Reviewer: EmeraldFire
Date: 07/18/06 3:09
Chapter: Chapter Four - Happy Birthday Babies Potter

Great story, very nicely done and loved how Harry has so much after all hes been through. Loved how you had James with those abilities, after all his dad is thee Harry Potter and his Mum being Ginny Weasley first girl burn in generations (not to mention the seventh child). Well written and looking forward to an epilogue if you do write one :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your comments, I am so glad you liked it!

Reviewer: lovingu4ever
Date: 07/15/06 14:49
Chapter: Chapter Three - Birthing Babies

hehehe!! i love this story it's really so cute!! i love james he's so precious take it his hair is the same as harry's right?

Author's Response: I just responded to your review of the first chapter answering the questions about James. I am very glad you have enjoyed the story. Thanks

Reviewer: lovingu4ever
Date: 07/15/06 14:08
Chapter: Chapter One - Molly's Family

very cool and cute. you never said what color hair was or how old he was though not to mention if he inherited messy hair like harry's. just curious trying to get the full picture.

Author's Response: James is described in the fith paragraph from the end of the first chapter: Molly turned to the four year old at her feet and mockingly scolded, “James Arthur Potter, you gave Grand-mum a fright.” There was no mistaking this little boy; he had his Father’s and Grandfather’s untamable, unruly locks of black hair. He was already wearing small, round rimmed glasses and his eyes were hazel, a mix of the bright golden brown of his Mother and the brilliant green of his Father, with just a touch of amber mixed in. He held out his arms to his Grandmother, and Molly scooped him up. “Looking for a biscuit from Gran are you?” she inquired lovingly. ---- I hope that helps, and I hope you went on to read ther rest.... and enjoyed it? Thanks!

Reviewer: hippyotter26
Date: 07/12/06 20:31
Chapter: Chapter Three - Birthing Babies

great story...almost exactly how i imagined the weasley clan's future. please update soon!!!!

Author's Response: Thank you! Final chapter is at the Moderators.

Reviewer: happyday
Date: 07/12/06 12:42
Chapter: Chapter Three - Birthing Babies

This story is so cute. I love it. James is an amazing baby. Everyone seems so happy and the parents are so in love. Ron is a great daddy.
Good job!!

Author's Response: Thanks so much! It was always intended to be a "Happy ever after" story. But with lots of possibility built in for the further adventure of The Potter/Weasley clan. Hope you like the final chapter.

Reviewer: blackgem
Date: 07/12/06 5:39
Chapter: Chapter Three - Birthing Babies

Wow! *tears up* that was just awesome on so many levels. Keep up the wonderful job. I eagerly await what you have in store next.

Author's Response: Well, this story itself only has one more chapter...But I have thought about more... what to do with all the kids? I've even thought about asking other Authors to expand on the story by writing adventures about the same characters. SO... I hope you enjoy the final chapter it's in queue.

Reviewer: Ginzig
Date: 07/11/06 8:47
Chapter: Chapter Three - Birthing Babies

Well written! That was amazing. James sure is powerful. I really liked how you had James take Harry's hand and place it on Ginny's tummy and then he placed his over Harry's. Just absolutely incredible! I'm so excited to read more.

Author's Response: Wow! that's for the kind commments! I haven't even been informed that this chapter was validated yet, so you must have found it a read it right away! That means a lot to me thanks. I'll but the last chapter into queue right now. Hope you like it!

Reviewer: dball7
Date: 07/09/06 16:13
Chapter: Chapter Two - At the Manor

Great chapter.Hope you update soon.

Author's Response: It is in queue... I'm trying to be patient myself. Thanks for the support!

Reviewer: dball7
Date: 07/09/06 16:13
Chapter: Chapter Two - At the Manor

Great chapter.Hope you update soon.

Author's Response: It is in queue... I'm trying to be patient myself. Thanks for the support!

Reviewer: lilGryffindor
Date: 07/08/06 11:16
Chapter: Chapter Two - At the Manor

this story was awsome but i wish the next chapter would be validated soon cuz i want to know what happens

Author's Response: It is in queue... I'm trying to be patient myself. Thanks for the support!

Reviewer: The_Dark_Lord
Date: 07/06/06 9:29
Chapter: Chapter Two - At the Manor

i like it
cant wait for more

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the kind words! More should be here soon.

Reviewer: jlovegood
Date: 07/04/06 10:43
Chapter: Chapter Two - At the Manor

Ah, that's good. Well, the chapter. I assume that Ginny's labor will go alright. Can't wait for the next chapter to be validated!

Author's Response: It’s on its way, I hope you like it! Don’t expect it to be too easy. But then again, as Ron said “We are talking about freakin’ Harry Potter here.”

Reviewer: Ginzig
Date: 07/04/06 7:57
Chapter: Chapter Two - At the Manor

Yeah!! I knew she was having a baby, just not twins! I'm sure James is right and they are girls. I really enjoyed how Arthur's words had such an impact on Harry. The Weasleys are a great bunch, very supportive. I so can't wait for the next chapter.

Author's Response: One of the greatest joys I’ve had in writing this is being able to portray all these original characters as adults. (Well all the wonderful grandchildren not withstanding.) I was especially happy with Ron, and what sort of a man I think he would become, especially with a devoted and intelligent soul-mate such as Hermione. I wanted him to have a confidence and clarity that he lacked as a youth. I hope that came through? And of course the Weasleys are a special family! I hope you enjoy the rest of the story. The next chapter is already to the Moderators. Hopefully it will appear soon. Thanks for the comments!

Reviewer: Bookwormy
Date: 07/04/06 7:26
Chapter: Chapter One - Molly's Family

Oh...Bill's gone..but I know that's necessary for the story.
And gosh! How did you think up all the names for sooooooo many kids?
Those Weasely kids being born on the same day was a nice idea!

Author's Response: I know… I’m sorry, but I felt the Weasley’s must have experienced at least one loss of a family member to the war. I debated for a long time who it should be and I finally decided on Bill only because he was a practiced curse breaker and would have been prominent in the war. But at least he left a legacy in Juliette, and obviously Fleur and Juliette would be Weasleys forever, that is just the Weasley way. I am glad you enjoy the story. The next chapter is in queue, and I hope will be validated soon!

Reviewer: MarsPro
Date: 07/04/06 6:37
Chapter: Chapter One - Molly's Family

Excellent work. I especially like the wall of Molly's clocks. Your descriptions are so vivid they remind me of my own family. -Mars

Author's Response: Thanks for the kind words! I am glad you liked the clocks. That was a detail I wanted to add so badly. I figured if Molly’s original Grandfather clock had been destroyed it made sense that it be replaced with a new clock for each of the individual family units. And the idea of all those clocks on a wall along with family pictures would be so Molly. I’m glad you are enjoying the story. Thanks again!

Reviewer: harry4ginny_ylime
Date: 07/04/06 2:05
Chapter: Chapter Two - At the Manor

ha ha ha i love ron. AHH i can't read the next one

Author's Response: As soon as it is validated you can, and I hope it will be soon. Thanks!

Reviewer: potterfan97
Date: 07/04/06 1:36
Chapter: Chapter Two - At the Manor

Interesting story - I can't wait to read the updates!

Author's Response: I submitted it as soon as the last was validated...

Reviewer: snowy_owl_92
Date: 07/01/06 12:55
Chapter: Chapter One - Molly's Family

sooo many children. sooo confusing! i've already forgotten all the names and who is whos children! i only remember james. that's an easy one to remember of course. update soon!

Author's Response: It's okay you don't have to keep them straight. The whole point is that there a lot's of Weasley grandchildren, which is exaclty as Molly would have it. Jamie is the imprtant one for the rest of the story, so I am glad you can focus on him. Personally I have a real; warm spot in my heart for Abigail and Billy, but I suppose that's only becasue they are Ron and Hermione's. Please keep reading, The next chapter is with the moderators and the whole story is written so the only delay in its posting will be waiting for validation. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: peskypetunia
Date: 06/28/06 20:32
Chapter: Chapter One - Molly's Family

Interesting! I really like the start you have going here. I want to see how you play this out. I'll be watching your story! Good Job!

Author's Response: Thank you! I hope you will enjoy the rest.

Reviewer: griffindor_sweety
Date: 06/28/06 14:31
Chapter: Chapter One - Molly's Family

great kinda weird but great all the same

Author's Response: Thanks

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