Reviewer: yukikiyokiralacus
Date: 12/21/08 6:25
Chapter: Harry Potter and the Rival's Redemption

Oh man , the story was intense. I have to say I was really enjoyed reading it. The ending was really good.

Reviewer: Sing Hallelujah
Date: 06/23/07 10:36
Chapter: Harry Potter and the Rival's Redemption

Loved it


Amazing writer
U should sooo write a seventh book version

It would be

PHEONOMANAL!

*SH*

Author's Response: I may, in fact, do that. I'd like to keep as much of my work as close to cannon as I can. Granted...I haven't posted anything in...a year :)

Reviewer: TOMROHT
Date: 08/16/06 15:11
Chapter: Harry Potter and the Rival's Redemption

Wow! Very good. I don't see how Malfoy could've changed this much, but I also don't think he would have, you know, "gone through with it" that night on the tower...

There are several spelling errors, etc. For example, you have a "than" that should've been "then" and "mixed emitions" should be "mixed emotions." And there are a few other things...

Very nice job overall, though...

TOMROHT

Author's Response: Thanks for the spelling tips. It's impossible to catch every typo :) Glad you liked it in general.

Reviewer: hey_mara
Date: 08/01/06 22:29
Chapter: Harry Potter and the Rival's Redemption

very enjoyable

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: dracos_ 1_ girl
Date: 07/18/06 16:37
Chapter: Harry Potter and the Rival's Redemption

damn that was good!!! you should totally do a sequell!! see i told you i'd reveiw!!! lol!

Author's Response: I knew you would :) Unfortunately there will be no sequal to this. It was meant as a stand alone. I do have 2 other trio-related short stories in mind, and a longer work with Original characters so watch out for those.

Reviewer: dracos_ 1_ girl
Date: 07/18/06 13:52
Chapter: Harry Potter and the Rival's Redemption

haven't read it yet but i read that you had a story on a review to lunas truth or dare than read that she liked it on your reviews and ilove hutchinson so i'll take her word on it and read the story well here goooos!!! i'll review about it later!

Author's Response: Funny how word gets around :) I too love Hutchinson's work and I really wish Hutch would e-mail or something. I'll be waiting for that review of yours!

Reviewer: PotterFan22
Date: 07/17/06 23:53
Chapter: Harry Potter and the Rival's Redemption

OOO! And also, I loved how Draco Malfoy changed! It was so completely like...real - or realistic or whatever! Everyting seemed like it would actually happen! Everyone seemed completely in character and i LOVED the way they all acted and i love how everything turned out! I completely agree with all the shippings and stuff, and also i love how you made Neville so brave! this was just so amazing!
~Chloe (again)
p.s. don't worry...i'll stop hogging the review page...i just can't stop thinking about how GREAT this story was!!!!

Author's Response: Great! A realistic story was EXACTLY what I was going for, so I've definately done what I set out to do.

Reviewer: PotterFan22
Date: 07/17/06 23:42
Chapter: Harry Potter and the Rival's Redemption

*deep breath* (no seriously, i just did that)

First, let me start off by saying that this story is one of the BEST stories I have ever read!!! It was EXTREMELY well written! I felt like I was actually reading JK Rowling's work!!! It was incredible!!!

Secondly, (I'm weird) sometimes when I read, i have like a soundtrack playing in the back of my head that fits a part of the story. i warned you...i'm weird. anyways, during the middle-ish part with the action and stuff, my back-of-my-head-soundtrack song was the Pirates of the Carribean song.
Then, at the very end of this AMAZING story, it was Rockin' around the Christmas tree...yeah. weird. well, it's just cuz, like, i was thinking of "...let's be jolly, deck the halls with bows of holly..." or whatever!

Lastly, I would like to repeat that I LOVED THIS STORY!!!!! It was so awesome!!!! Please write more stories!!!!!

~Chloe.
p.s. sorry for being weird and leaving a weird comment... hehehe.

Author's Response: *blushing slightly* thank you so much for your praise :) I actually have something of a habit of being able to mimic other people's work extremely well...when I was in High School I wrote an epilogue to Lord of the Flies, and my teacher said she couldn't differentiate me from original author... As for the soundtrack thing, I LOVE that Pirates theme song so I feel extremely greatful that that's the song you had goin in your head...the Christmas thing I don't get though... :D I will definately be writing more. ~~Xicris p.s. If we weren't weird and obsessive, we wouldn't write fanfics now would we? :)

Reviewer: HPIsHowIRoll
Date: 07/13/06 21:45
Chapter: Harry Potter and the Rival's Redemption

I have always thought that Draco wasn't as horrible as he would like everyone to believe... I'm glad you did him justice in a story that gave him a good- but not entirely unrealistic- ending.

Author's Response: Thanks! I especially like that you think this is a realistic event, as that's what I was going for.

Reviewer: Hutchinson
Date: 07/13/06 7:42
Chapter: Harry Potter and the Rival's Redemption

I'm glad I read your story... the description is amazing, like I'm right there! I've got to take notes from you. And the way you had Draco holding on to Harry's wand so he could toss it to him was really clever.

Author's Response: Wow, I was thinking the same thing about YOUR stories in terms of note taking. Personally, I thought your narration was way better then mine. If you seriously wanna exchange notes and ideas, feel free to e-mail me (xicris@myway.com). I'd love to have a penfriend over mugglenet. I could do with some Britishism education.

Reviewer: KJ_bookworm
Date: 07/11/06 17:58
Chapter: Harry Potter and the Rival's Redemption

I really like the idea that Malfoy is able to change. I would love to read more along the same lines. Keep up the good work.

Author's Response: Thanks alot! I figured the way he's behaving in book six means he's sorta on that road, and that inspired this tale. Glad you like it.

Reviewer: heartachin4harry
Date: 07/09/06 16:26
Chapter: Harry Potter and the Rival's Redemption

Very good!!!!!

Reviewer: Soccniki
Date: 07/07/06 15:05
Chapter: Harry Potter and the Rival's Redemption

Great story. I usually don't like one chapter stories but yours was one of the best i've ever read. You should write more.

Author's Response: Thank you! Please get other people to read it :) I like reviews. I'm currently working on something longer taking place 18 years Post Book 7, using a cast of fully original characters for students (the Staff, of course, will have some carryover). Unlike most other fanfics though, none of them are related to the trio (except one character who's Fred's daughter).

Reviewer: Morwen
Date: 07/03/06 17:36
Chapter: Harry Potter and the Rival's Redemption

Very interesting concept. I don't usually read post-Last Battle fics, but this one was rather interesting. I thought that your characterization of Draco was rather good, because even though he seemed a bit OOC, from what we've seen of him in HBP it's easy to see how he could have ended up like this. But you actually mentioned that Harry thought that something was off with Malfoy, so it's okay. There were a few things that bothered me however. You had a few misspelliings, like "Horcrux" spelled with an e, and you said "They were nearing coffin" when I'm assuming you meant to put a "the" in it. But you could get a beta off of the forum and they could help you fix those problems and also Brit-pick. Otherwise, a pretty good fic for your first one.

Author's Response: Whoops, I will go in and edit the spellings to make them correct. Thanks for pointing out to left out a word. I've done that in several places in my fiction before but I thought I'd caught most of them. I'm glad that the only things that bothered you were technical and not story/characterization related. Means i've done my job.

Author's Response: Haha... point in case about me leaving out words, I left out a few while talking about leaving words out! Silly me. the second sentence in the above response should read "Thanks for pointing out to me that I left out a word."

Reviewer: siriusluvr1333
Date: 06/30/06 13:45
Chapter: Harry Potter and the Rival's Redemption

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