huzah! that was great. errrr... i'm running out of things to say ummmmm........oh yeah i love the pheonix thing were he is still a pheonix.....yeah i really do
Author's Response: Thanks for reading! I'm really glad people are still enjoying my work.
the whole pheonix thing is SWEET ! ! ! ! ! ! !
eeerrrrr...... i don't mean to nitpick but when lupin takes 20 points from slytherin you spelled throw wrong, no offense, otherwise the chapter straight out rocked
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i completely understand
huzah ! ! ! ! ! ! i also love the idea of the quadruplits, can't wiat to see the trouble they get into.
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tha's cool with the Archaeology (i think i spelled that wrong) that's what i am going to head for, the story is awesome so far, but you know it's the first chapter
This is one of the best things ive read in a long long time..ur a great writer!! BRAVO!!!
Author's Response: Thanks very much!
Both of your fics are Brilliant ^^ i hope you keep writing.
Author's Response: Thank you! I am continuing to write, but I've left fanfiction and begun a novel of my own. We'll see, right?
nice talenet 4 writing..... loved it!
Author's Response: Thank you very much! I'm glad people are still enjoying the story. =)
Ooh, i like the suspense. This is one of my favorite chapters so far.
Author's Response: I think I was able to accomplish suspense fairly well throughout the story, hopefully you'll agree. (and let me know.)
Great story. I don't normally review, so that means that I rank this high among the fanfic stories I have read on this site. Last night I stayed up until 4 AM because I kept saying to myself "just one more chapter, ok one more, one more chapter and I'll go to bed . . ." Good luck with your book, I'll definitely be checking it out if it is published.
Author's Response: Thank you very much! I'm glad it caught and held your attention. =)
It was so well thought out and planned wth aa touch of intriuge through out the whole story makes for tasteful reading
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm very glad you enjoyed it. I appreciate you thinking of my story as tasteful; I really don't appreciate the excessive profanity and other less tasteful things I've found in some places, so I made sure my story was clean. =)
YAY!!!! Sirius lives!!!! 10/10
Author's Response: Yeah, I just couldn't kill him. I'm just too soft. =)
Here we go again! Sirius, you had better watch yourself! 10/10
Author's Response: =) I'm glad you're enjoying yourself!
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!! Sirius, You stupid hero, why did you have to do that?! WHY??!! 10/10 Well done, you mad genius author! Must...Read...More...Now... Well you get the idea! hehe
Author's Response: I'm glad you don't have to wait anymore; two weels before the next chapter was tough at this point.
“Not consciously, I’m sure,” Sirius agreed, before casting a spell of animation over one of the Death Eaters who was still asleep. The man’s body climbed to his feet and began to dance comically around the clearing. “Still, once you are unconscious there’s no telling what you might do. I imagine your master isn’t one to wait for an explanation,” Sirius finished coldly. He let realization and fear fill Stan’s expression as the high-kicking Death Eater pranced around them, and then stunned the man who had betrayed his family.
“That was well done,” Chris said cheerfully, as the animated Death Eater collapsed again. “I’ve never seen anyone pirouette quite so gracefully; if he didn’t have to spend the rest of his life in Azkaban, I’d say he has a future in ballet.”
“Maybe they’ll put on a show for the other inmates,” Lee said thoughtfully.
“Indeed,” Brian said, rubbing his chin thoughtfully. “With the right choreography, the Dancing Death Eaters could create quite a sensation. I’m sure they’d be booked at prisons around the world.”
Death Eaters doing ballet? And I thought I'd read and seen it all! *giggles* I should keep that for future fanfic ideas, but then again, there is always Harry with an Elvis Prestly hairdo or Ron with a Dolly Parton bob! *laughs* 10/10
Author's Response: Thanks! I think either of your ideas merit further investigation. =)
Youre an excellent writer, and i look forward to reading a published novel. Until then i am more than content reading as much fanfic as you can muster up!
Author's Response: Thank you very much! I'll try and do both as much as possible!
This story was every bit as excellent as Harry Potter and the Mind's Eye. In ways I think I might even have liked it more. I loved all of your own individual characters that you created in this story, and once again your creativity was astounding! When your novel gets published (And I know that it will!) please let me know it's release date and title because you have so much talent and I would be excited to read anything you've written. I give you about a million Kudos and I eagerly await your book and any fanfictions you may right in the future.
Author's Response: Wow, thanks very much. I certainly hope I'll be able to get published. I'm planning on starting to write this week, as soon as I'm finished moving. It's always a pain. I'll let you know!
