I wish it wasnt a one shot
I love it. The tragic ending makes it beautiful.
that was a very romeo and juliet ending there.
so sad!!! that draco loved her but she wanted him to kill her
that was so sad. i reminds me of romeo and juliet. great for ur first one. good job.
Wow that was dark but it was good and if the pair could ever be together that is probably how it would end.
a beautiful story, keep writing because it's really good.
oh my god this story was so sad why does voldmort have to win? it is sort of like romeo and juliiet the story has a meaning and depth.
wow thats about all i can say. oh yeah
wasenst that a bit tramatic
so sad and beautiful.
I thought Avada Kedavra was supposed to kill instently, not like that. Besides that, it was okay. 7/10
That is so sad! i dont think i liked it very much...
Very much like the Anakin/Padme-like story, but it's original.
OMG, toooooooooo sad!!! =( I usually try to stay away from sad/angsty stories. *sigh* But you have done a good job.
Draco reminded me of Anakin/Darth Vader of Star Wars...
why so sad of a story?
Ooooh...a Anakin/Padme flashback. Sad. Very sad. I loved it!
OMG!!! This is sooooo sad!!! "sniffing uncontrollably" I'm not usually a D/H shipper, but this is so well written that you might have me converted! (That's only a might mind you, I still prefer R/H!!!) Keep writing. You're a great writer!!! "sniff . . . sniff . . ."
x x x long live the fairies x x x
ooh! how evil you are to draco, ladybug9117!! such a sad story, but i bet it would have been beautiful if you elaborated all the sorrow (=
awsome story! WOW! Keep writing! Very very good!