Reviews For Imperfections
Reviewer: HeRmYgInS
Date: 07/06/06 11:45
Chapter: Imperfections

I thought it was great! Not cliche, cheesy, or unrealistic. This was really well-written. I'm sure a lot of people can relate to trying to be absolutely perfect. Awesome job!

Author's Response: thanks!

Reviewer: ValorOrgulloso
Date: 07/06/06 9:52
Chapter: Imperfections

I thought this was a good fanfic, actually! And for only your first one, it is really good! I really liked reading it, so please write more fanfics so I can review them!

Author's Response: thanks so much! i love getting positive reviews ;) i've submitted another story, and im also working on a new one which i'll hopefully be able to submit soon.

Reviewer: centataur_chik
Date: 07/05/06 23:02
Chapter: Imperfections

I thought it was really great story and I hope to see more fics from you

Author's Response: thanks! i have been working on another fic and i just submitted it so hopefully it will get accepted soon. it is very different to this one, and really fun to write!

Reviewer: Ronmionie forever
Date: 07/05/06 19:43
Chapter: Imperfections

i think it was a good story it was sad though how she felt like people only liked her because she was perfect. good job i liked it! ;)

Author's Response: thank you!

Reviewer: wandlessxxmagic
Date: 07/04/06 23:45
Chapter: Imperfections

This fic put a new perspective on Lily. I enjoyed it, and can relate. It did seem a tad brief, though. I wish it had been longer. Excellent overall, though.

Author's Response: yeah, someone else said it was too short. i was just eager to get it finished and submitted, and also i didn't want to make it too long and ruin the storyline by dragging it out. thanks though!

Reviewer: 2sirius
Date: 07/04/06 19:13
Chapter: Imperfections

Inspirational. Short, sweet, yet appealing. Better than a lot of the really long ones.

Author's Response: thank you so much!!!

Reviewer: sweet_harry
Date: 07/04/06 14:16
Chapter: Imperfections

wow.

Author's Response: thanks...again! ;)

Reviewer: sweet_harry
Date: 07/04/06 14:15
Chapter: Imperfections

wow.

Author's Response: thanks!

Reviewer: HermionePotter
Date: 07/04/06 12:21
Chapter: Imperfections

This was really good... i just wish that it had beena little longer, its like i breezed right thru it. I can really say that i know how lily felt, and how it feels to do something like that to yourself, and she needed james.

Author's Response: thank you! im so glad you liked it, i wrote it based on my own real-life experience. im sorry its so short, i was just so eager to get it up i guess i rushed it a little.

Reviewer: Terry Boot
Date: 07/04/06 10:35
Chapter: Imperfections

its really weird, i just found out my best friend was cutting herself... and the story really reminded me of her... now ive got the chills
but it was really well written, and i dont think it was offensive
great job!

Author's Response: thats awful about your friend and i hope she gets better soon...but thanks!

Reviewer: goobersam9
Date: 07/04/06 9:28
Chapter: Imperfections

I was scared. It's good- but I'm never reading that again nor am I recommending to my friends. You see I have "emo" friends and I get enough of people causing themselves physical harm. So, I just don't even want to get into that.

Laura

Author's Response: well i can understand if it scared you a little...my friends get creeped out by stuff like this too. im not emo, but i have had issues like this before and i know it scares some people.

Reviewer: hogwartsgirlhg
Date: 07/04/06 9:24
Chapter: Imperfections

i like it you should write more

Author's Response: hey my first reviewer. thanx! =)

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