Reviews For Imperfections
Reviewer: gryffindors_girl
Date: 08/16/06 23:03
Chapter: Imperfections

i only have one thing to! It's a good wow don't worry

Author's Response: Thank you so much!

Reviewer: Aethonan13
Date: 08/09/06 22:01
Chapter: Imperfections

I just wanted it longer!

Author's Response: Yeah, a few people have said it was too short. Do you think I should edit it to make it longer?

Reviewer: cirque_du_freak_fan
Date: 07/30/06 23:40
Chapter: Imperfections

i realy liked it. you did good at telling what its like to cut. i would know!

Author's Response: thanks! since i wrote this i have had several reviews from people who said the could identify- it's astonishing how many people have had problems like this, but at the same time i'm really glad people can identify with my work. well anyway thanks again for the review!

Reviewer: nikkiolapotter
Date: 07/29/06 19:10
Chapter: Imperfections

It was really cool, but for your next fanfic, I would recommend a beta. Otherwise, I loved it. I'm adding it to my favorites!

Author's Response: thanks so much! i'm so glad you liked it and i'll take on board the thing about a beta. i've been thinking about getting one for a while now. thanks again!

Reviewer: twistedtinkerbell
Date: 07/28/06 7:03
Chapter: Imperfections

ah this story was so great, i hope u write more,that really was great!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: thanks! you've made my day! =)

Reviewer: A House Elf
Date: 07/26/06 13:27
Chapter: Imperfections

Oh, that was brilliant! I have a few cutter friends, and you gave me a little glimpse as to "why" they do it. I really did like this. I like how James cared enough for her to love her despite her imperfection.

Author's Response: thanks so much! it's so great to know people like my work!

Reviewer: gwenwitch
Date: 07/23/06 15:29
Chapter: Imperfections

That's fantastic! I like the way you show her rising above her problems...hope to read more of your work!

Author's Response: thanks again!

Reviewer: gwenwitch
Date: 07/23/06 15:29
Chapter: Imperfections

That's fantastic! I like the way you show her rising above her problems...hope to read more of your work!

Author's Response: thanks so much!

Reviewer: bitingbludgers421
Date: 07/16/06 16:45
Chapter: Imperfections

It jumps around a tad too quickly, I think, but it was well written...Wow, don't I sound stuck up? Okay, I loved it, you caught me.

Author's Response: thank you! no, you don't sound stuck up at all!

Reviewer: TOMROHT
Date: 07/13/06 14:24
Chapter: Imperfections



Author's Response: thanks! its a good wow, yeah? i hope so =)

Reviewer: blue sapphire lady
Date: 07/11/06 22:03
Chapter: Imperfections

This is a really unique James/Lily story. I've never read something like this. Great job!

Author's Response: thank you!

Reviewer: MaraudersAffair
Date: 07/11/06 3:14
Chapter: Imperfections

Wow, the first paragraph slapped me in the face - I was so stunned. At first I thought it was James, shaving for the first time or something. I started reading the story expecting sappy romance and I got a very good representation of an emotionally confused and hurt Lily. I really loved her POV - great job!

Author's Response: thanks, i'm so glad you liked it!

Reviewer: BlackGoddess101
Date: 07/09/06 15:58
Chapter: Imperfections

WOW!! that was a really good i liked it a lot!

Author's Response: hey, thanks! i'm glad you liked it!

Reviewer: RAWRxTINK
Date: 07/08/06 8:02
Chapter: Imperfections

Amazing! x

Author's Response: *blush* thanks!

Reviewer: Shaiera
Date: 07/08/06 5:47
Chapter: Imperfections

i liked that. im interested in fics where self injury or abuse occur because its interesting to see how people percieve charactors to deal with it

Author's Response: thanks!

Reviewer: tonks_667
Date: 07/07/06 4:52
Chapter: Imperfections

It was so good! But I could help but think of emos.... dont worry what im talking about it was really good!

Author's Response: thanks! i've been called emo before, i don't really mind coz i know i'm not, but i guess the story is a little emo at the start. still, i'm glad you liked it!

Reviewer: Blue Bell
Date: 07/06/06 20:58
Chapter: Imperfections

Oh, I love stories like this! Okay, I just realized how horrible that makes me sound, but I like really sad fics like this one. Anyway, the point I am getting at (eventually!) is that I really liked this story. It is beautifully written and really gives Lily a true character. Points to you for good writing!

Author's Response: no, you don't sound horrible at all! well, of course i'd think that since i'm the author ;) thanks so much!

Reviewer: YoU_sMeLL_LiKe_HAm
Date: 07/06/06 18:58
Chapter: Imperfections

I really like the subject you were addressing. So many people cut themselves and your story shows that there are really people who care about them.

Author's Response: yeah, self-harm is becoming a really common problem. when you are the one doing it you can feel so alone, i think it's important that people know about it and realise people who do it aren't freaks. i hoped this story might show people a bit about what it's really like.

Reviewer: lullaby_heart64
Date: 07/06/06 12:53
Chapter: Imperfections

that was wonderful and it had a realy good concept. You are a beautful writer and I hope to read more by you. All I know is that it sure didn't offend me!

Author's Response: thanks for reviewing! i'm glad you liked it.

Reviewer: FanFicFanatic12
Date: 07/06/06 12:19
Chapter: Imperfections

I think you did a great job in creating a solid, comfortable relationship between James and Lily. The only thing that kind of bugged me was that LIly seemed out of character. From the scene in the fifth book, Lily is bold and strong and can stand up for herself, so I just don't see her melting down like she did. Just my interpretation. :-)

Nice first-fic!

Author's Response: you're right, she probably does seem a tad out of character. the way i see it though, even the strongest people have their limits, and everyone needs to be comforted sometimes. but this isn't usually how i imagine lily either, the story is more an interptetation of an issue than a character. thanks for reviewing!

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