Reviewer: cmbluey98
Date: 12/04/10 20:12
Chapter: A Game of Cards


Reviewer: mlpony22
Date: 04/09/08 16:41
Chapter: A Game of Cards

That was great! ere did u get ur inspiration from?
-may the muffins be with you.

Reviewer: tha_looney_one
Date: 10/13/07 14:27
Chapter: A Game of Cards

Funny monkey!!

Reviewer: lilykins123
Date: 09/15/07 11:58
Chapter: A Game of Cards

more more

add girls

NOT RUDE (badly)

Reviewer: mrspotter777
Date: 03/17/07 19:00
Chapter: A Game of Cards

awesome, although a little hard to uderstand (i suppose thats because i dont know how to play poker) but anyway, I cant say i didnt enjoy sirius and james taking thier shirts off LOL

Reviewer: hpfreak101
Date: 03/08/07 18:25
Chapter: A Game of Cards

very entertaining

Reviewer: ILuvHP4Ev3r
Date: 02/18/07 20:55
Chapter: A Game of Cards

lol i liked this

Author's Response: Thank you very much. Keep reading and writing!

Reviewer: Heiress_of_Insanity_
Date: 02/07/07 13:15
Chapter: A Game of Cards

Good story, I liked it!~H_o_I_

Author's Response: Thank you, and thanks for reading.

Reviewer: ellienellie111
Date: 01/12/07 18:40
Chapter: A Game of Cards

that's great! should've had some girls walk in on them. or be playing w/ them.

Author's Response: Thank you, and thanks for reading. I wanted to catch the Marauders at their most natural, and also I didn't really think anyone would know about the Shack besides the Marauders and Dumbledore, so that's why there are no females present in this story.

Reviewer: DogLover4Life
Date: 12/27/06 21:07
Chapter: A Game of Cards

Wait, so Sirus and James both took off their shirts? *fan girl squeal*

Author's Response: Yes, they do. I thought it was a nice touch. Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: HanilarLion
Date: 11/25/06 21:29
Chapter: A Game of Cards

That was the funniest thing I've read in a long time! I laughed so loudly, I thought my parents would hear me from upstairs! I loved the concept too--it's not something I would think of. I applaud your ingenuity. 10/10

Author's Response: Thank you very much... I'm glad it made you laugh! Sometimes when I write things and revise them so many times I sort of forget how funny they could be. I hope you read my other stories as well.

Reviewer: Griffindorgirl05
Date: 08/04/06 14:31
Chapter: A Game of Cards

great story

Author's Response: Thank you.

Reviewer: Iwishiwern Tamuggle
Date: 08/03/06 13:40
Chapter: A Game of Cards


Author's Response: ... thanks for the laughs.

Reviewer: steel
Date: 07/27/06 13:57
Chapter: A Game of Cards

there are some words that my family use as a way of telling someone they're very idiotic and stupid after they do anything related to the word stupid. one of those words is POOF. so now i shall use this word for those reasons stated and simply because i thought this story was for lack of better words, STUPIDLY FUNNY. so POOF TO THE MAX!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: Er... thank you. I think.

Reviewer: Bellaitaliana
Date: 07/22/06 20:57
Chapter: A Game of Cards

aww i liked this story soo cute!!! like the strip poker idea:) lol good job!

Author's Response: Thank you very mcuh.

Reviewer: Gryffindorgirl54321
Date: 07/19/06 22:35
Chapter: A Game of Cards

that was funny

Author's Response: Thank you.

Reviewer: MrsDracoMalfoy001
Date: 07/18/06 11:57
Chapter: A Game of Cards

that was soooo funny!!! i would soo pay to see that!! just thinking and reading about it gets pictures in your head. i love this story!! Sirius and James are just soo cool. lupin is to but not in the sme way. and peter i hate him sooo much!! i love this story soo much

Author's Response: Thank you very, very much. I'm so glad you liked it. I hope you continue reading.

Reviewer: Schmerg_The_Impaler
Date: 07/17/06 12:40
Chapter: A Game of Cards

Wow, that was hilarious! I really loved your portrayal of Peter-- he seemed a lot more like a real person than the two-dimensional portrayal he gets from other stories.
I saw that picture on Artdungeon as well, actually.

Author's Response: Thank you very much. Good picture, no? Hope you continue reading.

Reviewer: HarryPotter is my LIFE
Date: 07/14/06 2:44
Chapter: A Game of Cards

That was funny. A bit pointless, really, but definetly a good fic. I liked in this one, how Peter wasn't absent or too hopeless at anything.

Author's Response: Thanks very much. Yeah, it was a bit of fluff, but I needed a good character study for Remus and Peter and I thought that the picture I saw on artdungeon was a perfect setting for that. I'm glad you liked it and found it humerous. Happy reading!

Reviewer: LadyKnight
Date: 07/13/06 11:53
Chapter: A Game of Cards


That was adoreable! probablly the only Marauders-era fic I've read where I didn't feel like I was constantly being bashed over the head by what Peter's going to become, but still saw bits of forshadowing. Hehe...just normal teenage boys. gotta love 'em.

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