The saddest thing I have read in a while. Great writing style though. Very enjoyable.
awww..... I started to cry when I was reading this. its so sad :'(
This is such a beautiful story, and it truly captures the wonders a somewhat angsty slash can work, it conveys the perfect sense of pity and companionship with draco as the reader falls for harry too.
Brilliant.
Author's Response: I really felt that the longing and love from afar was a big part of who the characters were so I'm glad you saw it too. Thanks for the lovely review!
Tears. I love it and I hate it. It's beautiful yet wretched at the same time, giving you a look into what could've been, then ripping your heart out with the harsh reality.
Tears. I love it and I hate it. It's beautiful yet wretched at the same time, giving you a look into what could've been, then ripping your heart out with the harsh reality.
oh my gosh! *tear!* Poor Draco! *pouts for Draco* All he needs is love. And the song just fits so well too. Great job! If only Harry woulda come tearing out of the place and went to Draco. But I guess there can't always be a happy ending right? Oh and I love the last line 'I wrench myself away from the inviting room, leaving my heart behind in the snow.' Very good.
xoxox
Kris (pg15)
Author's Response: I love how you feel so strongly for a happy ending, but sadly no. The song was stuck on repeat in my brain and I was depressed to the point where sadness seems to be to heavy to permit a breath. This was my solution. BTW-I don't know why I was depressed. I just seem to channel negative emotions. Thanks, your review means a lot.
omg that is soooo goreous. im crying man. that's beautiful. (no pun intended i assure you).
Author's Response: Thank you for reading.
awww.
"I wrench myself away from the inviting room, leaving my heart behind in the snow."
I love that line.
Good job, I love it. :)
Author's Response: Thank you, btw I like your username.
woah. (tear drop)
this gave me chills man. very deep, very touching, very, very, sad
Author's Response: I made you cry! That is the greatest compliment you could give me!
Sorry for doubling. I tried to delete the first, because I hadn't said everything I wanted to say, but it didn't work.
Author's Response: that's fine
Aww, that was so beautiful. And sad. I loved it. And that's a great song. I commend your musical taste. *waves to Rita* iHola, amiga!
Author's Response: I love that song, there's something so despairing at the end, only because there's hope in the beginning.
Aww, that was so beautiful... and sad. I love that song, by the way.
Author's Response: {takes a little bow}
Well now I'm bummed out. But I guess that means you did a good job. The whole "I know the color of my own blood" thing was extremely good. Disturbing, but good.
Author's Response: Disturbing and dark is what I live for. My poetry(not fan fic) is even more dark than this fic, so for me this story is on the light side of things.
do you mind if i use a Quick Quotes Quill? thanks.
T_T so sad!!!!! i really don't know what else to say but it's deep. really deep. VERY good job.
Author's Response: I was going for overwhelming, crushing sadness so I guess I did something right. I wanted a primal sadness.
well, this isn't a typical h/d fic. the writing is very good. i give you a ten!
Author's Response: Yea, abnormal is good!
that's so sad, really heartbreaking. but that's what you were going for so well done.
Author's Response: Yes. It was sad, but better here than replaying over and over in my head.
How sad and beautiful! This is very nicely written! Oh, poor Draco and those words aren't often heard from me. Or anyone that matter. Now you're a good writer and you should keep on writing! This was a very nice fic.
Author's Response: Thank you. I intend to.
awwww, poor draco, hary doesn't even look up at him, how did he touch the window without getting notcied?
Author's Response: Everyone is so wrapped up in their bubble of happiness that they can't see the suffering people right in front of them.
Author's Response: Everyone is so wrapped up in their bubble of happiness that they can't see the suffering people right in front of them.
Author's Response: Sorry for the repeat.Accident.
