Reviews For Isabelle
Reviewer: Tenzie
Date: 11/15/10 4:15
Chapter: One Shot


Reviewer: Afifa
Date: 09/01/09 5:37
Chapter: One Shot

So, I decided to check out the rest of your fics because you mentioned in Finality’s summary that you have other Dramione’s. And I love the pairing and your writing so I couldn’t possibly pass up the chance of reading more fantastic work. :D Anyway, so, to the review.

This fic is majorly cute in practically every manner. The fact that they didn’t have a real relationship and come together in the end because of their daughter, for one. Also, coincidently, they both chose the same name for their girl: Isabelle. And so many incidents.

It’s obvious, right from the beginning, that Draco loves Hermione and wants them to be a couple and also that he wants to take care of their daughter together. But of course, he is a Malfoy and hasn’t changed completely despite him having watched Muggle devises installed in his house and coming to the Good Side, and so is reluctant of voicing out his feelings. So he’s polite and nervous with her. In fact, both of them are too formal, I got kind of annoyed actually. >.>

When Hermione reminisces about the pregnancy and her being rude to Draco even though he acted like a gentleman [okay, that sounds stupid to me since they did have a one night stand, but I’m hoping you’ll understand what I mean] and got in touch with her, it makes me angry at her even though it wasn’t her fault exactly, I guess. But he was trying so it wasn’t his fault either.

Draco with Isabelle makes quite a pretty picture. The way he acts around is too adorable. It really brought a smile on my face. It’s like he’s born to be a father. :D

The ending is lovely. Draco needs a tiny hint which Hermione gives but she’s stubborn and is unwilling to take the first step, but Draco’s fine with her words and kisses her. And the one word dialogues interaction? They just made me smile. :D

Over all, another great one shot! Just a one shot and yet you managed to show us everything—their hook up, the baby, the problems, them ending together. :)

- Afifa

Author's Response: Hi again. Thanks for checking out my other work. I'm glad you liked this fic too. It's very different from my other Dramione stories; it's one of the only cute, happy ones :) Thanks for the wonderful review!

Reviewer: groteskq_fatality
Date: 04/24/08 22:32
Chapter: One Shot

awwwww that was the best.
short and sweet too. :D

Author's Response: Thank you

Reviewer: go go ravenclaw
Date: 01/16/08 8:10
Chapter: One Shot


Author's Response: Thanks

Reviewer: golfergirl
Date: 06/22/07 0:17
Chapter: One Shot

when are u going to write a next chapter?iv been dying to read further.

Author's Response: It's finished. It's a one shot (which I've written both in the summary and the chapter title) which means that there will be no more chapters. I'm glad you liked it though, thanks.

Reviewer: animeHrmIne
Date: 05/31/07 3:40
Chapter: One Shot

Rather... interesting plot, if I do say so myself. I quite enjoyed it, but I think it may limit your audience. But I'm new, I may be wrong

Author's Response: This story definitely has a different target group. But I liked that change from more dark, emotionally tearing stories that I'd written before, to a more light-hearted fic.

Reviewer: mysticmemories
Date: 01/24/07 19:33
Chapter: One Shot

I was here...loved this one too...this was so unlike the other stories you wrote!! its surprising how you morph hermione and draco into their characters..its awesome..keep up the good work!

Author's Response: Thank you very much, Mysticmemories. I really appreciate your kind review.

Reviewer: Lylian
Date: 01/05/07 2:26
Chapter: One Shot

Ending made me giggle. Ah.. love.

Author's Response: Review made me smile...

Reviewer: darkeyes_tasnia
Date: 12/24/06 0:37
Chapter: One Shot

nice job. i love how they both chose the name Isabelle without knowing the other did as well. i liked the ending too. overall a sweet fic, awesome job.

Author's Response: Thank you very much, Tasnia.

Reviewer: Krissa
Date: 12/18/06 9:34
Chapter: One Shot

" He lifted Isabelle up to his shoulder and padded her back softly. “She said something! Hermione, she said something!” he suddenly exclaimed.

“Draco, she burped,” Hermione explained with a chuckle.

“Aww, how cute is that,” he replied adoringly and put Isabelle down again, so he could stare at her.

“Very,” Hermione said, amused."

I love that passage=D And I love Draco's character in the whole story, he is just perfect. I see him as a loving father canon too, I think he'd like to give his children the love he never had.

Author's Response: *Smiles* I like that sequence, too. Thank you, Krissa, I'm so pleased to hear you liked it.

Reviewer: hearyoume
Date: 11/25/06 16:39
Chapter: One Shot

You have such talent! These one-shots are all so different but written so incredibly well. You can write suspense or humor or romance or angst or whatever so well :D
I'm pretty much addicted to these. On to #7!

Author's Response: Aww, thank you, hearyoume! I'm really flattered. I'm glad you think I write all genres well. I do like to try to be versatile in my writing. Looking forward to your review to #7, then!

Reviewer: bettab911
Date: 11/25/06 14:25
Chapter: One Shot

Exciting, fun and really good. This is one of my fave fanfics and I wish there was a sequal.

Author's Response: Thank you very much!

Reviewer: gryffindorlady89
Date: 11/23/06 19:53
Chapter: One Shot

cute. draco is a father? no way! the way you ended this story was different. fragments...

Author's Response: Yes, he is - and it's weird :) Endings are extremely important, and I like trying different things when writing them, so yeah.

Reviewer: JKRsunkmyship
Date: 11/20/06 22:03
Chapter: One Shot

Ahhh... I loved the ending. That was so cute!

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: Lalia
Date: 10/27/06 10:11
Chapter: One Shot

Oh my god, that was just too sweet. Very cute and fluffy. Excellant story :).

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: SmileZ
Date: 10/15/06 20:36
Chapter: One Shot

Whoa... they actually think alike. haha that whole ending is just sweet. Haha.

Author's Response: Yeah... Thanks!

Reviewer: xXcrimson_dawnXx
Date: 10/06/06 23:32
Chapter: One Shot

nice. veeeeeeeeery nice. gets the point across

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: Verde_4
Date: 10/04/06 8:14
Chapter: One Shot

Eimile, I just loved this story. Your aptitude to write stories is wonderful. I hope you're continuing to write.

Author's Response: Thank you very much, Verde! I really appreciate it. I hope you'll read For Innocence We Sin when it's up, which will, hopefully, be soon.

Reviewer: Verde_4
Date: 10/04/06 8:13
Chapter: One Shot

Eimile, I just loved this story. Your aptitude to write stories is wonderful. I hope you're continuing to write.

Reviewer: Helios
Date: 09/26/06 15:41
Chapter: One Shot

ooh..very good

Author's Response: Thanks, Helios!

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