Reviews For Wonderful Emotion
Reviewer: MJ_Padfoot
Date: 11/22/07 14:27
Chapter: Chapter 2

Update soon please! This is really good. ~MJ

Reviewer: MJ_Padfoot
Date: 11/22/07 14:20
Chapter: Chapter 1

This is good. I cannot wait to read more! ~MJ

Reviewer: Gryffindor Lion
Date: 07/14/07 13:27
Chapter: Chapter 2

you have to update soon!!!!!

Reviewer: Gryffindor Lion
Date: 07/14/07 13:26
Chapter: Chapter 2

you have to update soon!!!!!

Reviewer: Gryffindor Lion
Date: 07/14/07 13:16
Chapter: Chapter 1

very good

Reviewer: Lily_rocks
Date: 06/13/07 2:10
Chapter: Chapter 2

I like this story. Please update soon!!!!!! ;-)

Reviewer: Queen_Lily
Date: 05/21/07 18:22
Chapter: Chapter 2

Hey--my name's Amanda too! But I don't have blonde hair. It's brown. And I can't say what color my eyes are, because they change from mixes of grey, blue, and green. Yeah, weird, I know. But hurry to update -- I wanna see -- well, actually, read -- what happens!!!

Reviewer: Queen_Lily
Date: 05/21/07 17:58
Chapter: Chapter 1

A little mistake that I have to point out: When people Disapparate, it makes a 'pop' sound, but when they Apparate, it makes a 'crack' sound. Sorry, I'm a stickler for grammar and spelling, just had to point that out! Sorry!

Reviewer: oceanianow
Date: 01/17/07 18:47
Chapter: Chapter 2

Oh, I love it! I like the twist with Remus declining Head Boy before making Potter the new one. I can't wait for chapter three!

Reviewer: Chris_04
Date: 12/30/06 13:26
Chapter: Chapter 2

That was good, I liked it :)

Reviewer: snowy_owl_92
Date: 08/23/06 9:57
Chapter: Chapter 2

i loved the chapter! update soon so i don't throw a tantrum!

Reviewer: some_kinda_superstar
Date: 07/28/06 2:49
Chapter: Chapter 2

Aaargh! Ferex House is such a jerk! I was fuming after I read that! Still, fantastic chapter. The one thing I didn't like was that McGonagall just told Lily about Remus like that. There's no way she would have blabbed his biggest secret without making sure it was ok. She would have left it to him to tell. Aside from that, I loved all of it! More soon!!!! =)

Reviewer: invisiblenudnik
Date: 07/27/06 21:42
Chapter: Chapter 1

Interesting...I love your theory on how James became head boy; I always thought it was out of the blue. At least you made it seem relistic. One thing I'd like to point out, though, is Sirius' charaterization. Despite what fandom likes, Sirius wasn't ever a 'ladies man'. While I've seen worst fics where it goes overboard, I would suggest watching how Sirius acts around women. He might be loud, funny, prankster that was known for it, but it doesn't mean he was the most popular kid in school and had all the ladies swooning over him. Just a reminder.

Oh, also, a little word confusion I caught: The four Marauders, wearing black tuxedos, stood at the front of the church as the flower girls and maids of honour came down the centre isle. The italic word should be the world 'aisle'. And isle is an island.

Otherwise, very good!

Reviewer: some_kinda_superstar
Date: 07/11/06 2:47
Chapter: Chapter 1

oooh what's happened that lily's so surprised about? i wanna know!! anways, great story and really well written, i can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: You'll have to wait and find out! :D I'm so glad that you like it! Updates are commin!

Reviewer: BJ_prongs
Date: 07/10/06 16:36
Chapter: Chapter 1

very good, i love it, i want more plz, i just love it
great job


Author's Response: thanks so much! chapter 2 is on it's way!

You must login (register) to review.
Information
Find out everything you need to know about the site right here.


We have stories and authors in this archive.

:

RSS
Choose Theme:
SOCIAL MEDIA
     
MOST RECENT
Tom Riddle and the Cave of Living Waters by alittletiefling 6th-7th Years
What would happen if Tom Marvolo Riddle had been adopted by well-meaning squibs?...
Molly Weasley's Apple Dumplings by Oregonian 1st-2nd Years
Molly has studied history and knows the old stories, but she also knows what...
Early, Early Spring: Professor Sinistra Reflects by Oregonian 1st-2nd Years
I didn't know much about Professor Sinistra, the Astronomy Professor, until...
FEATURED
It Takes Two to Tango by lucca4 3rd-5th Years
They cannot keep doing this; it is only a matter of whose resolve will break...
In The Heat Of The Morning by welshdevondragon 3rd-5th Years
Summary: In the heat of the morning, Katie and Leanne lie in the grounds...
Can't Fight the Moonlight by Acacia Carter 6th-7th Years
A life-changing disaster at work drives Neville Longbottom to seek aid from...
The History Teacher by iLuna17 6th-7th Years
Maybe he didn’t just love history, maybe he loved being a history teacher.
white on white by Padfoot11333 6th-7th Years
Three vignettes about scars, love, and sex.
CATEGORIES