Reviews For Scarred
Reviewer: Drake_Richards
Date: 06/24/06 22:06
Chapter: One-shot

Wow, great story. Good plot line. I look forward to reading futrue stories mate.

Author's Response: Thanks! It makes my day to have people just spend a few seconds of their time to tell me that they liked me story. It motivates me to continue making more!

Reviewer: Lil Red
Date: 06/24/06 19:17
Chapter: One-shot

Wow, this is a good story. It's really well written, but I see three problems. One, there was no reason for ginny to slap Ron...or did I miss that? Two, did Ginny mean Ron was the one shunning everyone? Three, Cho lost Cedric in Harry's fourth year, not his sixth.

But still, really good, although I was disappointed to see that Hermione was never mentioned...

BOO-YA! I got review numero uno!

Author's Response: I think you got confused with the dialogue with problem one and two. It was Ron who said "'I cared about him too! You don't see me curling up into a ball and shunning everyone away, though, do you?'". He was saying that Ginny was shunning everyone, and that made her mad and angry. She lost her temper and slapped him. Problem number three though... my fault! I screwed up bad there. I didn't even realize I'd said that... thanks. And I did mention Hermione once; she came into Ginny's dorm right in the beginning, but she didn't really have a big part. Thanks for the review... it feels so weird to have people review my story, because I've never done anything like this! It's like... 'people have read my story and wrote me about it'... is it just me or is it really weird?

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