Reviewer: neverthere1210
Date: 09/03/06 23:21
Chapter: Picking Love Potion Partners

great. next chapter please

Reviewer: MissHermione
Date: 08/30/06 12:01
Chapter: Evans is the Only One I Want

I LOVE THIS STORY!!! You are really good at writing! Please keep on writing more! Thank you and good night! Toodles!

Reviewer: Eve
Date: 08/24/06 15:22
Chapter: Picking Love Potion Partners

I love this story! keep it up!

Reviewer: hopelives4ever
Date: 08/15/06 11:43
Chapter: Picking Love Potion Partners

Lily is being mean. TOO mean. James' ego will go down just give him a chance. Lily ur breakin his heart. Dragon rider ur breakin mine by not givin me another chpt. 2 read please like james i think i'll die if i don't see another chpt. soon. luv you for making this fic.

Reviewer: hopelives4ever
Date: 08/15/06 11:43
Chapter: Picking Love Potion Partners

Lily is being mean. TOO mean. James' ego will go down just give him a chance. Lily ur breakin his heart. Dragon rider ur breakin mine by not givin me another chpt. 2 read please like james i think i'll die if i don't see another chpt. soon. luv you for making this fic.

Reviewer: snightsix
Date: 08/07/06 18:03
Chapter: Picking Love Potion Partners

Oooo! Wow! I like how you left a wild cliffhanger! Awesome! Plz update soon!

Reviewer: blue sapphire lady
Date: 08/05/06 14:11
Chapter: Picking Love Potion Partners

I love this chapter! I can't believe that Lily was going to ask Sirius. That's going to make the next chapters very interesting!!! Can't wait. Update soon!

Reviewer: fire_cookie
Date: 08/04/06 21:11
Chapter: Picking Love Potion Partners

Oooo, nice catch at the end hehe. Can't wait to find out what happens next! And is Sirius falling for Lily, or what?

Reviewer: fire_cookie
Date: 08/04/06 21:01
Chapter: My Duty: Hunting Down Rule-Breakers

Ooo, good chapter! The characters are very realistic.

Reviewer: siriusly_ginny
Date: 08/04/06 13:54
Chapter: Picking Love Potion Partners

uh
sirius and lily???

Reviewer: Ice
Date: 08/04/06 3:18
Chapter: Evans is the Only One I Want

This is great. One of the better Lily and James fanfics I've read anyway. Just promise me you won't give up on it - I hate it when people do that, especially when their story's a good one.

Reviewer: sweet_harry
Date: 08/03/06 17:33
Chapter: Picking Love Potion Partners

MMMMMMOOOOOOOOOORRRRRREEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: lovingu4ever
Date: 08/03/06 16:22
Chapter: Picking Love Potion Partners

OMG! that was brillant planning on lily's part nothing is goign to piss off james more! excellent! update soon i really want to see how this works out!

Reviewer: siriuslypadfoot62442
Date: 08/03/06 15:49
Chapter: Picking Love Potion Partners

lmao. Good chapter! I like how you're changing the POV from every chapter. It was a nice twist to have Lily pick Sirius as her partner. Nice detail and awesome job on the chapter!

Reviewer: The_Dark_Lord
Date: 08/03/06 11:54
Chapter: Picking Love Potion Partners

Ooh love it :P
really interesting

Reviewer: The_Dark_Lord
Date: 08/03/06 11:54
Chapter: Picking Love Potion Partners

Ooh love it :P
really interesting

Reviewer: Iwishiwern Tamuggle
Date: 08/03/06 10:27
Chapter: Picking Love Potion Partners

ooooo.... I wonder how Jamesiepoo is gonna take this blow to the head....

Reviewer: heartachin4harry
Date: 08/03/06 10:20
Chapter: Picking Love Potion Partners

Haha! This should be interesting. Nice twist. Update soon!

Author's Response: Thank you so much. I know I'm late to updating this - very, very late - and I apologize for that, but I plan to answer and thank you all now. *grins* I like to try to put a twist and Lily picking Sirius was just too good an idea to pass by.

Reviewer: some_kinda_superstar
Date: 08/03/06 1:39
Chapter: Picking Love Potion Partners

awww that was so mean to james! still a great chapter, though. i really liked the bit at the start, 'prongs' favourite pastimes'. it was funny. well done, update soon!

Author's Response: I know, I know. I felt bad for him when I wrote it out but they're teenagers! They have to have a bit of the jealousy/love/hatred thing. Or at least I think so. Meh, maybe I'm just being cruel to James. Lol. Yes, Prongs' Favorite Pastimes was a fun part to write. Actually it didn't take that long to think it up, seeing as it all had to do with Evans. *grins and hugs* Thank you for the review muchly! I appreciate it!

Reviewer: KASK
Date: 08/02/06 22:17
Chapter: Picking Love Potion Partners

I loved it! I hope Lily doesn't like Sirius though. Maybe it's just to make James annoyed or something. I love how you went from Lily to James to Sirius. Usually one doesn't get Sirius' POV. Maybe one of Lily's friends or something? I can't wait for the next chapter. Great one!

Author's Response: Thanks! *hugs* As for Lily liking Sirius... I can't really say since that would ruin the next chapter! And I really did enjoy doing Sirius' POV. He's a good guy though a little arrogant (okay, maybe more than a little) and looking at the world thorugh his eyes was a blast! As for the next chapter's POV, you're right. It's going to be Holly Willis' POV. But anyway again - thanks for the review!

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