Brilliantly amazing! This was really clever and really, really cool! Very well written and interesting!!! Also very funny! I really liked this a lot and I can't wait for more! Great job!!!!! 11/10
Author's Response: Thank you soo much. I never expected to such great feed back from my story. I mean I had read others but I didn't know that people would like mine to.
Haha! Really good! hopr ya write more soon!
Author's Response: Thank you. Chapter 2 is on the way.
I completely loved the story!it is totally cute!cant wait 4 next chapters
Author's Response: thank you chapter 2 is on the way and my friend and I have just submitted another story called Revealing Secrets so you should look out for it.
really good beginning needs an even better ending.
Author's Response: thanks and im starting to pull in the title. Its going to be a sweet fanfict once its all posted.
That was very good, great potential! Just keep on writing PLEASE!
Author's Response: More is on the way and my friend and I just submitted a new story on top of this one called "Revealing Secrets". If you like my style you should look out for it.
Good story and good start. Really can't wait to read more. A few gramatical errors but I like your overall writing style!
Keep it up!
Author's Response: Thank you. I've been trying to work out the little gramatical error in my writing.
This is a great start. I can't wait to read on.
Author's Response: Thanks, I hope you enjoy the next chapter.
Hey weasleyboyfreak, when are you going to put up the next chapter?
Author's Response: I am away at a summer insitute for music right now, so I am unable to post here. I will be puting up the next chapter in about a week. Sorry to keep you waiting!
Ooooh! this is really good! Most stories start off with H/G, but i've been looking for one that starts off with ron and mione. yes, calling hermione mione is addictive.
~hpfreak101
Author's Response: Thanks! Thats what I wante to so I decided to write my own. Thanks for reviewing!
Ron and Hermione are in love with each other, aren't they? I think it's disgusting, the way some folks love each other like that.Oh, well. Good story.
Author's Response: yeah, but it all works out in the end. Im glad you're enjoying the story!
wens d nex comin?
Author's Response: Its coming shortly. I am away at a state wide Music program right now so I am unable to update.
Some gramatical errors but it was lovely
Author's Response: Yes I know there were a few problems but im working on fixing stuff up in the next chapter. Thanks so much for reviewing.
very good cant wait for you to update!
ps. i love the name. Must Be Doing Something Right is one of my FAVORITE SONGS
Author's Response: I know! I love that song and then I said to myself, "what a perfect name for my HP fanfict!' It will tie in with the story here shortly! Thanx for your reviews!
Great story. This is goin' on the Favorite list for sure!
Author's Response: Thank you, thank you. Im working on getting chapter two up as we speak!
Author's Response: Thanks and I hope you like ch 2 which will hopefully be posted soon. If you want some more of my writing then look out for another fanfict that me and my friend are writing. "Revealing Secrets"
very funny
Author's Response: Thanks, I love funny romantic ficts so I try to add in some funnies!
It's a good start. You do well with the twins' lines and behaviour and you planted the "akward" seed well for Ron adn Hermione. Good start! --RP =)
Author's Response: OMG.... I love the Twins and everything in my life is awkward so I know it all! but Ron is my fav. thanks so much for your review!
CORNY!!!!!!!!!!!
u cornball
Author's Response: well we cant all be perfect!
Heh that was very funny.:) :D
Author's Response: thanks! I hope you keep reading when I get chapter two up!
The story sounds really good and i hope you update it soon!
Author's Response: Im working on an update as we speak! Im really trying to get the next chapter up and I hope you all like it. It will be called an unexpected arival and tears! Oh try and guess what happens!
this was great haha i love ron and hermione! keep it up
Author's Response: Oh I love ron and hermione too! I cannot wait untile they hook up in the book! thanks for your review!
