Great poem!! Can fell it...and see it! 8)
Author's Response: I'm glad that you like it! I have to say that I love poetry, even though when my poems could not be considered within poetry rules (there are so many things to be considered when writing poetry 0.o ). It's nice to know you enjoyed, thanks for your review!
Aww, this one sounds so much more unhappy than longing... :-( I think I enjoyed it just as much though. Great Job!
Author's Response: Ah, yes, this is one is a little bit sad (and I'd even dare to say it's bittersweet). Unfortunately, that's how I was feeling in that moment :/ But, oh well, things happen for a reason. Thank you very much for reviewing :)
This was a cute piece of poetry. I liked it a lot. The meter was a little bit off in some places, but it was a freeverse, and so it doesn't draw so much away from the real meaning of the poem. I agree with you, the whole feeling is very peaceful. This is a more...floaty kind of poetry than I have usually read. I like it quite a lot. Great job!
Author's Response: Hi Stella! Aw, thank you very much :) It's good to know that you liked. And yes, some persons have told me that the meter is a bit off, but I hope it didn't distract you so much :) I like to do poetry, and it's good to know that it is appreciated :D Thanks for reviewing!
That was good.
Author's Response: Thanks!
Awww that was so sweet! That muse must certainly be an awesome inspiration! Your second poem, and I am not dissapointed! (though I don't generally read poetry.
*jumps giddily on her computer chair* yay! I can't wait for your chaptered story! I am keeping my eyes peeled. O_O lol.
Author's Response: Hi, Lisa :)
I like this poem more than "Longing..." actually, and it took me less time to write 0_o Heh, leave my muse alone! (lol!).
Hahaha, that really made me laugh, haha. I'm hoping that today I'll receive her answer. If that is so, today I'll submit the first chapter! I'm half excited and half scared, but the truth is that I'm more excited than scared.
Right now I have 5 chapters written down but a lot of plots in my head (plots that will fit into the bigger plot), so I really, really, really, really (and one more really) hope I won't disappoint any of you :)
As always, thank you very much for your review, Lisa :D
I really like this poem! I could feel the longing and the wanting for the dream to be real. I look forward to finally reading your long talked about chaptered story!
Author's Response: Hi, Cheslin! I'm very glad that you liked it. It just came to my head (at 3:00 am because at normal hours of the day I've been beta-ing restlessly O.o) and I had to write it.
Taking about beta-ing, I'm sorry for taking so long to give my input about the changes you made (actually, I'm not sure if I did or did not :x I'll write to you today with no exception!).
Yes, heh, I know I've talked about it a lot without actually getting it up. Hopefully, that will change ;)
Thanks for reviewing!