I think I read this on LJ, but you never told me you dedicated it to me. *huggles Liz* I loved it. You write Neville 12743 times better than I do.
Oh Liz! You continue to amaze me! This was simply perfect! I love how you tied together all the little stories Neville has told us about his family. I especially liked how you described his thinking process. You're so right, when kids are little, if they don't understand something- than it's unimportant. Either that or they'll drive you nuts with questions! :)
I simply loved this! Excellent work my dear!
Oh this was an enjoyable read. I especially like Uncle Algie's attitude when he's trying to evoke magic in Neville. And it ended really well. Good work.
That was very well written. I love the last line. 10/10
Oh, I adore it! i can jsut see Neville behaing like this as a child.
My one little nit-pick is htat you wrote he was treated to seeing his AUNT yell at someone else for a change. I think you mean his grandmother.
I have a disabled child, and not unitl I read this story did I realize that to a family of wizards and witches I suppose a squibb is disabled. They are a bit tactless, though...
I think there may be something prophetic in Neville bouncing. his first magic? Recovery. When you think about it, he is pretty resilient by time he gets to Hogwarts...