rollicky, both in the tongue and in theme! Nice poem, pooja. ^_^
Author's Response: Aww thanka, Pauie! I'm so happy that you like it!
Hey Pooja, that was an adorable poem.
Author's Response: Ooh! Thanks! :)
I LOVE it! Very cute! Good job! One of my favorites!
Author's Response: *Whoop!* I am so happy! Thank you for your lovely review! I am so... so... glad!!! :)
Great poem! Sweet, romantic, and pretty funny. I loved it! 11/10!
Author's Response: Thank you for the review! I cannot say how pleased I am. :)
LOL That was kind of funny!
Author's Response: Thank u 4 that compliment! :)
aww that was really cute! i found one little mistake though: "She said, “I was talking you, not a garden mouse.”" i think it should be "I was talking TO you," but otherwise its a great poem! well done! 9/10
Author's Response: Thank u 4 letting me know about the mistake; I guess I must have missed that small corner in the poem. Most of all, thanks 4 reviewing! :)
Author's Response: Thank u again! :)
Author's Response: I am glad that u think it was cute. Thank u! :)
That was really good! I especially liked the last couple lines. =]
Author's Response: Thank u! I am so happy that u liked the poem. The last lines were my favourites too! :)
First reviewer! *plays kazoo* Great poem!
Author's Response: Thank you 4 being my first reviewer, and I am glad u liked the poem. :) :) :) Three smileys!