I thought it was great! Not cliche, cheesy, or unrealistic. This was really well-written. I'm sure a lot of people can relate to trying to be absolutely perfect. Awesome job!
Author's Response: thanks!
I thought this was a good fanfic, actually! And for only your first one, it is really good! I really liked reading it, so please write more fanfics so I can review them!
Author's Response: thanks so much! i love getting positive reviews ;) i've submitted another story, and im also working on a new one which i'll hopefully be able to submit soon.
I thought it was really great story and I hope to see more fics from you
Author's Response: thanks! i have been working on another fic and i just submitted it so hopefully it will get accepted soon. it is very different to this one, and really fun to write!
i think it was a good story it was sad though how she felt like people only liked her because she was perfect. good job i liked it! ;)
Author's Response: thank you!
This fic put a new perspective on Lily. I enjoyed it, and can relate. It did seem a tad brief, though. I wish it had been longer. Excellent overall, though.
Author's Response: yeah, someone else said it was too short. i was just eager to get it finished and submitted, and also i didn't want to make it too long and ruin the storyline by dragging it out. thanks though!
Inspirational. Short, sweet, yet appealing. Better than a lot of the really long ones.
Author's Response: thank you so much!!!
Author's Response: thanks...again! ;)
Author's Response: thanks!
This was really good... i just wish that it had beena little longer, its like i breezed right thru it. I can really say that i know how lily felt, and how it feels to do something like that to yourself, and she needed james.
Author's Response: thank you! im so glad you liked it, i wrote it based on my own real-life experience. im sorry its so short, i was just so eager to get it up i guess i rushed it a little.
its really weird, i just found out my best friend was cutting herself... and the story really reminded me of her... now ive got the chills
but it was really well written, and i dont think it was offensive
Author's Response: thats awful about your friend and i hope she gets better soon...but thanks!
I was scared. It's good- but I'm never reading that again nor am I recommending to my friends. You see I have "emo" friends and I get enough of people causing themselves physical harm. So, I just don't even want to get into that.
Author's Response: well i can understand if it scared you a little...my friends get creeped out by stuff like this too. im not emo, but i have had issues like this before and i know it scares some people.
i like it you should write more
Author's Response: hey my first reviewer. thanx! =)