a couple of nitpicky things.
Why would James think that Dumbledore is a phoenix Animagus. At least one bizaare reason should be given.
there should be a different DADA teacher this year from last year. The position sb cursed.
But you seem to have Remus doubts about standing up to bullies on target. His reaction is what any victim of bullying would be.
Author's Response: I should put a reason, I might eventually. They're tired and not thinking straight, I know I say weird things when I'm tired. As for Hanks still being DADA, I didn't of the curse actually....
Interesting assumptions you make. There really is no reason to assume that Remus became friends with James and Sirius right off the bat. Looking forward to see how Larry and Remus hit it off or not.
Author's Response: Yeah, it's usually assumed they do, but I thought it would interesting to see if they didn't. Thanks for the review!
This is a great story, to say the least. After I read the first chapter, I just couldn't stop. The whole plot is incredible; Remus being a loner and building a toal wall on his life that only his family knows about. It's incredible! Very original! :) ;) Also, you made Blake a great older brother. And Larry... well, he is a mysterious (and EVIL) character that you have done justice with. This last chapter was really powerful... a story has never made me have such feeling. It made me feel so bad for Remus and made me want to much Larry's face. As angry and sad as this sounds... consider it a compliment. I will be behind this amazing story every chapter to come.
Author's Response: Ooh feel free to express whatever negative feelings you have as Wilkins. The fact that it made you want to punch him is a good compliment in my book, shows how much you despise him, which is the intention. Thanks for the review!
i love all together i hate wilkes he did it
write mroe soon
Author's Response: *Joins in* I hate Wilkins! I hate Wilkins!
I'm terribly sorry... silly me: I meant Blake instead of Bill. =) GOOD JOB!
Wow. Amazing. Just amazing. How on earth to you come up with this stuff? I must say, I am rather jealous... and I don't even know you! Congratulations on making a great, original story for people to wonder each time what on earth will happen next. By the way, I love how Bill is with his brother... it is just so perfect!
By the way, I would really enjoy it if you read and reply to A Couple Secrets. It is a Lily/James fiction. Which brings me to another review: I like how it isn't over-cliched. Lily was probably mentioned a mere two times. It is really great so far!
Author's Response: My brain is a very strange place and comes up with ideas like this. This story actually came from some random dream that I had about half a year ago. Yeah Blake is really good with Remus, ideal big brother. I'll reply to A Couple Secrets, it might take a little, but I will definitely review.
Huh. Okay so Larry is most odd and whacko like. Blake is still better than he was previously. As of last chapter I believe.
Author's Response: There's a reason behind Larry's oddness, but you don't find that out for a while. And Blake has gotten better.
Bugger! Why does this always happen? Poor Remus!
Okay, good so far. Really really good so far.
Wow. That's all I can say, because it is just brilliantly done. Keep up the amazing work! I love the whole Remus as a loner concept, and how Blake is such a great big brother. He better become a maurader soon... LOL! I love it! *adding to favorites*
Huh, Larry seemed so nice at the beginning, then he went odd and now he's evil. Interesting. Truthfully, I read this chapter ages ago and I wrote a review but the site had decided to log me off and I didn't realize it. Then I was lazy and didn't rewrite it. I'm terrible I know. Anyway. I don't really remember what I was going to say. I liked it. And I'm very intriuged about Larry now although logically he'll trick Blake into going in to Remus during a full moon and be killed. At least that's what I derived from what he said. I never said I didn't like Blake, I do, he just doesn't seem to get that Remus needs his own friends. I really liked Remus overhearing the conversation too.
Author's Response: My computer does that too, logs me off when I'm doing something. Hmm... I'm not going to say anything about what Larry will do, but you're kind of close to what actually happens.
holy macaroni i am totally scared of larry as of now i dont like his questions snape he deserved it hes a pure git
write more soon
Awesome! That is so cool. Keep writing!
Evil Larry! Please write more! I almost fell off my chair when I realized that you updated. Best post yet. :)
Author's Response: Yes, Larry is evil! Well don't fall off your chair, there are a lot more chapters coming.
does this mean larry will ruin remus's life? differently?
Author's Response: Yes... very differently.
wonderful story! how unlucky it is to get hit on the head by a bludger. i hope that remus and larry become and stay good friends. when is remus gonna become friends with the other three gryffindor boys? and why is james being so mean to remus, it doesn't quite sound like james...
Author's Response: Tis very unlucky to get hit with a bludger, especially when you're in the stands. And for the other Gryffindors... they become friends soon.
Wow! I love your ideas about Remus being a loner and having an older brother in Hogwarts. Can't wait for next chapter. These past four have been so well written!
Author's Response: Hey thanks for the review! Appreciate it:)
Well, this is great writing in my opinion... I want to know what comes next! Actually, I always had the same veiw or Sirius and James that NoxSomnium did! Anyways, keep up the good work!
(I'm so sorry, I just love commas...)
Author's Response: Well I guess they come off that way from what you've seen of them in Order of the Phoenix.... And commas are cool, all hail the commas! Thanks for the review:)
So, should I be very interested as to why the potion doesn't help immediately like it's supposed to? I was wondering when Blake would get there. Do we get to see him be "upset" with the beater?
Yay, people talking! I love people talking. You know, I tend to think of Sirius being more beastly than James generally speaking. I'm not sure why. Any particular reason you have it the other way around, out of curiosity?
Author's Response: No there's no big reason why the potion's like that, that's just how it works. No you don't get to see Blake get upset, but you get to see the result of it! I've always pictured James and Sirius the other way around than you do actually.
he wasnt chicken wonder whats hes gonna do ?
siriuis is the 1 to talk to him i always fancied him *sigh*
write more sooon