Reviewer: ginnyrulz13
Date: 05/20/08 22:29
Chapter: Ch 2: Unexpected Arrival and Tears

that was kinda rushed and hard to understand. i can tell you're a good writer, you just need to edit.

Reviewer: ginnyrulz13
Date: 05/20/08 22:23
Chapter: Ch 1: Untold Secrets

lol! great chapter! although, there were a lot of grammer errors.

Reviewer: Magic Muffin
Date: 05/15/08 20:30
Chapter: Ch 5: Big Suprises

This was so sweet! I was smiling the whole time!

Reviewer: mia2223
Date: 04/24/08 2:16
Chapter: Ch 1: Untold Secrets

Really nice story !! an epilouge????

Reviewer: PalmTreePrincess
Date: 04/12/08 23:23
Chapter: Ch 5: Big Suprises

I love it!!! The story so far is great. Keep up the good work, and please update soon!!

Reviewer: 12harrypotter
Date: 04/09/08 21:21
Chapter: Ch 1: Untold Secrets

This is a very good story, that's pretty much all you can say about it. i give it a 10.5.

Reviewer: rather_be_athogwarts
Date: 04/06/08 19:15
Chapter: Ch 5: Big Suprises

ha. thats a cute little fic! chapter 3 is my favourite. mrs weasley is so funny though - "bless my soul"

keep writing!

Reviewer: lily_potterx3
Date: 03/27/08 17:22
Chapter: Ch 5: Big Suprises

awe. your story is so cute. i love it =]
update soon.

Author's Response: Thanks! I have to make some edits in but this story is complete! Thank you for your review! :]rn~Kay

Reviewer: lily_potterx3
Date: 03/27/08 9:12
Chapter: Ch 1: Untold Secrets

i havent read the story yet, but i LOVE the fact that you named your story, "deep blue need you eyes". i loooveeee that songg =] that is where you got that from right? lol

Author's Response: Thanks...yep and that is were I got it from!

Reviewer: lola_lovegood
Date: 02/14/08 13:51
Chapter: Ch 5: Big Suprises

aww this is such a good story i loved it so good i hope you keep writing romance fics i'll read then 4 sure :)

ttfn
XOXO
~lola~

Reviewer: lola_lovegood
Date: 02/14/08 13:34
Chapter: Ch 4: Bad Dreams and A little Comfort

aw they fell asleep hiw cute- i have a feeling every thing'll be okay

ttfn
XOXO
~lola~

Reviewer: lola_lovegood
Date: 02/14/08 13:20
Chapter: Ch 3: Old Friends and Rivalries

oohOhH this is gettin good what are ginny and harry gonna doo?

ttfn
XOXO
~lola~

Reviewer: lola_lovegood
Date: 02/14/08 12:57
Chapter: Ch 2: Unexpected Arrival and Tears

aw that makes me cry theyre so sweet all of em'cnt wait 2 find out what happens 2 Ron and Hermione

ttfn
XOXO
~lola~

Reviewer: lola_lovegood
Date: 02/14/08 12:27
Chapter: Ch 1: Untold Secrets

ha i think this is great fred & george are great and mrs weasely is perfect cnt wait 2 heep readin

ttfn
XOXO
~lola~

Reviewer: Tobbler
Date: 12/26/07 21:24
Chapter: Ch 5: Big Suprises

Your whole thing is good. I'm just reviewing this one because I'm lazy. ^_^
Please write another one soon!

Reviewer: marvelousmeg
Date: 12/21/07 21:48
Chapter: Ch 2: Unexpected Arrival and Tears

this was a god chapter. When you say they admitted to insecurities, what does that mean, exactly?

Author's Response: That means that they talked about their fears and what they didn't want to happen as an end result of the war. I'm really glad that you love my fic! Im pretty fond of it myself. I should have a new one up soon! It should be coming up when the queue opens again. My new fic will be called, 'Stepping Through Time' and it is in the same catagory. Keep an eye out for it!

Reviewer: marvelousmeg
Date: 12/21/07 21:44
Chapter: Ch 1: Untold Secrets

I have read this story at LEAST five times, but it just gets better every time! Great job:)

Reviewer: Dissendio
Date: 12/10/07 14:10
Chapter: Ch 1: Untold Secrets

Good chapter. Just one point though, Hermione has bushy hair not curly. And she has never been described as 'pretty' though I suppose diferent people see others differently. Ron would certainly say she was beautiful.

Reviewer: AurorInTraining
Date: 12/05/07 15:46
Chapter: Ch 5: Big Suprises

Oh gosh, an awesome story! A few minor typos but it was a great story! I loved the end so much! Keep Writing?

Author's Response: Well that is the end of this story, but I have two more that I am currently working on. Keep an eye out for my new fics, 'Christmas Wishes' and "Stepping Through Time." Thanks for reviewing and I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Reviewer: Trucker
Date: 11/30/07 23:51
Chapter: Ch 2: Unexpected Arrival and Tears

I'm enjoying the story, but when does Ron get dressed? As far as I can see he was still wearing the towel when he discovered Harry, still in the towel when Hermione came running in, and still in it at the end of the chapter!

Author's Response: You know what, your right. I have had many drafts of this chapter, and I think I picked the one were Ron doesn't get dressed...lol. I'll go in and make an edit. Thank you for bringing that to my attention. :)

You must login (register) to review.
Information
Find out everything you need to know about the site right here.


We have stories and authors in this archive.

:

RSS
Choose Theme:
SOCIAL MEDIA
     
MOST RECENT
Other Lives and Dimensions and Finally a Love Story by MoRoCcAnAnDpRoUd Professors
The year is 1977, and the Wizarding World is in turmoil, but it doesn't really...
Research and Development by Northumbrian 3rd-5th Years
The Mirrorphone, the latest advance in Wizarding communications. Now, of course...
The Weird Sisters - B-Sides and Rarities, Vol. 2 by ToBeOrNotToBeAGryffindor 1st-2nd Years
The Weird Sisters are back for an encore. Ten more tracks from your MNFF authors.
FEATURED
Oread, Walking by Seren
Cedric was just as odd as Hermione, because he liked to walk. Cedric/Hermione
The Effect of Gamma Rays on Two Terrifically Trapped Gryffindors. by Fenixaze 3rd-5th Years
From the "Stuck where for the weekend?" Challenge on Portkey.org ... Our two...
Drunk on Him by armagod679 Professors
For me, he was an obsession, a burning obsession, one that I could never let...
A Broken Hallelujah by epiphany212 Professors
You have always loved the chase. The pursuit of Quaffles and dragons have carried...
In the Hufflepuff Way by 1000timesingoldenink 3rd-5th Years
Did anybody really appreciate Hannah's mum?Because Mrs. Abbott was a heroine...
And Now... by Oregonian 3rd-5th Years
Moments after the death of Voldemort, Harry gazes at the corpse of the Dark...
The Weird Sisters - B-Sides and Rarities, Vol. 1 by minnabird 1st-2nd Years
Welcome back to another rousing round of rambunctious rock!However, a new act...
CATEGORIES