Wow i really love this! It's my favorite Lily/James Fan Fic and the first that I have ever re read! Well done!
I enjoyed it! The writing was good and the topic was believable. I never imagined Lily being one to cut herself, but it made sense when you explained it. Great job!
I like this story. I like James in it.
i must say that as sensitive as the topic is, i dont think it needed this ranking.
I love this! It was very sad though. You really captured how proud Lily is. I loved how nice James was to her!
i thought it was amazing my best freind used to cut herself i showed her this and she thought you channeled the situation perfectly
coughtpotter x x x
p.s cought's an irish name
that was really, really good. i've been kinda depressed lately, but didn't know why. when i read "I felt like I was standing in a crowded room, screaming, and no-one noticed. No-one cared. Too numb to cry, too weak to fight," i was really suprised... that's how i feel. thank you. that story was amazing.
omg!! i love it!! that is sooo sweet! i love that james cares so much, some of the stories are so dark that one was a nice break!
great job
Hey Lucy!
I managed to dig up my account! I thought I'd lost it. Anyway on to the review.
It may have been a sensitive topic, I wasn't upset or offended by it, of course. =P
I'm sure all of us have been through a stage where we strive for perfection although there is no such thing. In the end we are dissapointed, but also... a bit glad. At least I think so. This is a nice, bittersweet story. =)
Cya!
Loved it....such a diiferent side to lily my fav lin was He saw through my mask of perfection, and still loved what he saw. He taught me to accept
Loved it....such a diiferent side to lily my fav lin was He saw through my mask of perfection, and still loved what he saw. He taught me to accept
it was really good
keep up the good work
well, it was very short and you didnt get very far in the romantic situation, but for a first time, not terrible.
I love this idea. and your story made it work well. To feel that miserable and not be able to know exactly why is horrible...i should know. I like the way it was different from other lily/james stories, because it wasn't james changing, it was lily finally understanding how much he cared:)
Well... Ah.... It was different? Ok so it wasn't what I was expecting but... All's well that ends well? Good job writing it though.
I loved it, usually james/lily fics are about how shes noticed hes changed for her but i love the way you wrote it. It's really good!
