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Name: bertiebott12 (Signed) · Date: 03/17/07 8:55 · For: Luck Becomes the Winner
I've never really thought about Cedric's feelings before, and this fic opened my eyes to the fact that he might be unhappy. This was great!


Name: ronnyc718 (Signed) · Date: 08/15/06 21:04 · For: Luck Becomes the Winner
Oh, my chest just tightened at the last line. His death is the one that made me the most upset because it was the most... pointless. Bah!!

Great story. I love the idea of him as a writer, and his desire to find someone to share that with.


Name: Gryffinpuff (Signed) · Date: 07/16/06 8:27 · For: Luck Becomes the Winner
I really liked your description of Cedric's appearance in the beginning of the story. I could actually picture him in my mind, handsome and seemingly care-free. I thought the rest of the story was very interesting. You don't usually see this side of Cedric, unhappy and struggling internally, but you painted the scene really well. This creates a whole new sentiment when you consider what happens to him in just one years time. He dies without ever knowing true happiness. Without people reading his stories!!! There were a typos (like in the last paragraph it should be "he thought" instead of "he though") and one or two run-on sentences, but other than that it was lovely! Excellent work =)


Name: maysiriusrestinpeace (Signed) · Date: 06/27/06 14:19 · For: Luck Becomes the Winner
aww poor ced... nice story though yay first reviewer!


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