Reviews For Perfection
Reviewer: LunaTuna
Date: 11/25/06 12:37
Chapter: Perfection - a love poem

That's awesome! I love it! You are a really good author!

Author's Response: aw...
*blushes*
im glad you like it
xxxxxxxxx

Reviewer: ForbiddenLove
Date: 07/28/06 12:57
Chapter: Perfection - a love poem

It must be Snape right? Whoever it was about, it was lovely. There's no need to be envious of me when you have such talent yourself. I'm glad you recommended this to me, I loved it and I'm putting it on my favorites.

Author's Response: Awww!!! Thank you!!! Yay, somebody likes my story "does a little dance" Yeah, it was about Snape, I'm glad somebody got it. I've had "is it about Harry/Ginny, Ron/Hermione, Draco/Ginny..." x x x long live the fairies x x x

Reviewer: StellaSirius
Date: 07/11/06 13:38
Chapter: Perfection - a love poem

Ohhh, so cute! A Snape fan! You wouldn't, by any chance, happen to be a Ravenclaw? I really liked the poem. I do have a question, though. Who is the character that likes him? Is there a background for her?

Author's Response: That characters me!!! "blushing" I take it you love Snape too. He's great. Thanks for your review!!! x x x long live the fairies x x x

Reviewer: aintcrazy4you
Date: 07/05/06 18:19
Chapter: Perfection - a love poem

Good job, with the poem! I really liked it.


Author's Response: Thanks!!! I don't think the poem turned out too bad considering I can't usually write poetry!!! x x x long live the fairies x x x

Reviewer: hufflepuffgal
Date: 07/05/06 10:34
Chapter: Perfection - a love poem

I liked this. I loved how you used "Not prim or polished, but perfect" repetitivly. That was my fav. line in your oem. Good job.

Author's Response: Thanks for your review!!! I'm usually not good at writing poetry, but in English, we were made to write a love poem that focused on the inperfections of people, and this idea came into my head. There is a challenge that I wrote to write a story or poem based on the same guidelines if you are interested!!! x x x long live the fairies x x x

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