Reviewer: x0molly
Date: 04/03/09 15:09
Chapter: Forever on the Closed Ward


This is so sad but so good!
I wish this weren't a one-shot...I'd love to have seen this chaptered!

---x0molly b29;

Reviewer: Leah_Lovegood
Date: 02/01/09 16:13
Chapter: Forever on the Closed Ward

That was really, really good. It was the perfect length, too. It was short, but in a really, really good way. Heartwarming and sad.

Reviewer: roXtar
Date: 01/17/09 20:08
Chapter: Forever on the Closed Ward

wow.... I'm about to cry.... great job.. that was really powerful, you're an amazing story-writer

Reviewer: Shades_Of_Gray
Date: 01/17/09 9:48
Chapter: Forever on the Closed Ward

Really great job. So sad!!

Reviewer: thesmart1
Date: 12/29/08 20:56
Chapter: Forever on the Closed Ward

ohhh thats so saddddd! I liked it, in that it was written well, but now i'm sad..

Reviewer: MorganRay
Date: 12/28/08 1:04
Chapter: Forever on the Closed Ward

I usually can find something to pick apart in a review, but this story was so well written. You didn't waste words, and every sentence felt as if it had meaning. I liked how you didn't directly tell the reader that Brian was Harry's son because the moment I figured it out sent chills down my spine.

I liked how you dealt with mental illness in this fic. You didn't over dramaticize it, but it you let the reader experience how uncomfortable it can be to to deal with someone you love who is mentally ill. I liked how you treated this subject sensitively, but with enough depth to allow the reader to emphacize with Brian.

Reviewer: Lazy Lazuli
Date: 12/18/08 19:43
Chapter: Forever on the Closed Ward

I really don't care for this fic. I just don't really see the point of this. Harry is mentally ill, that's an interesting area to explore. But what actually happens in the fic has no point. Harry can't remember his son. His son is sad. That's pretty much it. Even other monologues at least prove something. This is just pretty minimal advancement.

Reviewer: XyloQueen
Date: 12/18/08 9:01
Chapter: Forever on the Closed Ward

so sad. but such a wonderful story.

Reviewer: huggybear13
Date: 11/26/08 20:53
Chapter: Forever on the Closed Ward

Awwwww thats so sad!!! please write more

Reviewer: CrazyAnna1
Date: 11/26/08 17:07
Chapter: Forever on the Closed Ward

Holy wow!!! This is a good story!!! Yet you should of added more like what happen to harry why did brian lied and so on and so forth but very ironic. LOVE IT!!

Reviewer: FreshAsADaisy
Date: 11/15/08 6:34
Chapter: Forever on the Closed Ward

O. M. G.
That was so... Brilliant!!! So Brian's harrys son?? It's so sad!! I felt like I was there. Poor Harry....

Reviewer: Lupin569
Date: 10/30/08 19:38
Chapter: Forever on the Closed Ward

I'd like to say I truely enjoyed your Fan Fiction, your writing is very good and I really had a feel of the story. It was very emotional, even brought a tear to my eye, very well done!

Reviewer: sassysorceress95
Date: 10/28/08 16:55
Chapter: Forever on the Closed Ward

EW This is too sad... I don't like it, although it is interesting...

Reviewer: hogwartsismydrug
Date: 10/26/08 18:52
Chapter: Forever on the Closed Ward

T^T *sniff* so sad! so EXCELLENT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *claps hands* bravo bravo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: chimney
Date: 10/26/08 13:48
Chapter: Forever on the Closed Ward

That was beautiful, especially the begining and the ending.

Reviewer: Hormiga
Date: 10/12/08 1:04
Chapter: Forever on the Closed Ward

Bon... je 'aime, mais maintenant, je te deteste,,, c'est pas personnel but i was looking for some cheerfully stupid story to read before bed... and know u got me thinking... ajajajajaja Merci

Reviewer: qtcaucazngrl
Date: 10/01/08 1:27
Chapter: Forever on the Closed Ward

i love that you made his fake last name Harrison... like "harry's son" that was brilliant...

Reviewer: tc015
Date: 09/30/08 18:24
Chapter: Forever on the Closed Ward

This fic is so sad; I feel so sorry for poor Brian and Harry.

I like the allusion to Mrs. Longbottom in the beginning; it's awful to see how sad and lonely she is. I almost laughed at the mention of Lockhart and his autographs; I was surprised that was able to enter the Wizarding World again.

When I first saw Brian enter the hospital, I wasn't sure who he was. I thought might be another canon character. Brian's love for his father is so strong; he must be there all the time for the nurse to recognize him so easily. He's such a caring person. I'm guessing that Brian's mother is Ginny.

the boy could see it in his eyes that he too knew that the clarity was leaving, that the eternal fuzziness of a mind driven insane by torture and guilt would soon return
This line really stood out; it's so heart-breaking to see how Harry knows that his memory is fading and that he can't control it. How did he get in this condition? From the quote, it looks like he was tortured. Was Ginny or Arthur hurt too?

This was such a sad and powerful fic. I could relate to Brian's pain because it was so realistic.

~ Teresa

Reviewer: evester
Date: 09/29/08 17:18
Chapter: Forever on the Closed Ward

that was lovely - very sad, but very well written. Good job!

Reviewer: inkwell94
Date: 09/26/08 18:06
Chapter: Forever on the Closed Ward

crap thats sad....

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