This is an excellent poem! I also love the banner that you have for it. 10/10!~H_o_I_
Author's Response: Thanks :-)
I really like it! Your rhyme scheme is very interesting and different. Very well done.
Just to let you know if you wanted to come down and read it, we will be discussing this poem a bit in terms of rhymind in Arithmancy class on the forums. :)
Author's Response: Thank you very much. I might just check it out :-)
This was an interesting idea for a poem. I liked it, but it seemed short.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review and I might as well admit it; I specialize in short poetry ;-)
I'm chatting with you write now and I love the poem! I like how you say two words that describe the character. I think you did a fabulous job!
Author's Response: Thanks and I've just reviewed your poem because you demanded me to on the chat ;-)
very short but I like it................
Author's Response: Wow.