Reviews For Winter Holiday
Reviewer: violet weasley
Date: 07/02/08 17:26
Chapter: On the Ice

Great story. I like the part when Hermione tells Ron to kiss her. Hilarious!!!

Reviewer: sophie________
Date: 01/21/08 18:39
Chapter: On the Ice

At first I thought it was lame (sorry :P)
But then I finished it and really liked it !
Good job :)

Author's Response: Um, well, I've been long done with this old story, and I still think it's completely lame. I'm just glad other people seem to enjoy it. Thanks for the review! I appreciate it.

Reviewer: brenpotterfans
Date: 11/29/06 0:13
Chapter: On the Ice

Oh that was a sweet story. I'm a huge Ron and Hermione fan. That was a nice way to get them together. Totally believable.

Author's Response: Oops! Double post!

Reviewer: brenpotterfans
Date: 11/29/06 0:12
Chapter: On the Ice

Oh that was a sweet story. I'm a huge Ron and Hermione fan. That was a nice way to get them together. Totally believable.

Author's Response: Aw, thanks! I appreciate the kind comments. Obviously, I too am a huge R/Hr fan!

Reviewer: AKA294
Date: 11/17/06 21:13
Chapter: In the Snow

BTW, was that a laughing Ha-Ha, or a mocking Ha-Ha? You can't tell when somebody types it on a computer...

Author's Response: I would never mock you if you said something like that! It was a laughing kind of "Ha, ha."

Reviewer: DracoLuva4684
Date: 10/14/06 7:42
Chapter: On the Ice

Awwwwwwwwwwwwww! That was soooooooooo sweet!

Author's Response: Thank you so much!! I'm glad you thought so!

Reviewer: AKA294
Date: 10/06/06 18:46
Chapter: In the Snow

Oh, well, I thought you would say something like that. It was a great idea for a story! (However short it may have been...) You're very original! :)

Author's Response: Ha ha! Thank you!

Reviewer: AKA294
Date: 10/04/06 19:39
Chapter: On the Ice

aww... that was sweet. I think you should consider writing more! It was great! My favorite part was where Hermione was surprised when Ron said she was irresistible. They both thought they were being obvious, but it turned out that neither of them were. lol I wish you would write more of this story!

Author's Response: Nah, sorry! I'm done and through with this story! I'm so amazed at how many people liked it though. I didn't think it'd get nearly as many hits as it actually did. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Simply Being
Date: 09/27/06 22:47
Chapter: On the Ice continued. I was going to say that I'm in love that line.


Author's Response: Thank you! I kind of liked that part too! :)

Reviewer: Simply Being
Date: 09/27/06 22:46
Chapter: On the Ice

First of all, congrats on such an adorable idea! Ice skating, it's fantastic. I have to say, out of this chappie and the first one, this is my favorite. I love how you portrayed their romance, and I can't wait to read the rest of your fics! Oh, and I love how you kept Hermione and Ron in character very well. Good job!

PS: Then kiss me...


Author's Response: Aw... thank you! I'm shaking with euphoria (ha ha ha!), making it hard for me to type properly... or maybe that's because I just got out of the shower and I'm shivering because of the cold... Anyway, I'm glad you liked the idea of ice skating. And I agree with you about this chapter. I like it much better than the first. :D

Reviewer: Simply Being
Date: 09/27/06 22:31
Chapter: In the Snow

Review I promised! I love the interaction between Harry and Ginny, especially the ending. And Hermione being so Hermione-ish at the end. My only critique is that is was a bit monotone at the beginning, and I suggest you use some synonyms (i.e- Instead of using words like "happy" replace it with something like "euphoric") and mix up your sentence structures a bit more (i.e.-Compoud sentences, semi-colons, ect. Just not simple sentences) to give it some more color.

Oh, I sound like my English teacher!

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing... Did you really promise to review? Because I don't remember... Hm... well thanks, anyway! I agree with the different sentence structure thing... someone else had pointed that out to me as well, so now I pay more attention to that kind of thing. Thank you for the advice though! Hopefully I'll be even better at English now!

Author's Response: Oh, okay. I saw your response to my review for Never Forget. THAT'S where you hinted at the reviews... Gotcha.

Reviewer: DracoLuva4684
Date: 09/24/06 15:35
Chapter: On the Ice

Really cute!

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: wicked26
Date: 09/20/06 3:32
Chapter: On the Ice

its niceeeeeeeee...

Author's Response: LOL. Well, thanks.

Reviewer: SimplyMe
Date: 09/09/06 20:21
Chapter: On the Ice

Hi there! I think the material in the last chapter could have been enough for a one-shot or that you could even have made just one long chapter since the first one is so short. I think you did a great job on this one. My favourite parts? The fingers when they are holding hands and the 'pinch me!' bit. Made me laugh... Great!

Author's Response: Ooh! Thank you so much! This has to be one of my best reviews since you write one of my favorite stories!!! Thank you, thank you, thank you! LOL! Well, I'm so happy that "Dearest Hermione" is still up!!! Well, best of luck! Keep reading, and thanks again for dropping in for a peak at my story!

Reviewer: mionelove
Date: 09/02/06 8:59
Chapter: On the Ice

Well done. It is very good although I don't think I could ever picture Ron ice skating. Well still it is very good.

Author's Response: Thanks. I can sort of picture Ron ice skating, but for me, it's kind of a goofy image. So, I thought it would be fun to write a story with him ice skating. Thanks again for reviewing!

Reviewer: trouble12
Date: 08/30/06 12:15
Chapter: On the Ice

That was SUCH a cute story!!!

Author's Response: Aw, thank you. You made me really happy! Check out my other fics. I have two poems, and I also have another story that I'm working on that has more drama than this one. Happy reading!

Reviewer: theeldesttwin
Date: 07/31/06 23:30
Chapter: On the Ice

aw! how sweet!

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: Fauna
Date: 07/30/06 8:51
Chapter: On the Ice

awwww! (that last line was a little sappy)

Author's Response: A little. . . .

Reviewer: Fauna
Date: 07/30/06 8:31
Chapter: In the Snow


Author's Response: LOL

Reviewer: Augusta Wilfry
Date: 07/20/06 11:18
Chapter: On the Ice

nice, but sort of a lame ending''best winter vacation ever?''. i like it otherwise though.

Author's Response: Uh. . . . Thanks. . . .

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