Reviewer: Lyra the Lovely
Date: 10/07/07 15:08
Chapter: Epilogue

Wonderful. Absolutely wonderful. Both stories about this girl have been amazing. Keep writing.

Author's Response: The next story doesn't seem to want to stop. "Life in the Shadows" is presently up to 49 chapters and counting. :-D Thanks for the positive comments. Dani

Reviewer: sassy51
Date: 06/16/07 23:32
Chapter: Epilogue

Ok so I don't review often, but this story is worth it. Minor note, you keep changing wheather her hair is straight or curly. My main reason for reviewing is when you first mentioned Oxford I was confused as to what would happen to Saxon. I was sad to see you had to kill him, but it's like soap's, sometimes you have to kill off the best character to keep the flow going. I love your story and I can't wait to start the nexr segment.

Author's Response: I'm so glad to hear from a new voice. Daniella's hair is straight, but like any woman, when she goes out, she "does it up". Ringlets and tendrils were fashionable at the time. As for Saxon's demise, it was a heartbreaking necessity for Severus' plunge into character and Daniela's move forward. Thanks for the review, and I hope the next one lives up to your expectations. Dani

Reviewer: mock_turtle
Date: 06/02/07 16:43
Chapter: Chapt 23 - Life Interrupted

oH MY GOD. I cannot believe you did this. it's like jkr killing dumbledore. I never would have anticipated it. i admit in the last chapter, I thought that saxon might contract the virus daniella was working on, and thus make her worry more about the cure, but I never anticipated this. never.

just a thought--who sent the death eaters? willl their death be noticed by voldemort?

Author's Response: Hmm, I , umm, take it I surprised you? :-) (evil snicker) One more reason why Snape is the way he is. If you think about it, Saxon was born in January, Ron in March, Harry in July, Hermione in September...they would all have been in the same year. More salt in the wound. Poor thing. Hmm, what's next? Read on, my friend, read on!! Dani

Reviewer: Shadow2007
Date: 05/29/07 12:11
Chapter: Epilogue

Once again you have written a beautiful piece of art! I don't think I can forgive you for killing off Saxon though. He was so adorable! And then you had Severus leave! Anyway the fanfic was wonderful.... (still can't believe that you killed off poor lil Saxon!) Great job once again!

Author's Response: Ah, yes, Saxon... there was a reason behind that. Can you think of any thing else more painful than losing a child and thinking it was your fault? A possible reason to why Snape is the way he is, and why he is so harsh with Harry, et al (besides his grudge against James). Saxon would have been in their year. Life goes on in "Life in the Shadows". Let me know what you think and thanks for reviewing. Dani

Reviewer: mock_turtle
Date: 05/28/07 12:13
Chapter: Chapt 17 - 'Tis The Season

"The Campta’s back room was beginning to look like a baby shop." this line cracks me up!

the birth scene reminds me vaguely of the one in the sisterhood of the traveling pants #3

Author's Response: I never read the "Sisterhood... " series. Only a few more chapters left, then onto part 3 :-). Dani

Reviewer: mock_turtle
Date: 05/28/07 11:12
Chapter: Chapt 8 - The Reception

"So, it’s my skills you need, I thought sadly. Why couldn’t you just need me?" I really like this line. It's powerful. it sort of shows the discontent beneath her facade.

Author's Response: I thought it was sad. Evey time her grandfather gets in touch with her, it's because he needs something from her. Dani

Reviewer: LostMarauderx3
Date: 02/23/07 17:00
Chapter: Epilogue

Yay, Oxford! You really put a lot into these stories, they're so good. Can't wait for Part 3, it's gonna be great. :D

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your support and encouragement. It's reviewers like you who make this so much fun and rewarding. I'll be starting to post Part 3 - Life in the Shadows soon. Dani

Reviewer: riderofdragons
Date: 02/18/07 12:12
Chapter: Chapt 23 - Life Interrupted

I nearly cried too, but I don't really cry at fanfics, but you nearly got me. Can't wait for the next part.

Author's Response: The epilogue is next and "Life in the Shadows" should start soon. Thanks for your faithful reviews. You can't imagine how that makes me feel ! :-) Dani

Reviewer: LostMarauderx3
Date: 02/17/07 9:28
Chapter: Chapt 23 - Life Interrupted

I remember reading this on the other site, and I almost cried. This time I did. Bravo! I've never cried from a fanfic before, but this was so well-written and I could actually feel how sad Daniella was. But it was an awesome chapter. =D I didn't read the third story yet, although I was tempted. Can't wait! ^_^

Author's Response: I was crying as I wrote it. I knew this was going to happen right from the beginning. One of the reasons why Severus is so foul/hard. You can leave reviews on the other site too, if you like. Dani

Reviewer: riderofdragons
Date: 02/11/07 12:49
Chapter: Chapt 22 - Race For A Cure

Yey new chapter! Dam those evil wizards killing the little kiddies, thats just mean, but at least she found a cure, boo to them! Love the story

Author's Response: Glad you love it. This part is coming to an end soon, but Part 3 has been started and will follow without a break. Hope you like that one too. The saga continues... Dani

Reviewer: LostMarauderx3
Date: 01/31/07 14:28
Chapter: Chapt 21 - Interlude

Yes, new chappeh! -Dances- Tis wonderful. Their love, I mean. I did mark your stories on the other site, just in case MN decided to make us all wait a month or so for another new chapter. Excellent job. =D

Author's Response: How did I miss this? I'm so sorry! This one is coming to an end, but the next part will start immediately. I hope you enjoy it as much. It takes a slightly different turn. Dani

Reviewer: riderofdragons
Date: 01/31/07 14:04
Chapter: Chapt 21 - Interlude

Yey new chapter, only short tho. But it is titled intrlude so expected. Wow it's been a year already for them two, cool.

Author's Response: I'm sorry I didn't respond ealier. I thought I had. Shame on me! Yes, it was short. It happens sometimes, but like the title says., it was an "interlude" :D The next one is longer. Dani

Reviewer: LostMarauderx3
Date: 01/25/07 18:40
Chapter: Chapt 20 - The Call To Serve

Hey, I got that Email you sent. Thanks a WHOLE. LOT. =D I'd die if I couldn't read this story anymore. So I'll deffinately read it on another site. Thanks again!

Author's Response: Part 3 - Life in the Shadows, is also on the other site, although it's not finished yet. Keep the comments coming. I don't want to lose you. :D Dani

Reviewer: riderofdragons
Date: 01/25/07 14:39
Chapter: Chapt 20 - The Call To Serve

I do like Saxon, I think I've already said that, but he is cute, and he does magic now as well, yey! Like the ending, v funny.

Author's Response: So happy to please. :-)

Reviewer: LostMarauderx3
Date: 01/19/07 16:36
Chapter: Chapt 20 - The Call To Serve

Awesome chapter. =D -Does The Dance- I loved that save there in the end. Poor kids, having to hide everything. I hope things get better for them. -hint- Also, I hope this war ends eventually. Wars are sad, but, again, the chapter was worth the wait. Im sure another is coming soon!

Author's Response: Always glad to please. Just remember, there is a Part 3. hint... ;-)

Reviewer: riderofdragons
Date: 01/15/07 10:06
Chapter: Chapt 19 - Weathering the Storms

Yey I haven't been on here in a while and then there's 2 new chapters for me to read! Still brilliant, as always. Snape's being a bit mean tho, I know he's only protecting his family, but she's gotta have a life come on. Love the story.

Author's Response: Welcome back. Life can't always be easy, even in a story. I'm so glad you're enjoying it.

Reviewer: Red Lioness895
Date: 01/15/07 6:53
Chapter: Chapt 19 - Weathering the Storms

this is s a great story, i didnt even realize "creating a ghost" had a sequel!! i read this almost in one sitting, the plot line is very well done with only a few grammatical errors, keep up the good work!!

Author's Response: Same review. Welcome to MNFF.

Reviewer: Red Lioness895
Date: 01/15/07 6:52
Chapter: Chapt 19 - Weathering the Storms

this is s a great story, i didnt even realize "creating a ghost" had a sequel!! i read this almost in one sitting, the plot line is very well done with only a few grammatical errors, keep up the good work!!

Author's Response: Thank you. This story is nearly done, but there is a Part 3 as well. "Life in the Shadows". Enjoy!

Reviewer: LostMarauderx3
Date: 01/09/07 15:28
Chapter: Chapt 19 - Weathering the Storms

New chappehh! -does teh dance- Poor, moody Severus. =[ But I like how you went from happy mood to mad mood like that. -snaps fingers- It was a good chapter, of course. =D They're always good. Can't wait for the next!

Author's Response: Always happy to please! :-)

Reviewer: LostMarauderx3
Date: 01/03/07 11:10
Chapter: Chapt 18 - Strawberries and Bananas

Yes, new chapter! -Dances- It was great, too. As always. =D Little Saxon seems so cute, especially the blanket scene. That made me smile. And then poor Severus! Stupid Voldemort, making him be all evil to innocent people. But, of course, his girl is there to make him feel better. So, basically, this chapter made me go from happy, to sad, to happy again. Wonderful job, can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: I was very pleased to see the speed at which this chapter was validated. The next should be up soon. You really must tell me how that "Happy Dance" goes. Left foot forward, right foot back, do a little wiggle?? :-D Dani

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