Ha I totally didn't get it until I read that conversation in HBP. It all makes much more sense now. Great job it was a wonderful story. I thought you did a really good job of concealing who the characters actually were. Very well written. I have to admit that I first thought it was going to be about Albus and Aberforth Dumbledore *blushes and looks at the ground sheepishly* No idea where that thought came from...haha. Anyway, good job! 10/10
wwow i loved it evn if i did have a avgue idea about who the characters were. :) amazing story and i am getting an idea now.
sorry for any major spelling eros im tryin to send this befor emy mom trns of my connectiion!!!!!!
Whoa--creepy, and the friend of the victim will grow up to discover a panacea. Clever, and well-drawn.
Oh I knew it was him! Clever way of how it happened. Luv ur story!
Author's Response: THanks, glad you liked it! And love your name, Luna is one of my favorite characters!
Oh I knew it was him! Clever way of how it happened. Luv ur story!
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I loved it! That took me by total surprise, I had no idea who the boys were. I started to get an idea when you mentioned the name of one of the sons, but I wasn't sure. I loved how you described the evil character, I got a great mental image of what he looked like and how he must of been hideous to look at. Again, I loved the story and I'm putting it on my faves.
Author's Response: Glad you recognized one of the other boys, a lot of people didn't and I included it to tie stuff together
I loved it! That took me by total surprise, I had no idea who the boys were. I started to get an idea when you mentioned the name of one of the sons, but I wasn't sure. I loved how you described the evil character, I got a great mental image of what he looked like and how he must of been hideous to look at. Again, I loved the story and I'm putting it on my faves.
Author's Response: Thanks!
W-O-W. I swear, I was going to cry. That is amazing, and it makes complete sense. A great take on what happened that day. Tottally excellent. :D
~~Lluvia~~
Author's Response: :D Thanks! I thought you might like this one Moony.
W-O-W. I swear, I was going to cry. That is amazing, and it makes complete sense. A great take on what happened that day. Tottally excellent. :D
~~Lluvia~~
Author's Response: :D Thanks! I thought you might like this one Moony.
wow that was great I loved it . it made me sad though and this is my first review although I read fan-fiction almost constanly
Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you liked it! If you have any recommendations for good fanfics to read, let me know
Wow, that was really well done, I really enjoyed reading it. I hadn't expected it to be Remus either, that was a big surprise. Lovely job!
Author's Response: Thanks!
nice
Author's Response: high five!
I thought it was good, you're a great writer.
Author's Response: Thank you! : )
wow that was scary. Poor remus!
Author's Response: I hope you liked it! Please don't use any names in reviews...thanks.
Poor Remus! I hate Fenrir! GrRrRr! anyway, great story!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Oh man, I really liked this story. Very good.
Author's Response: : ) I liked it too, thanks.
Nicely done!
Author's Response: Thanks!
I loved it! This was very well written and shows what an amazing author you are! Keep writing!!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm writing another one right now...I've finished with a prologue and three chapters, so it'll be up really soon.
Oh, you're right about the promise.... *feels stupid* I didn't make the connection!
Author's Response: Don't worry about it, it wasn't an easy connection to make, but I really did tie everything together.
that is AWESOME
Author's Response: Thanks!
