That was great! ere did u get ur inspiration from?
-may the muffins be with you.
more more
add girls
NOT RUDE (badly)
awesome, although a little hard to uderstand (i suppose thats because i dont know how to play poker) but anyway, I cant say i didnt enjoy sirius and james taking thier shirts off LOL
lol i liked this
Author's Response: Thank you very much. Keep reading and writing!
Good story, I liked it!~H_o_I_
Author's Response: Thank you, and thanks for reading.
that's great! should've had some girls walk in on them. or be playing w/ them.
Author's Response: Thank you, and thanks for reading. I wanted to catch the Marauders at their most natural, and also I didn't really think anyone would know about the Shack besides the Marauders and Dumbledore, so that's why there are no females present in this story.
Wait, so Sirus and James both took off their shirts? *fan girl squeal*
Author's Response: Yes, they do. I thought it was a nice touch. Thanks for reading.
That was the funniest thing I've read in a long time! I laughed so loudly, I thought my parents would hear me from upstairs! I loved the concept too--it's not something I would think of. I applaud your ingenuity. 10/10
Author's Response: Thank you very much... I'm glad it made you laugh! Sometimes when I write things and revise them so many times I sort of forget how funny they could be. I hope you read my other stories as well.
great story
Author's Response: Thank you.
haha
Author's Response: ... thanks for the laughs.
there are some words that my family use as a way of telling someone they're very idiotic and stupid after they do anything related to the word stupid. one of those words is POOF. so now i shall use this word for those reasons stated and simply because i thought this story was for lack of better words, STUPIDLY FUNNY. so POOF TO THE MAX!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Er... thank you. I think.
aww i liked this story soo cute!!! like the strip poker idea:) lol good job!
Author's Response: Thank you very mcuh.
that was funny
Author's Response: Thank you.
that was soooo funny!!! i would soo pay to see that!! just thinking and reading about it gets pictures in your head. i love this story!! Sirius and James are just soo cool. lupin is to but not in the sme way. and peter i hate him sooo much!! i love this story soo much
Author's Response: Thank you very, very much. I'm so glad you liked it. I hope you continue reading.
Wow, that was hilarious! I really loved your portrayal of Peter-- he seemed a lot more like a real person than the two-dimensional portrayal he gets from other stories.
I saw that picture on Artdungeon as well, actually.
Author's Response: Thank you very much. Good picture, no? Hope you continue reading.
That was funny. A bit pointless, really, but definetly a good fic. I liked in this one, how Peter wasn't absent or too hopeless at anything.
Author's Response: Thanks very much. Yeah, it was a bit of fluff, but I needed a good character study for Remus and Peter and I thought that the picture I saw on artdungeon was a perfect setting for that. I'm glad you liked it and found it humerous. Happy reading!
*squee*
That was adoreable! probablly the only Marauders-era fic I've read where I didn't feel like I was constantly being bashed over the head by what Peter's going to become, but still saw bits of forshadowing. Hehe...just so...so...so normal teenage boys. gotta love 'em.
