Reviews For Severus Suffering
Reviewer: Nagini Riddle
Date: 07/07/12 18:27
Chapter: Severus Suffering

I love this pairing! I wish Severus got Lily!!!!!!!!!!! Sigh.
This was a great story! I really enjoyed the very beginning with them as boys, and I enjoyed it when Lily gave Sev a kiss. :) *daydreams*

Reviewer: hazzel
Date: 12/11/07 17:36
Chapter: Severus Suffering

Argh. That was painful to read - but in a GOOD way.

Author's Response: I know, sad isn't it? I'm glad you liked it, Hazzel. And thanks for the review! ~GG

Reviewer: hazzel
Date: 12/11/07 17:36
Chapter: Severus Suffering

Argh. That was painful to read - but in a GOOD way.

Author's Response: yes, sad isn't it?

Reviewer: Padfoot519
Date: 09/08/07 5:46
Chapter: Severus Suffering

so sad i cried but it was a really good story

Author's Response: Aw I know it is a sad story, but I'm glad you liked it. Thanks for the review! ~GG

Reviewer: Hermione Clone
Date: 08/19/07 13:57
Chapter: Severus Suffering

Wow, I feel so bad for Severus. I mean, I'm glad Lily ends up with James, but I wish Snape could have found someone too.
Wonderfully written.

Author's Response: Thank you. :) It is a terribly sad story... I also feel very bad for Snape. He went through so much in his life! I really appreciate your review! :D ~GG

Reviewer: SugarxSpunxQuill
Date: 04/03/07 11:36
Chapter: Severus Suffering

eww, i am sorry, i know that my heart should be melting on the inside or somthing but after the HBP i just cant do that!!! I have read the numerous therious about snapes true allience, but he dealt the final blow!!!
As ever, excellent writing! I love the fan art that goes with this story, it is fabby! Keep up the good work, i love reading your stories. I am not just saying that, i really do!!!

Author's Response: Haha, well I personally have theories about HBP that I KNOW must make him a trustworthy guy deep down, but I see your POV as well. I'm really glad you like this story and my newly made banner. :) This is about as clost to angst-writing I can get, lol. You're fab, SSQ! ~G

Reviewer: Valentinia
Date: 07/20/06 0:38
Chapter: Severus Suffering

Poor Snape. I like how his feelings have been building up for so long and yet Snape never actually gets up the courage to tell her. (whoops... wasn't supposed to call him a coward was I...)

Author's Response: Hehe itís ok. I donít think heís really a coward anyways, even though youíre right about him not having the courage to tell her. Itís that whole constant heartbreak thingÖhe just couldnít bring himself to admit it, especially since he must still resent her for embarrassing him in front of his classmates and for marrying James. What a complex man, that Severus. Thanks for reviewing! ~GG

Reviewer: Marty86Moon
Date: 07/11/06 22:01
Chapter: Severus Suffering

Awww, I loved it! Poor Severus. It's so much easier to like him after reading something so brilliant as your writing. Somehow you managed to achieve fitting what could be quite a long story into one extremely well written chapter.

Wonderful job on this. I honestly don't know how you people do it.

Author's Response: Wow, thanks for the compliments! *blushes* I know what you mean about it being easier to like Severus after reading something that makes you feel sorry for him because that's exactly how I was reading other people's fanfictions about him. I'm really glad you like it and thanks so much for dropping me a line. I appreciate it so much! xx ~GG

Reviewer: ForbiddenLove
Date: 07/10/06 9:32
Chapter: Severus Suffering

Sadness! I felt like I was going to cry because your story was so beautifully written that I could feel every but of Severus's depression and hurt, to be rejected like that! Why couldn't she just marry Snape? Why? Why? Okay, maybe that's going a little too far, but I love the idea you conjure up! It was written, again, very nicely, and everything flowed in harmony. It's going on my favorites!!! Yay!

Author's Response: I know it's so sad. :/ Thanks so much for the wonderful review. I'm very glad you like it! =) GG

Reviewer: PottersChick7
Date: 07/07/06 19:52
Chapter: Severus Suffering


Author's Response: yes.....sad. :/ thanks for the review! ~GG

Reviewer: BlondieFangurl
Date: 07/07/06 12:54
Chapter: Severus Suffering

Ouch, what heartache.

Author's Response: *sniff* I know.... I appreciate the review! ~GG

Reviewer: hpboy13
Date: 07/07/06 11:44
Chapter: Severus Suffering

aawwwww, thats so sad. u actually made me fell sorry for snape, a character that i hate with a passion (almost as much as umbridge). this story was really good, u r an amazing author!

Author's Response: Thanks! I know I always feel so bad for him cuz you know there has to be a billion reasons why he's so mean...poor guy. (I hate Umbridge too...grr!) Thanks so much for reviewing! ~GG

Reviewer: pallavi220
Date: 07/06/06 15:15
Chapter: Severus Suffering


Author's Response: sorry you feel that way

Reviewer: pallavi220
Date: 07/06/06 15:15
Chapter: Severus Suffering


Author's Response: sorry you feel that way

Reviewer: rw_nyko
Date: 07/05/06 20:23
Chapter: Severus Suffering

wow. this was a brilliant story!!!!! ok, yea it was sad and all... and if i only didn't know what a scumbag ;) severus would turn into, i'd feel sorry for him after reading this gem. you're truly an exceptionally gifted writer, hunny, and i just want you and everyone else to know that! not that they already didn't. ;) but yea, wow, the sheer talent, and wordplay and the creativity that you display in this story truly amaze me -- especially considering you wrote it in less than a day!!! i can't wait for you to go pro cuz i wanna be the first in line to own your first novel -- which i can say without a doubt will be a best seller.

Author's Response: Hey now Severus has his reasons for being so bitter...we can hardly blame him, can we? =) Thanks for all the compliments and ego-boosting, dear. Glad you liked this one even though it's sad. ~GG

Reviewer: Sly Severus
Date: 07/05/06 17:41
Chapter: Severus Suffering

Awww...this was sad. Poor Severus. He always seems to lose out in the end. Good story.

Author's Response: I know....actually this is the first sad story I've ever written because I just can't take sad endings. Ironic, huh? Thanks for the review!

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