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Reviews For His Last Breath

Name: goldensunshine (Signed) · Date: 03/07/11 0:02 · For: His Last Breath
It's a lovely snapshot into what James and Lily were doing the last moments of their lives. You also captured James so well when he's confronting Voldemort, great job! It also made me cry.

Name: LilyflowernProngs (Signed) · Date: 12/18/08 23:32 · For: His Last Breath
This is perfect. sadbut so beautiful! well done

Name: coughtpotter x x x (Signed) · Date: 01/09/08 14:05 · For: His Last Breath
sad i think im gonna cry

Name: Penny Flamel (Signed) · Date: 11/10/07 11:40 · For: His Last Breath
Why did they have to die *sobs*, so sad...

Name: illuminationa (Signed) · Date: 09/09/07 10:33 · For: His Last Breath
Awwww.... so sad, it made me cry.
People always tell me not to cry from these fics because it's all okay in the end, but it's not because JKR had to kill of all six of my favorite charries. :(
Beautifully written, keep up the good work. :)

Author's Response: Yeah, I end up crying regardless of whether something worked out in the end. :( Especially with this really, really sad video I saw on YouTube of Ron dying.. That made me baw like a baby.
Anyway, I'm really glad you like it! Thanks fore reviewing. :)

Name: hpfreak101 (Signed) · Date: 08/23/07 15:52 · For: His Last Breath
I adored this. It made me cry.

Author's Response: Aww, I cried writing it, too. <3 I'm glad you liked it! Thanks for reviewing. :)

Name: Tweak (Signed) · Date: 08/01/07 5:43 · For: His Last Breath
You made me cry! This was very well written. Great job. It's just so sad, though....

Author's Response: Thank you so much! :) I was crying writing it, too... :(

Name: NeLLyRaE (Signed) · Date: 11/09/06 13:57 · For: His Last Breath
I loved it! You yook a risk making it soo sad and it really payed off! very very good! can't wait to see more of your work!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! :) I'm really glad you liked it.

Name: babekitty_92 (Signed) · Date: 10/22/06 2:40 · For: His Last Breath
Oh! That was really sad!!! I wanted to cry, it was really good. 10/10

Author's Response: Thank you!

Name: The Key Maker (Signed) · Date: 08/11/06 9:56 · For: His Last Breath
Good story. Just wish that everything had a happy ending. Don't you?

Author's Response: Oh, all the time. It would be so cool to see how they'd be if they were alive, and how they would parent Harry. I think that would be the funniest. James would always try to give Harry things that Lily wouldn't let him have, and then get into a silly fight. It would have been hilarious...

Name: muggle_lover35630 (Signed) · Date: 08/02/06 14:42 · For: His Last Breath
omg, i love this story! as soon as i get the chance, im adding it to my favorites! dont you just wish all men were like that... some are, others.. well all we can do is pray for them... lol good job!

Author's Response: Lol! Yeah, if all guys were like James, it would only be absolute heaven. *sigh*

Name: Sirius Krummy Fan (Signed) · Date: 07/14/06 13:29 · For: His Last Breath
Oh my gosh, that brought tears to my eyes, really sad but very great!

Author's Response: Thank you! :)

Name: anjell214 (Signed) · Date: 07/13/06 10:37 · For: His Last Breath
So beautiful I'm speechless whiping a tear from my eye

Author's Response: Aww..

Name: tonks_667 (Signed) · Date: 07/13/06 4:49 · For: His Last Breath
Waaaa!!!!! You took my idea.... I'm not blaming you..... But I was going to do a songfic for the wedding with the song..... Now they';lll think I stole it from you.......Ah well can't blame you fro getting it done first and probably better then I could. Props out to you!!!!!!

Author's Response: Ooh, really? Which song were you going to do? I bet you could have done it better than I did. I did this in about an hour. Not that fine-tuned, really.

Name: Sea_Lily (Signed) · Date: 07/11/06 21:56 · For: His Last Breath
that was sweet i wanted to cry, if you write like that i'll take more interest in your writing. this is the first time i read your stuff

Author's Response: I plan to get more fics up here soon. I just don't know how soon. :p

Name: sirius_s_child (Signed) · Date: 07/11/06 20:56 · For: His Last Breath
awww that was so sad! it almost made me cry! hang on, tissue...*blows nose* sorry, i just loved that so much! it was beautiful!

Author's Response: Aww, thanks!

Name: goobersam9 (Signed) · Date: 07/11/06 18:51 · For: His Last Breath
AWW!! I loved it but I want to cry. You see I live in this world of denial in which Lily and James didn't die but this fic slightly shattered that. Now my eye is twitching......

Though I am crushed- I still loved it. And It wasn't rushed really....

Author's Response: Aww, I'm sorry I had to crush your denial. Things would undoubtedly be better with Lily and James still here...

Name: cedrics_chick (Signed) · Date: 07/10/06 23:44 · For: His Last Breath
oh ilike it I also read it in Fanfiction

Author's Response: Ooh really? Awesome! Thanks for the review!

Name: HermionePotter (Signed) · Date: 07/10/06 23:40 · For: His Last Breath
Oh my god... the ending was so sad!! Even though we all know what happens, you made it seem so realistic!

Author's Response: Yay! Thanks!

Name: lovingu4ever (Signed) · Date: 07/10/06 17:32 · For: His Last Breath
geez you almost had me crying there, good one shot.

Author's Response: Aww! Really? Thank you!

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