Reviews For Unimportant Magic
Reviewer: FanficWriterNikki
Date: 08/24/06 22:31
Chapter: Unimportant Magic

I think I read this on LJ, but you never told me you dedicated it to me. *huggles Liz* I loved it. You write Neville 12743 times better than I do.

Reviewer: pandafan81
Date: 06/26/06 0:41
Chapter: Unimportant Magic

Oh Liz! You continue to amaze me! This was simply perfect! I love how you tied together all the little stories Neville has told us about his family. I especially liked how you described his thinking process. You're so right, when kids are little, if they don't understand something- than it's unimportant. Either that or they'll drive you nuts with questions! :)

I simply loved this! Excellent work my dear!

Reviewer: loligo8me
Date: 06/23/06 21:35
Chapter: Unimportant Magic

Oh this was an enjoyable read. I especially like Uncle Algie's attitude when he's trying to evoke magic in Neville. And it ended really well. Good work.

Reviewer: mcgonagallfan
Date: 06/23/06 1:49
Chapter: Unimportant Magic

That was very well written. I love the last line. 10/10

Reviewer: ProfPosky
Date: 06/22/06 22:33
Chapter: Unimportant Magic

Oh, I adore it! i can jsut see Neville behaing like this as a child.

My one little nit-pick is htat you wrote he was treated to seeing his AUNT yell at someone else for a change. I think you mean his grandmother.

I have a disabled child, and not unitl I read this story did I realize that to a family of wizards and witches I suppose a squibb is disabled. They are a bit tactless, though...
I think there may be something prophetic in Neville bouncing. his first magic? Recovery. When you think about it, he is pretty resilient by time he gets to Hogwarts...

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