Reviewer: LostMarauderx3
Date: 12/21/06 16:49
Chapter: Chapt 17 - 'Tis The Season

New chapter, new chapter! -Does traditional dance- So, I think this one was my favorite. Having Severus come in at the last minute was more than perfect, and so was having the baby on the Yule. Great job, I mean it. Keep it coming and Happy Christmas!

Author's Response: So glad to please! I was aiming this one for the holidays and it made it. Yay! This is one of my favorite chapters, too. Merry Yule and Happy Christmas! Dani

Reviewer: riderofdragons
Date: 12/20/06 13:31
Chapter: Chapt 17 - 'Tis The Season

Poor Severus, but at least he made it in the end. And the Camptas are so sweet. Still loving the story.

Author's Response: I'm so glad you like it. I was aiming to have this chapter posted by Christmas as the queue is shut down for the holidays. Have a wonderful holiday and I'll resume in the New Year. D

Reviewer: riderofdragons
Date: 12/05/06 17:01
Chapter: Chapt 16 - Taking Risks

Yey new chapter, but aww he had to go, and they were doing so well. Yea like the scene in the office v funny.

Author's Response: Ah, fear not, he'll be back. The story is far from over! :-) The next chapter won't be posted until later this week or on the weekend and then it needs to be validated. Sorry for the delay. D

Reviewer: LostMarauderx3
Date: 12/02/06 14:35
Chapter: Chapt 16 - Taking Risks

Yay, another new chapter! -Does new chapter dance and decides she'll do it every time a new chapter comes out- I deffinately loved when Daniella revealed her pregnancy. That'll show those nosy gossipers. =D And the end was sad, with Severus having to go. This chapter made me laugh at the beginning and sympathetic at the end. Way to go!

Author's Response: Graciously accepts the praise and takes a bow!! I giggled all the way through writing that scene in the office. Glad you liked it. :-)

Reviewer: LostMarauderx3
Date: 11/22/06 12:42
Chapter: Chapt 15 - The Mistress and the Master

New chapter. Woo Hoo. =D -does the New Chapter Dance- And I got mentioned in the Author's Note, I feel special. :D I will review every chapter I read, and I read every chapter of the story. I love it, it's so...real. It's not like every other story, and I love that.

Author's Response: Thank you, thank you! Wish I could see the Happy Dance! This one got validated a lot quicker than expected. I was pleasantly surprised. Real...good description. Another thank you. :-)

Reviewer: riderofdragons
Date: 11/20/06 10:17
Chapter: Chapt 15 - The Mistress and the Master

aw he stayed longer this time, I wish he didn't have to go. Great story by the way, I like Snape. Can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: I so enjoy hearing from new voices! Two new ones in one day. Snape is one of my favorites characters too. I figured that everyone has a past and we never heard much of his... Next chapter will be up soon.

Reviewer: James Clan
Date: 11/20/06 6:17
Chapter: Chapter 1 - Memories

NIce.... descriptive, imaginative

Author's Response: Thank you. I'm very glad that you like it.

Reviewer: LostMarauderx3
Date: 11/17/06 14:21
Chapter: Chapt 14 - Confrontations and Reconciliation

Ha, I knew he'd be back! Yes, it's so sweet, I love it. =D Do I even have to say it was a great chapter?? Cause it was, totally. Hope the next one comes soooooon!

Author's Response: Believe it or not, it took 10 days for the moderator to validate the chapter. She's one of the Mugglenet admins plus she has a day job, so she's really busy. I'm posting the next one tonight! Thanks for your support. D

Reviewer: LostMarauderx3
Date: 11/04/06 13:23
Chapter: Chapt 13 - Revelations

Woah, freak out! Why would Snape automatically suspect Daniella cheated on him? Certainly some plot twist. Not what I was expecting, which I like very much. =] And the story isn't even half-done? -cheers- Yes! Waiting excitedly for the next chapter, indeed. =D

Author's Response: How would you feel if you had to be apart from the one you loved and then when you did see them, you were given a shock? Initial reaction, especially for a Slytherin, would be betrayal. Ah, the tangled webs we weave... Dani :-)

Reviewer: ACDC1992
Date: 11/04/06 7:43
Chapter: Chapt 13 - Revelations

brilliant! bet u done realy well in ur sats/gcse's/a-levels in english litrature

Author's Response: Thanks for the pat on the back. BTW, I never took english lit or wrote sats. We don't have them where I am. I just like to write.

Reviewer: ACDC1992
Date: 11/04/06 7:36
Chapter: Chapter 1 - Memories

brilliant! bet u done realy well in ur sats/gcse's/a-levels in english litrature

Author's Response: Thanks! :-)

Reviewer: LostMarauderx3
Date: 10/31/06 14:26
Chapter: Chapt 12 - Secrets

Wow...she's pregnant. Well, I mean, I knew it was coming, but still. Awesome twist. I love it. =D Next chapter will be nothing less than great.

Author's Response: Ahhhh...and to think that the story is not even half finished!! :-)

Reviewer: LostMarauderx3
Date: 10/24/06 16:35
Chapter: Chapt 11 - Into the Shadow Enters the Light

Poor, poor Alicia. Malfor's eeeeevil. But Snape is so sweet/caring/protective. I love it, majorly. As for the next chappie, I wait with bated breath. =D

Author's Response: As always, happy to please :-)

Reviewer: LostMarauderx3
Date: 10/13/06 15:07
Chapter: Chapt 10 - The Day After The Night Before

Ooh, the suspense! LoL, great chapter. Alicia wasn't the only one who though Snape left. =] Great job (like I even have to say it =D) and, again, can't wait till next. Oh, and good luck with Part 3. Im sure you'll get going again soon.

Author's Response: Stroke, stroke, purrrrrrr. Thanks again. LOL :-)

Reviewer: LostMarauderx3
Date: 10/10/06 14:19
Chapter: Chapt 9 - Beltane

Okay, 1, 2, 3....Awwww! So sweet, oh my goodness. I just love this. The fact that they are really in love is so sweet. Your stories always make me happy. ^_^ Once again, can't wait for the next chapter to see what happens next! Oh, and by the way, you are really good at this. =D

Author's Response: Thanks for the ego stroke. I really needed it. I'm working on Part 3 at the moment and having a hard time. Part 2 was my original story and I love it too. Thanks for the review. I really look forward to them. :-)

Reviewer: LostMarauderx3
Date: 09/29/06 14:12
Chapter: Chapt 8 - The Reception

Ahh, sorry for not reviewing until this late. Pretty simple chapter, but I liked it, of course. =] Excited for the next one, as always. Keep up the awesome work. =D

Author's Response: Thanks. I always look forward to your comments :-) Ya, I took it easy with this chapter. Sometimes you have to lay a foundation before you build the house. It will hold together better. ;-) Keep reading! And keep writing. Thanks again.

Reviewer: LostMarauderx3
Date: 09/16/06 16:57
Chapter: Chapt 6 - A New Day Dawns

Aww, poor Daniella =[ I hope Severus comes back soon. They make a nice couple. =]

Author's Response: ;-) Sorry the chapt took so long. I had to do some major editting. The validators thought it was had to tone it down. Oh well, info for future reference. Don't worry, Daniella and Sev are just beginning ;-)

Reviewer: LostMarauderx3
Date: 08/30/06 15:21
Chapter: Chapt 5 - Rome

Awww. So sweet. ^_^ I love it! Keep going, this story is completely awesome.

Author's Response: You can't imagine the feeling I get when someone says that they like my stories. I have a feeling though, that the next chapter may be delayed. I took some risks with it and this site may require more stringent editing than another site that I post on. If it's accepted as is, it should be ready by Sunday. If not, I'll edit quickly and re-post immediately and it should be ready by the following Sunday. Keep your fingers crossed.

Reviewer: Lederhosen
Date: 08/14/06 18:20
Chapter: Chapt 4 - Back On Track

I really like this story. Keep writing it. :D

Author's Response: I don't plan on stopping any time soon. I'm already up to Chapter 22. Plus, Part 3 is already in my head. I'm gald you like it.

Reviewer: LostMarauderx3
Date: 08/10/06 16:18
Chapter: Chapt 4 - Back On Track


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