Reviews For Unimportant Magic
Reviewer: FanficWriterNikki
Date: 08/24/06 22:31
Chapter: Unimportant Magic

I think I read this on LJ, but you never told me you dedicated it to me. *huggles Liz* I loved it. You write Neville 12743 times better than I do.

Reviewer: pandafan81
Date: 06/26/06 0:41
Chapter: Unimportant Magic

Oh Liz! You continue to amaze me! This was simply perfect! I love how you tied together all the little stories Neville has told us about his family. I especially liked how you described his thinking process. You're so right, when kids are little, if they don't understand something- than it's unimportant. Either that or they'll drive you nuts with questions! :)

I simply loved this! Excellent work my dear!

Reviewer: loligo8me
Date: 06/23/06 21:35
Chapter: Unimportant Magic

Oh this was an enjoyable read. I especially like Uncle Algie's attitude when he's trying to evoke magic in Neville. And it ended really well. Good work.

Reviewer: mcgonagallfan
Date: 06/23/06 1:49
Chapter: Unimportant Magic

That was very well written. I love the last line. 10/10

Reviewer: ProfPosky
Date: 06/22/06 22:33
Chapter: Unimportant Magic

Oh, I adore it! i can jsut see Neville behaing like this as a child.

My one little nit-pick is htat you wrote he was treated to seeing his AUNT yell at someone else for a change. I think you mean his grandmother.

I have a disabled child, and not unitl I read this story did I realize that to a family of wizards and witches I suppose a squibb is disabled. They are a bit tactless, though...
I think there may be something prophetic in Neville bouncing. his first magic? Recovery. When you think about it, he is pretty resilient by time he gets to Hogwarts...

You must login (register) to review.
Information
Find out everything you need to know about the site right here.


We have stories and authors in this archive.

:

RSS
Choose Theme:
SOCIAL MEDIA
     
MOST RECENT
M.I.T.: Entente Cordial by Northumbrian 6th-7th Years
A strange and seemingly inexplicable death in London's West End brings an unlikely...
A Squib's Journey by ntoforhp 6th-7th Years
Jeffery Potter always had sensed he was somehow different from his playmates...
Out of the Blue by Secret Marauder 90 1st-2nd Years
This story weaves the tale of James and Lily from the day they met right up...
FEATURED
Five Christmases by hestiajones 1st-2nd Years
It took four Christmases for Andromeda Black and Ted Tonks to get together...
Coming Alive by The owl 6th-7th Years
Leanne Gamp hadn't wanted to be at that party, even though it was Christmas...
Graves by Oregonian 1st-2nd Years
In December of 1997, Harry visits his parents' graves in Godric's Hollow and...
CATEGORIES