Reviews For The Horizon
Reviewer: AmberIsAhpNut
Date: 01/13/05 18:36
Chapter: New Introductions, New Beginnings

hello there! u posted on the forum thing. (My other screen name is JusKissMe1MoreTime). so i decided to check out your story! its great! please check out mine too..later on...if they ever accept it! lol

Reviewer: Seren
Date: 12/21/04 2:28
Chapter: Eric

Here is the promised review... your characters are fine, so don't fuss about that. I had trouble reading the story, but that was more the formatting than the story itself. It looks promising - just try to add a little bang to it. Great start, though. :)

Author's Response: Yay! Thank you very much for reviewing Seren =D At least I don't have to worry about the way I wrote my characters so far ;)

Reviewer: wiganlad
Date: 12/07/04 15:30
Chapter: The Horizon Storm

Hi Kororh Sorry I meant paragraphs not chapters doh. I must mention the fact that I like how your mind works in ending the chapter with the discover of Harry on the beach. Cliffhanger or what! !!!

Author's Response: ahh you spoiled who it was! but of course EVERYONE should know who this person with the very thin scar shaped like a lightning bolt! or else they wouldn't be here reading =P

Reviewer: wiganlad
Date: 12/07/04 14:51
Chapter: The Horizon Storm

Hiya Koroth Nice first chapter. I like how you explained a lot of information in the first three or four chapters, good work. If this is your first story, well done. I think you could describe who the characters are a little bit more but that’s nitpicking. I will be interested how the story progress’s. Again well done and keep it up. PS I think that the Neil Banks character sounds familiar to me but I don't know why!! mmmm lol. All the best Wiganlad

Author's Response: no, this isn't my first story. i've did other ones, but never really submitted them online. however, since i was able to get this first chapter up on here, i'll be glad to continue it!! and dont worry about the characters - they'll be revealed soon as the chapters get finished.

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