Reviews For His Last Breath
Reviewer: goldensunshine
Date: 03/07/11 0:02
Chapter: His Last Breath

It's a lovely snapshot into what James and Lily were doing the last moments of their lives. You also captured James so well when he's confronting Voldemort, great job! It also made me cry.

Reviewer: LilyflowernProngs
Date: 12/18/08 23:32
Chapter: His Last Breath

This is perfect. sadbut so beautiful! well done

Reviewer: coughtpotter x x x
Date: 01/09/08 14:05
Chapter: His Last Breath

sad i think im gonna cry

Reviewer: Penny Flamel
Date: 11/10/07 11:40
Chapter: His Last Breath

Why did they have to die *sobs*, so sad...

Reviewer: illuminationa
Date: 09/09/07 10:33
Chapter: His Last Breath

Awwww.... so sad, it made me cry.
People always tell me not to cry from these fics because it's all okay in the end, but it's not because JKR had to kill of all six of my favorite charries. :(
Beautifully written, keep up the good work. :)

Author's Response: Yeah, I end up crying regardless of whether something worked out in the end. :( Especially with this really, really sad video I saw on YouTube of Ron dying.. That made me baw like a baby.
Anyway, I'm really glad you like it! Thanks fore reviewing. :)

Reviewer: hpfreak101
Date: 08/23/07 15:52
Chapter: His Last Breath

I adored this. It made me cry.

Author's Response: Aww, I cried writing it, too. <3 I'm glad you liked it! Thanks for reviewing. :)

Reviewer: Tweak
Date: 08/01/07 5:43
Chapter: His Last Breath

You made me cry! This was very well written. Great job. It's just so sad, though....

Author's Response: Thank you so much! :) I was crying writing it, too... :(

Reviewer: NeLLyRaE
Date: 11/09/06 13:57
Chapter: His Last Breath

I loved it! You yook a risk making it soo sad and it really payed off! very very good! can't wait to see more of your work!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! :) I'm really glad you liked it.

Reviewer: babekitty_92
Date: 10/22/06 2:40
Chapter: His Last Breath

Oh! That was really sad!!! I wanted to cry, it was really good. 10/10

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: The Key Maker
Date: 08/11/06 9:56
Chapter: His Last Breath

Good story. Just wish that everything had a happy ending. Don't you?

Author's Response: Oh, all the time. It would be so cool to see how they'd be if they were alive, and how they would parent Harry. I think that would be the funniest. James would always try to give Harry things that Lily wouldn't let him have, and then get into a silly fight. It would have been hilarious...

Reviewer: muggle_lover35630
Date: 08/02/06 14:42
Chapter: His Last Breath

omg, i love this story! as soon as i get the chance, im adding it to my favorites! dont you just wish all men were like that... some are, others.. well all we can do is pray for them... lol good job!

Author's Response: Lol! Yeah, if all guys were like James, it would only be absolute heaven. *sigh*

Reviewer: Sirius Krummy Fan
Date: 07/14/06 13:29
Chapter: His Last Breath

Oh my gosh, that brought tears to my eyes, really sad but very great!

Author's Response: Thank you! :)

Reviewer: anjell214
Date: 07/13/06 10:37
Chapter: His Last Breath

So beautiful I'm speechless whiping a tear from my eye

Author's Response: Aww..

Reviewer: tonks_667
Date: 07/13/06 4:49
Chapter: His Last Breath

Waaaa!!!!! You took my idea.... I'm not blaming you..... But I was going to do a songfic for the wedding with the song..... Now they';lll think I stole it from you.......Ah well can't blame you fro getting it done first and probably better then I could. Props out to you!!!!!!

Author's Response: Ooh, really? Which song were you going to do? I bet you could have done it better than I did. I did this in about an hour. Not that fine-tuned, really.

Reviewer: Sea_Lily
Date: 07/11/06 21:56
Chapter: His Last Breath

that was sweet i wanted to cry, if you write like that i'll take more interest in your writing. this is the first time i read your stuff

Author's Response: I plan to get more fics up here soon. I just don't know how soon. :p

Reviewer: sirius_s_child
Date: 07/11/06 20:56
Chapter: His Last Breath

awww that was so sad! it almost made me cry! hang on, tissue...*blows nose* sorry, i just loved that so much! it was beautiful!

Author's Response: Aww, thanks!

Reviewer: goobersam9
Date: 07/11/06 18:51
Chapter: His Last Breath

AWW!! I loved it but I want to cry. You see I live in this world of denial in which Lily and James didn't die but this fic slightly shattered that. Now my eye is twitching......

Though I am crushed- I still loved it. And It wasn't rushed really....

Author's Response: Aww, I'm sorry I had to crush your denial. Things would undoubtedly be better with Lily and James still here...

Reviewer: cedrics_chick
Date: 07/10/06 23:44
Chapter: His Last Breath

oh ilike it I also read it in Fanfiction

Author's Response: Ooh really? Awesome! Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: HermionePotter
Date: 07/10/06 23:40
Chapter: His Last Breath

Oh my god... the ending was so sad!! Even though we all know what happens, you made it seem so realistic!

Author's Response: Yay! Thanks!

Reviewer: lovingu4ever
Date: 07/10/06 17:32
Chapter: His Last Breath

geez you almost had me crying there, good one shot.

Author's Response: Aww! Really? Thank you!

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