Reviewer: ginny4ever
Date: 06/28/06 19:52
Chapter: Chapter 1 - Harry's POV

AH!!! Are you going to finish this?? I LOVE IT!!!!!

Author's Response: Yes I will definately finish it, I have half of it written, I'm editing! And thanks for revieweing! x

Reviewer: nadine29
Date: 06/28/06 13:16
Chapter: Chapter 1 - Harry's POV

yay! i'm the first reviewer! And you should be proud of it cuz it isnt tht bad! i like your writing style and you started out nicely--not too boring or too "bangful-ish" if you know what I mean. Keep going! I'll add you to my favourites cuz i wanna know what happens. ..One comment..i don't know if anyone notices this...but i find it easier to read when there's a little space between the paragraphs...constructive criticism?? i hope so:P:P

Author's Response: I do know what you mean about 'bangful-ish' (I think!) and I agree, I'm gonna add the spacing in later! Thanks for reveiwing!

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