Reviews For The Bathroom
Reviewer: Ginny_Potter66
Date: 07/15/06 8:32
Chapter: One-shot

really good!!

Author's Response: thanks!

Reviewer: queenofdarkness111
Date: 07/14/06 14:00
Chapter: One-shot

really nice i mean seriously its very good


Author's Response: why thank you very much

Reviewer: Insane
Date: 07/13/06 21:00
Chapter: One-shot

Heheh, parts of that story were so funny (and awkward :P). I had to stifle a laugh at the “You should have told her that Ron is still in the showers!” part.

Author's Response: Yeah, some part were awkward but ron is kinda hopeless when it come to girl so I had to try and show that. I'm glad you liked it and found some parts funny :)

Reviewer: RupertsPheonix
Date: 07/13/06 15:57
Chapter: One-shot

Oh, that was really cute. I really enjoyed it! =)
--RP

Author's Response: Thanks! wow, i'm getting load of positive feedback = )

Reviewer: ginnyp_harryp
Date: 07/13/06 13:45
Chapter: One-shot

i loved this story!!
i never did lik "lav lav"

Author's Response: Lav-lav is ok. i think the main reason most people don't like her is because she went out with Ron, postponing the whole Ron/Hermione thing

Reviewer: jj_lea123
Date: 07/13/06 13:33
Chapter: One-shot

nice plot! it was good! : )

Author's Response: thanks! : )

Reviewer: BlackPearl
Date: 07/13/06 9:14
Chapter: One-shot

why couldn't you have harry kiss her you often hug people that are strictly your friends

Author's Response: Well they were going to kiss, but then, that arguement in HBP betweeen Ron and Ginny when he walks in on her and Dean snogging kinda stopped me because i didn't want to do an arguement. But then again, he did give Harry his 'blessing'. Hmm...there's plenty of time for them to kiss...their whole lives) Oh, i like you name too. Isn't POTC just the best?

Reviewer: HermioneHair
Date: 07/13/06 5:06
Chapter: One-shot

I really liked it. Good work!!! XXXXX

Author's Response: yay I hoped i'd see some old names coming back. Good to know you liked this one too.

Reviewer: mcgonagallfan
Date: 07/13/06 4:35
Chapter: One-shot

That was so sweet. I couldn't stop grinning when i was reading the bathroom scene.
10/10

Author's Response: Thanks for the high mark :) I couldn't help grinning when i wrote the bathroom scene.

Reviewer: AILily
Date: 07/12/06 22:57
Chapter: One-shot

OMG!! Sooooo funny! Hermione n Ron are totally weird.

Author's Response: Well, i don't thnk they're TOTALLY wierd. But Ron does act a bit strange sometimes when he's arund girls (did i tell you i've invented a broomstick that'll reach upiter? oh, but then again, she was a veela...)

Reviewer: HarryPotter is my LIFE
Date: 07/12/06 22:41
Chapter: One-shot

Here I am, laying in my bed with my laptop and my stomach, and Dean makes the comment about sending Hermione into the bathroom with Ron in the showers. I think my computer may be permanentaly damamged from all the shaking the came frmo my burst of laughter.

“I…erm…can you not watch me while I clean my teeth?” she asked awkwardly.

“Oh, sure.”
-I found this line so funny. I don't know why, it just seemed so odd. Well, then, I suppose I wouldn't want my crush to see me brushing my teeth, very foamy.

Very cute, rather fluffy, but still good.

Author's Response: ha ha ha I almost choked on a pringle when I read this. It really brightened up my evening. Thanks for the feedback. Hopefully your laptop isn't permanently damaged...good to know you found it funny.

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