that was kinda rushed and hard to understand. i can tell you're a good writer, you just need to edit.
lol! great chapter! although, there were a lot of grammer errors.
This was so sweet! I was smiling the whole time!
Really nice story !! an epilouge????
I love it!!! The story so far is great. Keep up the good work, and please update soon!!
This is a very good story, that's pretty much all you can say about it. i give it a 10.5.
ha. thats a cute little fic! chapter 3 is my favourite. mrs weasley is so funny though - "bless my soul"
keep writing!
awe. your story is so cute. i love it =]
update soon.
Author's Response: Thanks! I have to make some edits in but this story is complete! Thank you for your review! :]rn~Kay
i havent read the story yet, but i LOVE the fact that you named your story, "deep blue need you eyes". i loooveeee that songg =] that is where you got that from right? lol
Author's Response: Thanks...yep and that is were I got it from!
aww this is such a good story i loved it so good i hope you keep writing romance fics i'll read then 4 sure :)
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~lola~
aw they fell asleep hiw cute- i have a feeling every thing'll be okay
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~lola~
oohOhH this is gettin good what are ginny and harry gonna doo?
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~lola~
aw that makes me cry theyre so sweet all of em'cnt wait 2 find out what happens 2 Ron and Hermione
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~lola~
ha i think this is great fred & george are great and mrs weasely is perfect cnt wait 2 heep readin
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~lola~
Your whole thing is good. I'm just reviewing this one because I'm lazy. ^_^
Please write another one soon!
this was a god chapter. When you say they admitted to insecurities, what does that mean, exactly?
Author's Response: That means that they talked about their fears and what they didn't want to happen as an end result of the war. I'm really glad that you love my fic! Im pretty fond of it myself. I should have a new one up soon! It should be coming up when the queue opens again. My new fic will be called, 'Stepping Through Time' and it is in the same catagory. Keep an eye out for it!
I have read this story at LEAST five times, but it just gets better every time! Great job:)
Good chapter. Just one point though, Hermione has bushy hair not curly. And she has never been described as 'pretty' though I suppose diferent people see others differently. Ron would certainly say she was beautiful.
Oh gosh, an awesome story! A few minor typos but it was a great story! I loved the end so much! Keep Writing?
Author's Response: Well that is the end of this story, but I have two more that I am currently working on. Keep an eye out for my new fics, 'Christmas Wishes' and "Stepping Through Time." Thanks for reviewing and I'm glad you enjoyed it!
I'm enjoying the story, but when does Ron get dressed? As far as I can see he was still wearing the towel when he discovered Harry, still in the towel when Hermione came running in, and still in it at the end of the chapter!
Author's Response: You know what, your right. I have had many drafts of this chapter, and I think I picked the one were Ron doesn't get dressed...lol. I'll go in and make an edit. Thank you for bringing that to my attention. :)
