oh damn! That was heartwrenching. Absolutely beautiful though. i dont see how anyone can hate this! The emotion is enough to make anyone think twice, especially the speach by mr. weasely. Im not a big sorrow fan, but every once in a while, a fic just sweeps me off my feet. This was one of them. Well done!!!
Author's Response: I'm glad I was able to sweep you off your feet, and thank you for the compliment in Mr. Weasley's speech. I have been a litle worried about whether or not it sounded alright, so I'm glad you liked it!!
awwwwwwwwww!!!!!!!!!! that was sweet
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it!
I thought that was great and I was crying, although I'm not quite sure if putting it under Ron/Hermione would be the best category.
Author's Response: Thank you. I have it under several catergories, and I've found that the romance stories are read more than the others.
Interesting idea, I like it!
Author's Response: Thank you!! :)
Yeah, you earned that A. Great job.
Author's Response: Thanks!
Regardless of likes or dislikes of how you chose to end the story of Harry Potter, it was beautifully written. If JK chooses to finish her series with Harry dying, I am sure that it will sound something like this. Fawkes' song and his "tribute" were a wonderful addition.
Author's Response: I think "beautifully written" is a bit of a stretch; there are still quite a few rough spots, but thank you.
Usually I don't read anything where Harry ends up dead ( or already is )... I used to refuse that it's even slightly believeable looking at other fantasy novels.
But my own theories aside... This is really good. If Harry was to die (hope not) this would be a fantastic suggestion to the final chapter of book seven. I've just noticed, the last word is scar... That's great. I applaude you, here from cold, rainy Denmark...
I can see why your teacher gave you that A ( I asumme A is the top grade )...!!!
My favourite part of this fanfic, is seeing Fawkes again. That last tribute was fantastic...!!!
You're a really great writer... Just keep up the great work...
Author's Response: Wow! Denmark! That's amazing! I really love Fawkes, and I hated to not see him again. I'm so glad you liked it!
Oh my God!!! This was so good! I swear, I'm cryign right now. It was so sad, but so beautifu. I know that sounds corny, but it's true. I don't want Harry to die in the end, but I love how you wrote this. Great job.
Author's Response: I'm sorry I made you cry. I cried when I wrote it too. Thank you!!
ps..you deserved that A!
Author's Response: =)
This is the first time ive read something that wasnt in teh romance category...and im not dissapointed. I loved this..and it seems to fit perfectly..the caracters are like them selves..and the last word is even scar. I love it, keep writing your great!
Author's Response: I'm glad you decided to branch out a little and that you liked what you found! Thank you!!
Well done! I know that many people don't like to contemplate that death, but it's not unlikely that it would happen. Personally I don't think that it will, but if it does, the last chapter could certainly be like this.
I particularly like the way that you've set up the story, so that even the people who haven't read the preceding chapters of Book 7 can read this last chapter. And it even ends with the word "scar" . . . with a wonderful explanation of how that could be.
Author's Response: Thank you for the praise. I am gald you noticed it ended with the word "scar." I was particularly proud that I made that work.
well done i love the second to last paragrah it's very well put, but think that in the speech mr. weasly should have mentioned more about who harry really was not just what he was famous for to the public, i really enjoyed this especailly the ending part and how ginny would stare at harry's picture it fit nicely into the story.
Author's Response: Thank you!! I really appreciate the constructive critism and, of course, compliments are always good!!
this definately deserved that A!!! i love it...just as i would have imagined Harry being gone... PERFECT!
Author's Response: Well, it was far from perfect, but thank you for saying so.
ahhh, very nice, very sweet. I liked the way you've portraited Ron :)
Author's Response: Thank you. Ron can be an idiot sometimes, but he's still one of my favorite characters (after Fred and George). I thought he needed to show his softer side.
Wow, that is really good. (i can see why you got the A) if (and i hope he doesn't)harry dies in the 7nth book, I hope she writes his funeral like this.
Author's Response: I really hope Harry doesn't die too, but I'm glad you liked it enough to even mention JKR!!!
Three words: I LOVE IT !!!!!
Author's Response: I was a litlte worried about some people, but I'm glad you liked it. Thank you soooo much!
Yeah u deserved that a! I was crying when I finished reading this.
Author's Response: It made me cry when I wrote it too!!
This was amazing, it nearly brought me to tears a few times... you deserved taht grade! plus, this ending to the series is pretty believable.
Author's Response: Thanks :)