's Response: Yeah, it was Dumbly talking, you're right. Thank you a lot for reviewing. It means a lot.

Reviewer: hannie
Date: 07/09/06 21:41
Chapter: Salazar's Ring

I liked this! I like how the doors multiplied and the riddle was really good. Great job!

Author's Response: Yeah, it took me a while to come up with the riddle. If you figure it out, there is only one door that fits all the descriptions. Well, thanks for reviewing.

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