Reviews For Imaginary
Reviewer: bellyjeanie
Date: 02/12/11 20:07
Chapter: Chapter 19

I really liked this. But James, Sirius, and Peter abandoning him when he bit that girl? I just don't think they would. They seemed so understanding about the whole werewolf thing so them abandoning him was a little off.

Author's Response: Well, the reason they did that was because it was supposed to be another of Remus's worst fears coming true. Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Ascendio
Date: 02/28/10 10:59
Chapter: Chapter 19

Wow, great story, I've never thought of anything like it, and thank Merlin Wilkins was defeated in the end! I don't know if I would be able to stand it if he wasn't...Great job at keeping everyone in character, especially the Marauders. The plot is so original, I don't know how you came up with it! Great story, very fun reading.

Author's Response: This story actually came from a strange dream I had. It kind all of spiraled after that and this was the result of it. Oh Wilkins had to be defeated! He isn't allowed to survive :) Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Ascendio
Date: 02/26/10 20:03
Chapter: Chapter 10

I started this today and couldn't tear myself away from it. Very good writing and keeping people in character. Wilkins is quite a scary character...I'm curious to read more about him :)

Author's Response: Wow 10 chapters in one day, I can't do that when I read this. Then again, I can't do that with anything I write. I really loved writing this story so I'm glad you're enjoying it. Wilkins was so much fun to write. Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Abbii
Date: 02/23/08 6:07
Chapter: Chapter 19

Great Story x

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: jmd_1739
Date: 09/19/07 17:04
Chapter: Chapter 19

brilliant! its like jk rowling wrote it herself!

Author's Response: Wow, thanks!

Reviewer: mugglechicka5565
Date: 09/08/07 12:09
Chapter: Chapter 19

good story but the end was kind of a let down. the story on the whole was absolutly fantastic! the fact that you can make me tear up when it took four readings of Deathly hallows to get to me, that means that you Freakn rock!

Author's Response: Wow, you read DH four times already?! Thanks for reading, glad you liked it!

Reviewer: mugglechicka5565
Date: 09/08/07 11:11
Chapter: Chapter 17

WTH! when did it become nessasary for lupinwolf to kill or bite people?! it is very un reasonable. liked the rest of the chapter though...

Author's Response: I like that word - lupinwolf.

Reviewer: mugglechicka5565
Date: 09/08/07 9:21
Chapter: Chapter 11

much happier chapter than the last

Author's Response: Yeah, this one does end on a happier note.

Reviewer: mugglechicka5565
Date: 09/08/07 9:09
Chapter: Chapter 10

Oh My Gosh! do you really like making people tear up? in the last chapter and now in this one? its ssoooo sad! but it was really well written!!

Author's Response: Hmm... others have asked me the same question and I still have no answer. As long as you like it... thanks for reading!

Reviewer: mugglechicka5565
Date: 09/08/07 7:26
Chapter: Chapter 6

what a freaken awesome story so far i love the change of views from your other stories

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: mugglechicka5565
Date: 09/07/07 18:47
Chapter: Chapter 2

good story so far. i still belive that you have talent. keep writing stories, i would love to read them.

Author's Response: Glad you still think I have talent. I'm actually considering writing a songfic... you may see it on here one day. Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Lady Granger
Date: 08/09/07 15:30
Chapter: Chapter 19

This was an amazing story, and this last chapter was no exception. The message that was conveyed during it, the way young-Lupin said it, well, all I can say is that you put an amazing message into this story! I really, really, loved it.

Author's Response: I always thought that'd be the kind of thing Remus would do or the message he would try to give. Thanks for reading, glad you liked it!

Reviewer: muggler180
Date: 06/13/07 10:50
Chapter: Chapter 19

The story was really good, but really sad exspecially when Blake died. Also after Remus attacked the girl. I stayed up until 3:00 in the morning to finish it i couldn't stop. I fell asleep with two chapters to go, but finished as soon as i woke up

Author's Response: It is sad when Blake dies, he was so cool. Wow, three in the morning? *Claps* Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Ginny_N_Harry
Date: 04/23/07 19:41
Chapter: Chapter 19

That was an amazing story, Congratulations!

Author's Response: I appreciate your congrats, glad you liked it.

Reviewer: Fiffer Haliwell
Date: 03/20/07 17:12
Chapter: Chapter 19

I don't know how many hours straight i've been reading this but i bet my eyes are square by now. Anyway i really did love this story it made me laugh, cry, and cring in anger and hatred (towards Wilkins mostly, although James and Remus' father got their fare share of ranting from me) I do love the ending i thought Remus would ask for people to remember the fearnck but i liked his wish much better. I think you should do like a one-shot sequal about the day he explains to his family what really happened. I know i would certainly love to read that. ok some information you might want to know Favorite characters: Blake, Lucy, Sirius, Wilkings was a suberb bad guy if you know what i mean, least favorite: this time around James and Remus' father. Anywaygreat job.

Author's Response: Wow, I hope your eyes get back to their original shape :) Remus's father wasn't really a bad guy, but he could be disliked for the way he acted at some points, and James too. A one-shot sequel would be pretty interesting. I'm glad you think Wilkins was a great bad guy, I know exactly what you mean by that. Thanks for reading!

Author's Response: Wow, I hope your eyes get back to their original shape :) Remus's father wasn't really a bad guy, but he could be disliked for the way he acted at some points, and James too. A one-shot sequel would be pretty interesting. I'm glad you think Wilkins was a great bad guy, I know exactly what you mean by that. Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Pick Up A Potter
Date: 03/16/07 11:27
Chapter: Chapter 19

This is really good you are a master writer

Author's Response: Wow, no one's ever called me a master writer. Thanks!

Reviewer: froggie
Date: 03/14/07 21:02
Chapter: Chapter 19

i have a question..did you make up the 'fearnk'? or is it like a real mytholigical creature (haha that's kind of an oxymoron)?
thanks again for this awesome story! i enjoyed it lots!

Author's Response: No, I'm pretty sure I made it up. I've never heard of it in mythology. Oxymoron!\ real mythology!

Reviewer: Lioness06
Date: 03/14/07 16:09
Chapter: Chapter 19

Perfect ending! I'm glad you didn't make it too happy, but a realistic happy...if that makes sense...because his life didn't turn perfect the moment Wilkin's was defeated. Remus still had to put in some effort to fix the problems in his life, but in the same instance you know that Remus is going to be ok. And I liked how you had Remus approach James, Sirius, and Peter about their previous friendship - that definitely took a lot of courage on his part. Thank you so much for sharing this great story and I'm going to miss it!

Author's Response: No, realistic happy makes sense. It wasn't a fairy tale ending but, like you said, you know he'll be okay. You're right, it did take courage for him to go up to James, Sirius and Peter. Thanks for reading, I'm glad you took the time to!

Reviewer: Remmy
Date: 03/14/07 12:50
Chapter: Chapter 19

*sniffs* It's over! I totally adored this story! Ok, so I guess everyone got obliviated when Remus defeated Wilkins? I can't even put in words how much I loved this story ^^ ! Are you writing anything similar to it? i like a good Remus fic =3 !

Author's Response: That's a way to describe it, they kind of got Obliviated, but not in the same way as Lockhart, for example. I may write another Remus fic soon, one that goes through all seven years up until the death of Lily and James, but it's undecided. Thanks for staying with this through the end!

Reviewer: madelynn
Date: 03/14/07 8:41
Chapter: Chapter 19

GREAT ending to a GREAT story! this was fantastic!!!

Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you liked the ending!

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