Reviews For Smiles and Tears
Reviewer: FaunaCaritas
Date: 12/25/06 20:07
Chapter: Smiles and Tears

So good! I'm sure this is how she will feel at the wedding unless Harry musters up the gumption to eat his words. Once again, you know how to capture the feelings of completely different characters and translate them into poetry.

Quick correction, one of your lines runs "It not that I'm not delighted..."--- you're missing the 's' in 'It's'.

Keep writing, you're really good.

Pax.

Author's Response: thanks for the review.

Reviewer: Bianwen
Date: 09/05/06 19:10
Chapter: Smiles and Tears

weird beat, but i liked it!

Author's Response: thanks

Reviewer: TOMROHT
Date: 07/12/06 15:26
Chapter: Smiles and Tears

Nice poem...

TOMROHT

Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you liked it.

Reviewer: faithfulchild
Date: 07/11/06 15:44
Chapter: Smiles and Tears

I liked it! I could just see the wedding right now!

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: KalthiaQueenOfAll
Date: 07/03/06 15:42
Chapter: Smiles and Tears

That was good. I really liked the sentiment behind the poem, even though some of the rhyme scheme felt a little forced.

Author's Response: Thanx.

Reviewer: vicdragonchild
Date: 07/03/06 13:47
Chapter: Smiles and Tears

I'm not a Ginny/Harry shipper, so when I say this is good, you have to understand that THIS IS GOOD! I write poems myself, and have won several national poetry contests, so I have experiance in poetry. You have a wonderful poem here, and you have talent.

Author's Response: Thanks, that means a lot. I'd love to read some of your oems. Are there any on mnff?

Reviewer: grangergurl
Date: 07/03/06 9:46
Chapter: Smiles and Tears

I thought it was lovely!

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: hermoninny
Date: 07/03/06 8:39
Chapter: Smiles and Tears

very very good! its awsome!

Author's Response: Thanks!

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