Good job, and an interesting portrayl of my favorite character. I've never quite imagined Regulus that way, I've always seen him as soo innocent sex-wise. Yes, I know, poor blind me. This way makes much more sense. Nobody's completely innocent, right? Anyway, your writing was good, and the last line tied things up nicely, and the idea of him going to see a Muggle was very original. Good job!
that was so good, i really liked it, u should consider making other stories like this cause i no that they would all be exellent
That was definately interesting. I really liked it. I hope you write more stories, cause I would definately read more by you.
a little odd... but i like it!
there should be a sequel. this was kinda short, especially for a one-shot. but overall very good. =)
I like your story. But if Regulus wasn't a coward, how come he was "drawn in to the circle of codless pricks with nothing better to do with their time than follow a seventh of a man without a single stone in his sack." If he wasn't a coward, then how come he hid his acceptance of Muggles from those people? I think maybe he started off as a coward, but ended his life being brave - by stealing the horcrux he defied his Dark Lord, and who else really has gone from supporting him to defying him?
Interesting. You've taken a character we know almost nothing about, and well given him a life. A very nice resentful attitude, "hapless fool" indeed, I like...
But if Regulus is "never a coward," wouldn't he have told Anna he won't come back? ha jk it's alright.
Very nice, very entertaining.
okay i haven't even finished reading, i got to phony idiots and i have to say
(oh btw not an insult, i'm very amused)