Good job, and an interesting portrayl of my favorite character. I've never quite imagined Regulus that way, I've always seen him as soo innocent sex-wise. Yes, I know, poor blind me. This way makes much more sense. Nobody's completely innocent, right? Anyway, your writing was good, and the last line tied things up nicely, and the idea of him going to see a Muggle was very original. Good job!

That was definately interesting. I really liked it. I hope you write more stories, cause I would definately read more by you.

I like your story. But if Regulus wasn't a coward, how come he was "drawn in to the circle of codless pricks with nothing better to do with their time than follow a seventh of a man without a single stone in his sack." If he wasn't a coward, then how come he hid his acceptance of Muggles from those people? I think maybe he started off as a coward, but ended his life being brave - by stealing the horcrux he defied his Dark Lord, and who else really has gone from supporting him to defying him?

okay i haven't even finished reading, i got to phony idiots and i have to say

Holden Caulfield?

(oh btw not an insult, i'm very amused)